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1 yr ago
Current When it is time to write, I want to worldbuild. When it is time to worldbuild, I want to collab. When it is time to collab, I want to write. This is the cycle. These are the rules.
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1 yr ago
Do not kill the part of you that is cringe. Kill the part that cringes.
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2 yrs ago
Sad to say I'm currently experiencing Writer's Block. Luckily I learned Writer's Kung Fu and I can chop the block in half with my hands like Bruce Lee
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3 yrs ago
Why is the sun like bread? It rises in the yeast, and sets in the waist. Haha! Isn't that so cute? Join my RP or more puns will come.
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3 yrs ago
What's the difference between a Hollywood actor and a piece of driftwood? One is Justin Timberlake. The other is timber, just in a lake. Hahathisiswhati'mdoinginsteadofwriting
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Bio

Current RP I want you to join: roleplayerguild.com/topics/191461-car…

Hey y'all. I've been at this for about 12 years, and I've played a lot of kinds of RP. I like fantasy and sci-fi the most, just because they give me the most to worldbuild with, but I'm cool with almost anything. I just like writing.

Most Recent Posts

@Jeyma
Looks like Satan is a size 10...


Size 12 in boots, actually.

Curse my freakishly large, clumsy feet. I accidently dropped it, stumbled and practically tap danced on it
<Snipped quote by Jeyma>

That sounds serious. Should I call someone to un-posess your PC or something?


It's too late. Satan has taken it.


Satan really likes fucking with rainbow colored backgrounds, apparently.
And she seems to have tons of good traits and seemingly no negative ones. If your character has so many skills / positive traits, you need to add negative ones to even it out.


My bad, she wasn't meant to seem Mary Sue. I actually really hate perfect characrers, and I never meant for Aideen to look like that.

She has several big flaws. I honestly meant for them to be obvious, but I understand if I need to explain.




For one, she's stubborn and obsessive. I mentioned that her father said she was "stubborn as a tree," and she actually managed to take it as a compliment. This is also shown through her wand's "rigid" flexibility. That's a trait that's going to bite her in the ass, like, all the time.

She's also vengeful. I mentioned that she is "moody as fire" and that she has a "streak of hate."

There's even a huge weakness with her wand: a Hawthorn wand, as said in the Pottermore quote, "can, when badly handled, backfire." PLUS Dragoncore wands are prone to "accident." Her wand is both likely to backfire and likely to fail. It's a deathtrap.

With such a shitty wand, her anger and her stubborness are a poor combination. I can imagine her messing up spells all the time, arguing with authority figures, taking fights too far, and holding grudges across years.

If you really think I need to put more emphasis on those, of course I will, but I stand by what I said: I do believe her flaws are already pretty self-apparent.



As for having too many skills, the only skill I gave her was that she knows a lot about wandcrafting. And... that's it.

I said she's interested in healing people and caring for magical beasts, but nowhere did I say that means she's GOOD at it.
Those aren't skills, just interest. She won't necessarily have any talent for them.

She only has a skill for memorizing shit about wands.




I'll update the history or "worth to mention" section with a short explanation on her family's move.




I don't want this to be a big argument, so I can make her problems a little more clear if you want, but please do consider what I said about her emotional problems and her deathtrap wand. She was never intended to be flawless ;)
@Jeyma -- Looks fine to me. However, I'm sleep deprived and overworked so I'll let @KahleenCuthald or @Bishop take a look at it and I'll trust their decision.


So am I free to post, or should I wait for @Bishop or @KahleenCuthald to approve my CS?

I thought that Muggles could not go to Diagon Alley... that muggle born children had escorts instead?


I don't remember if it's in the books, but in the movies we clearly see that Hermione's parents are talking to the Weasley's in Diagon Alley. It's the scene where Potter goes to buy Lockhart's books.


Low-quality image of muggles in the Alley^^
"Her uncle and her dad taught her the secrets of the arcane, while her mom taught her the secrets of working a computer."



A little short, but with permission, I will probably expand the "personality" section later.
Dear All: My computer is really weirding out on me, so replies may be few and far between. Really sorry!


No problem, I feel you. My computer is possessed or something.

I think part of my soul died writing posts on my phone.
*Cricket, cricket.*


Same.

I don't want to post twice, so I'mma just creepily lurk around the thread... lurkingly
Just wanted to update and let you know that my character is on her way!
@Jeyma *Waits semi-impatiently for a post now that she sees her character mentioned.*


I just now realized that both our characters have prosthetic left-hands. I swear, I didn't even remember that Wolfe had a prosthetic until now.

So, to recap, Rolands left Joy's medical files on the table for Wolfe, but Joy doesn't want everyone to know about her disability, so she's being defensive about it. Your move, Wolfe

She'll probably be a bit nicer in future posts. She's bein' salty 'cause Roland.



@Jeyma


Not trying to start any trouble, I just like thinking of things like this through analogies. It makes implied conflict a bit more fun than simply dukeing it out.
Not much to really do, so I was just thinking about Rolands a bit after what you posted in the ooc.

Bureaucrats are like beep-boops, so its fairly easy to...logic...with them...
idk


No, that's fine. That's basically what Rolands does on the ship. The reason he's such a prick about it is because he wants to be a Captain, but he'll never get promoted because he can't actually lead anyone, even though he has the organizational and intellectual skills.

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