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“An enemy will trap your head in an iron mask, with no holes for seeing or breathing” warned the first oracle.

“A bloody child, born not from woman’s womb, will claim your throne for her own,” advised the second oracle.

“The trees will grow legs and march on the High City,” prophesied the third and final oracle. “Beware the metal faces, and the unborn children, and the shaking branches of the forest. For they hate you, my King, and they will see you fall.”

King Masbeth thought on their words for some time, then ordered the three oracles executed. This would normally be the duty of the royal executioner, but three hundred years ago King Masbeth banished his entire procession from the fortress. It has been a very lonely three hundred years since then.

In the fortress courtyard there is a garden where criminals are meant to be executed, peacefully and with dignity, but it was so very far from the throne room, and King Masbeth was a tired and weary man, and so he decided it would be easiest to kill the oracles then and there. Three swings of his sword; three dead oracles. Afterwards, when he made to tidy up, the King found their bodies were too heavy to move, and their blood would not wash from the white marble floor.

This is what the rumors say, at least—the Dark King of Quishan murdered three innocent oracles who dared to prophesize his downfall. Bullshit, others say. It was his daughters, and he didn’t murder them. How could a man murder his daughters? The shock of the prophecies killed them, right on the spot, and the King just couldn’t bear to move their bodies from where they fell.

That’s when your cousin, the one who always starts fights during New Year’s dinner, interrupts: Your head is so far up your ass I can see it in your mouth. Here’s what really happened...

And so on. There are many rumors surrounding this particular tale (the murderous king story is particularly popular), but to tell you the truth, no one knows why there are three dead woman seated around the throne of the King.

That is a mystery only he could answer.



The heck is all this?:

So! This is an interest check for the End of Sleep, a high fantasy RPG that follows the adventures of a small band of strangers in a cursed land, thrown together by random circumstance and forced to go on—you guessed it—Some Sorta Quest. It is year 572 of the Age of the Widow, and, while only a pessimist would say hope is lost, it isn’t exactly in high supply.


The Age of the Widow:

It started at night. The efertide, they call it, an old magic that emerges every few Ages or so to plague the land of Invernier. When the sun goes down, a dark mist comes out from the sea and the forests, and the unwary are swallowed alive. None of the six previous efernights lasted longer than a decade—this one has endured for over five centuries. Travel at night has become nearly impossible, and interstate cooperation and trade has stagnated. People are reclusive these days, outsiders are never trusted—and that’s without considering the ghosts, the huntsmen, the wights, the werewolves—all the many ills that have descended with the Age of the Widow.


The Setting:

Invernier is a more or less traditional high fantasy setting, though it’s no stranger to technology. Gas lamps, firearms, and even lightbulbs and electricity were all used sporadically in the most developed urban areas, though since the Age of the Widow the spread and use of such things has regressed.

The last 500 years have seen a major collapse in the old political powers. Almost every major royal bloodline has died out, save that of the reclusive King Masbeth in Inger Biotte, who busies himself with mysterious work that puzzles subjects and enemies alike. Though the immediate provinces of Quishan are more secure than most, his power does little to reign in the unstable factionalism bubbling and bursting all across the continent.


How We Start:

Players will begin in a small inn in Alonso, one of the many dilapidated hamlets dotting the lands of the Tempesta. The Tempesta is a gloomy, drizzly, superstitious moorland. Once the great gateway between the south and the far west, it is a land of travelers—people looking for a place to hide, and people on their way to somewhere better. A recent civil war saw the fall of the Army of Heroes, a corrupt military regime that had controlled the region for sixty years. The remaining soldiers, leaders, assassins, and healers who survived the initial purge have since scattered across the land, pursued by the newly ascended People’s Legion.

I imagine many characters will be former trained recruits of the Army of Heroes, or maybe even agents of the Legion, hot on some Hero’s tail Of course, as a realm of travelers, and one of the few places in Invernier where magic is largely tolerated, you can find all sorts of strange folk on the Tempesta moors.


The Story:

Nothing, not even curses, can last forever. One day, the sun will rise. It’s just a matter of who, where, and when.


M A P O F I N V E R N I E R




P E O P L E S O F I N V E R N I E R




M A G I C O N I N V E R N E I R





RPG Standards:
Unless there’s no appropriate way for your character to make a response, players should shoot for about one post per week. I’ve never been very strict on post length though, so don’t sweat it if you hit as low as even a paragraph and a half. If that’s all it takes to accurately and fairly interact with the others and react to the story, then great, nice job.

I’ll be holding you potatoes to quality writing standards on this, so you best be bringing that proper grammar and character development, or whatever kids these days are calling it.

Art:
The art in the banner is by Erikas Perl, super talented painter, definitely worth checking out if you have the time.
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@Drag, @wxps350, we got there friendos. The body count was high, the survivors were few, but darn it if I didn't finally get this done.
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You know for sure I'm with you my guy
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I would like to join in on this! It sounds really interesting.
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I'm here. And Interested.
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@CrimsonAmaranth sure thing! Glad to have you aboard.
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King Masbeth, haha. Clever. Will be keeping a eye on this.
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Wow, this sounds really impressive! If there's room, count me in!
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King Masbeth, haha. Clever. Will be keeping a eye on this.


Haha, yeah, the backgrounds of the regions surrounding the cities of the Nine are each based on a Shakespeare play. Quishan is Macbeth, Milos is Twelfth Night, the High Tombs and the Brown Lands are Romeo and Juliet, eastern Majulin is Othello, the Fib is Antony and Cleopatra, Redemption is King Lear, the Late-Night Desert is A Midsummer's Night Dream, Oolasheene is Hamlet, and the Tempesta is (yep, you guessed it) the Tempest.

Most of the regions, plus their original queen and city, follow or have followed the stories of their respective play, though there're some exceptions/subversions, like King Masbeth in Quishan, who's reigned for 300 years unopposed, and the country of Redemption, where thing's have gotten a lot better in recent years, and a new queen has been installed in Castle Cordelia.

@Sir Dragon Of course! I'll tag you and everyone else interested when the main thread goes up.
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Interested in this. Seems very cool.
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I am no potato, you peanut. Such insolence will earn you the same fate as the three oracles ...in a stew! Also, literature class, which I was in not two hours ago - was talking about Macbeth. Coincidence? I think not.

Consider my interest displayed. Hmph! @Oddsbod
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Haha, yeah, the backgrounds of the regions surrounding the cities of the Nine are each based on a Shakespeare play. Quishan is Macbeth, Milos is Twelfth Night, the High Tombs and the Brown Lands are Romeo and Juliet, eastern Majulin is Othello, the Fib is Antony and Cleopatra, Redemption is King Lear, the Late-Night Desert is A Midsummer's Night Dream, Oolasheene is Hamlet, and the Tempesta is (yep, you guessed it) the Tempest.

Most of the regions, plus their original queen and city, follow or have followed the stories of their respective play, though there're some exceptions/subversions, like King Masbeth in Quishan, who's reigned for 300 years unopposed, and the country of Redemption, where thing's have gotten a lot better in recent years, and a new queen has been installed in Castle Cordelia.


I love it!

Definitely interested.
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Haha oh man guess I'd better start finishing up that God hecking enormous location info sheet.

I'm hoping to have the main thread up in a few days or so, so keep an eye out for all that jazz.
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The sheer level of effort into those artworks (that was made for this roleplay?)and that intro, is this really an impromptu roleplay? Because it seems that this would take some time to plan ...that, or this is just one of those rare things like finding a gem in a garden!!!!!!!
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Are there still any openings available? This seems really well thought-out and interesting. I love how the magic schools are all connected by a concrete theme beyond 'this is the illusion magic', 'this is the healing magic', and so on.

Just from reading that first post, my initial idea for a character (just brainstorming) would be a courier of some sort. Maybe a human, maybe a goblin, definitely with some tangential knowledge of Old Soot (a valuable tool for anyone walking the long roads). He/she wouldn't have been a courier for long, if only because most couriers don't do the work for more than a few years before quitting in terror and hiding from the darkness in the bottom of the deepest bottle they can find, retiring into a life of lazy, well-earned comfort, or vanishing somewhere in the wooded darkness between point A and point B.

As I said, that's just the first idea that came to mind. If it wouldn't fit in the setting, I'll think of something else.
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You can consider me interested, so let me know when it goes up, but I can't guarantee I'll be signing up... I'm starting an rp of my own, sort of a revival of a recent one I was in that died, but with a new story to it. But I'll be keeping a close eye on this.
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The sheer level of effort into those artworks (that was made for this roleplay?)and that intro, is this really an impromptu roleplay? Because it seems that this would take some time to plan ...that, or this is just one of those rare things like finding a gem in a garden!!!!!!!


The banner was a piece of art from an artist I follow, I think just a normal landscape painting, I just slapped the End + Sleep title on top of it. The map was my drawing though, yea. This is actually a revival of an RPG I did about four years ago, but I've done a huge revamp of tone and setting, and the map is a redraw of this old thin drew back then in pencil 'n paper. But glad you dig it, thanks!

Are there still any openings available? This seems really well thought-out and interesting. I love how the magic schools are all connected by a concrete theme beyond 'this is the illusion magic', 'this is the healing magic', and so on.

Just from reading that first post, my initial idea for a character (just brainstorming) would be a courier of some sort. Maybe a human, maybe a goblin, definitely with some tangential knowledge of Old Soot (a valuable tool for anyone walking the long roads). He/she wouldn't have been a courier for long, if only because most couriers don't do the work for more than a few years before quitting in terror and hiding from the darkness in the bottom of the deepest bottle they can find, retiring into a life of lazy, well-earned comfort, or vanishing somewhere in the wooded darkness between point A and point B.

As I said, that's just the first idea that came to mind. If it wouldn't fit in the setting, I'll think of something else.


Yeah, plenty of spots still open. I might actually just let players make up their own spells for the magic styles actually, and post maybe four sample spells there, two low levels, one mid level, then a high level one.

That's a good idea actually, like someone who still uses the great southern road, and helps ferry messages from town to town to city to city. I like it.

You can consider me interested, so let me know when it goes up, but I can't guarantee I'll be signing up... I'm starting an rp of my own, sort of a revival of a recent one I was in that died, but with a new story to it. But I'll be keeping a close eye on this.


Sure thing. Good luck with your revival, hope it goes well.
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King Masbeth. More like King HASBEEN.

I'm interested. I like the idea of regressed technology very much.

Also: Spider people? Yes and yes.

The sheer level of effort into those artworks (that was made for this roleplay?)and that intro, is this really an impromptu roleplay? Because it seems that this would take some time to plan ...that, or this is just one of those rare things like finding a gem in a garden!!!!!!!


I agree. I've been perusing RPs and IntChecks for months and this is the first time I've seen anything worth looking into.

Bit of a French flourish in that name, Invernier. Is it Inverny-er, or Invern-yay?
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King Masbeth. More like King HASBEEN.

I'm interested. I like the idea of regressed technology very much.

Also: Spider people? Yes and yes.

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I agree. I've been perusing RPs and IntChecks for months and this is the first time I've seen anything worth looking into.

Bit of a French flourish in that name, Invernier. Is it Inverny-er, or Invern-yay?


Thanks! Yeah, medieval settings with technological holdovers dotting around here and there is so fun to write and read. Though, to be honest, the name is more of a total bullshit flourish than anything. It was holdover from when the entire continent was gonna be based on Macbeth; Macbeth's castle was Inverness, and I thought, hmm, Inverness, that's a pretty cool name. And then because I'd been listening to the Nier: Automata soundtrack nonstop while working on this, I thought, hey, why not, let's call this thing Inver + nier. Just mash up those names. Glue it together with a hot glue gun. Nuance is for chumps.
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