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Its not the quirk that makes the person. Its the person that makes the quirk.

Chihaiten Academy motto


In our modern day era we are in the age of super humans, people whom have manifested powers as a resulted of a genetic trait referred to as a quirk, of course in such a society there exists the powered youth, such young lings being so common generally leaves them open to taking many courses such as the regular academic route or even the more famous route of trying to become of one of the many high standing heroes of society. The most privileged school of them all being U.A Highschool where many a hero aspires to go in order to get the top quality training and all the benefits befitting people trying to become the protectors of society.

But your not going to U.A, for whatever reason. Instead you are going somewhere else, said somewhere being academy located near the shore named Chihaiten while this school might not have the top end facility that are on offer to U.A and neither does it have the premium luxuries to spend on flashy hero suits with all the latest gadgets but when it boils down to it. The heroes trained at the Academy show some of the largest improvements from their enrolment while also being suitably capable in all manner of fields due to the Academy's focus on the person primarily and the effects of their quirk secondary. Finally, one of the main attractions of the Academy is that it is located in a very scenic area and it is said that the dorms provide one of the best views of the ocean said dorms are open to any student whom has filled out a form and keeps it tidy.

So pack your school bags and prepare for your first year as you train to become a hero whom is true to themselves without any of the fancy equipment masking your true potential. Good Luck!


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awesome I'll try to get a cs up in the next couple days.
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Huhm, its been awhile since I've done anything with yous guys.

This looks cool though, and I have a character I'd like to use. I'll get her a CS up soon probably.
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Kazuo is partially done. Though I need to fix the cs a bit now. Lol
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drawing blanks on what I should do for a quirk but my char is almost done.
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same. I can't decide whether to try and use my character from a failed one or use another I came up with when I watched the show recently
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I like the idea of this character and their quirk so with that being said. They are accepted feel free to post them in the character tab.





The idea of one having to essentially electrocute themselves and then having to run off the speed with no inbetween. I like it. I wonder what would occur if he was made to suddenly stop or if he was acting with insulating materials- That aside they are accepted.





This sheet is mostly fine however when it comes to the quirk I have a bit of a issue with it because your character is able to absorb kinetic energy from his own blows he is able to extremely rapidly reach the upper limits of his quirk with minimal effort because he can use the kinetic energy hes absorbed to subject himself to increasing amounts of kinetic energy making this quirk multiply up at an alarming rate from his own usage.

So I recommend that his cap is lowered at the start (to 3x at most, anything else being seen as too strainful) or the better option is that his gains sharply decrease as he himself increases in power (as in its relatively easy to go form 1 to 2 times strength, but extremely hard to go from x9 to x10)




This Character as well is perfectly reasonable in most cases but I do have one large problem with this characters quirk as well. While I am fine with her being able to produce ice constructs and lower temperature. There is an immense issue with this part "its ace is the ability to freeze even kinetic energy itself" the main problem with this part of the quirk is that this ability would simply kill everyone it affects as the removal of kinetic energy requires the temperature to be at absolute zero which means even if someone survived a short exposure to it they would be at the risk of heart attacks (due to the blood not being able to move) Immense Hypothermia (0 Kelvin is -459.67 Fahrenheit after all) amd finally they would almost immediately lose consciousness. Sadly to say this part of the quirk is a bit on the busted side.

Generally speaking I believe its unnecessary to allow her to slow kinetic energy when she could just as easily use her ice to cause someone using such speeds to lose control and crash.
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@1Charak2 Okay, I added some limitations to his Quirk. Hopefully it's good now :>
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@1Charak2 Okay, I added some limitations to his Quirk. Hopefully it's good now :>


Seems better now. Sure its accepted post it in the Char Tab.
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@1Charak2

I imagine that of he were to suddenly stop with electricity still coursing in his veins, his body would instinctively eject some electricity onto the object that forcefully stopped him (like a all) but only enough as to not kill him. So technically, he would still suffer injuries but he wouldn't die.
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@1Charak2

I imagine that of he were to suddenly stop with electricity still coursing in his veins, his body would instinctively eject some electricity onto the object that forcefully stopped him (like a all) but only enough as to not kill him. So technically, he would still suffer injuries but he wouldn't die.


Makes sense yea that he'd discharge it through whatever stopped him.
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I took out the maximum output and decided, it's better to develop things in the IC. I'm not intending to develop AZ temperatures though, I just let it off right now,

I believe it's much better now. @1Charak2
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Yup its good now, its accepted.
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I look forward for the best of everyone.

I'm curious on how'll an Ice Queen, Mermaid Boy and Loud Electric guy will interact hmm....xD
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I hope he isn't too overpowered.
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@Bornlucky omg, Zen and I share the same birthday...I love him already :D
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