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So, because we are lacking a Marksman

Since fucking when?
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So how Sep does Reviews: What I do is I'll quote your sheet in a hider, and then below it I'll either post 'comments' or 'questions' depending on the quality of the sheet. Comments means there's something that isn't sitting quite right with how I read it, a question means there's a hole that needs filling a little bit.

I want to point out, that the Imperial Policy on Callsigns is that they don't exist. Superior officers should be addressed by rank/name and rank or Troopers of equal/lower rank should be identified by serial number on duty, in private they can be referenced too by name by their squadmates.

Note: A 'Vader Approves' doesn't mean you're accepted, it's my official stamp. @Heat has the final say. I'm not commenting on W.I.P sheets.





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I want to point out, that the Imperial Policy on Callsigns is that they don't exist. Superior officers should be addressed by rank/name and rank or Troopers of equal/lower rank should be identified by serial number on duty, in private they can be referenced too by name by their squadmates.

I'd take it up with Heat. I invented a Callsign/Nickname because it was in the Character Sheet. I don't care when and where it is used or used at all.

While Naboo was Palpatines Homeworld, they were notably very pro-Republic. As her family was a ruling family before the Clone Wars, how did her family/she take the declaration of the New Order.

Considering her family was kind of pushed out of prominence and they were on the lowest totem of the Naboo political sphere of the nobility – they'd probably see it fairly neutrally. You have to understand that the House of Tapalo made deals and concessions with the Trade Federation as a prominent example. That's all based on the canonical information.

As for the Clone Wars and Palpatine's elevation to emperor? I imagine her family has mixed feelings due to their strong democratic beliefs, but democracy at the same time failed them due to a spider-web of Naboo politics. Aysie herself would have been around twelve or eleven at the time the Clone Wars ended so her indoctrination to imperial beliefs would've been an easy go especially since she was already dissatisfied by her place in Naboo society. The Tapalo's likely adapted as adeptly and mindfully as Panaka did when he became a Imperial Moff.

You got anything on her deployment record? Just a little taster of what she's like while serving the glory of our Emperor.

I was leaving that vague for determination by GM and for collaborative viability. I didn't want to take any liberties with assignments.
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@Inkarnate first poimt yeah I know, me and Heat decided it's going to be a point of contention between our chars. Think of how Clones gave eachother nicknames which some Generals/non clones didn't use.

Second point is fine, as is third. All Gucci from me
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@Sep I read on the Wiki under the 'Specialised Stormtroopers' section that Demolitions troopers were often not equipped with helmets, which is why I wrote in my CS that despite them often not being equipped with helmets Corros requested one anyway. I can change that if you wish.
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@Blitzy this is a problem with two current continuities. I'll leave this up to Heat, but from my understanding in the current canon helmets are a non starter.
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@Sep it's probably easier to keep things simple and protect my noggin.
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@Sep it's probably easier to keep things simple and protect my noggin.


It also fits into the empire all as one idea.

In terms of callsigns, I imagine troopers try to keep them on their private Comms anyway rather than letting everyone hear them, because they are against regulations. Cause no military member ever breaks the rules...
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@SepYour comment is noted and appreciated. I went back and added some more detail to Bradlev's history section, roughly two and a half more paragraphs, hopefully it helps fill in some of the gaps you noticed.
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@SepYour comment is noted and appreciated. I went back and added some more detail to Bradlev's history section, roughly two and a half more paragraphs, hopefully it helps fill in some of the gaps you noticed.


To explain why I commented on yours, while finding Webboys fine, Webboy covered the important events for me, and didn't allude to events that then weren't mentioned again. Hope this makes everything clear for you pal.
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@SepThat was never a concern of mine, though I appreciate the explanation nonetheless.
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@Sep fixed the helmet issue (removed that sentence entirely), anything else?
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@Sep fixed the helmet issue (removed that sentence entirely), anything else?


I didn't have anything else.

I think @Heat once he's here aims to accept 1/2 before later in the week.
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Are you still taking applications? If so, I'm interested in giving it a go.
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a) It's kinda cool that you took a small outer-rim world and gave it more culture. Damn you for finding a way to make something exactly like what you want. Though that said, while your image clearly states it no-where in the sheet do you address the tattoos that all Aquellans boast. I feel like they'd be important, especially in Imperial culture of "Closer to the Core, the better you are" where Outer Rim worlds are frowned upon because when in the Academy and such, even in deployment he can't hide who he is or where he's from.


Hrm. I'll take that into consideration, and perhaps add a small amendment to Malik's history to reflect the difficulties he faced when initially joining the academy. A bit about when he got his tattoos wouldn't hurt either.

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Their vitriolic refusal had brought the veritable hammer down on their heads when a Stormtrooper battalion arrived and forcibly freed every man, woman, and child enchained.


Those meddling Senators! I imagine these Stormtroopers just so happened to then be stationed on Aquella to 'keep the peace'?


Yup, that's how I imagined it went. Occupation by a foreign military would be bad enough, but the fact that they arrived with the express purpose of 'destroying' Aquellan culture would only further the divide between them and the Empire. I'd imagine a great deal of their vitriol would be turned toward the Stormtrooper Corps in particular, since they're the most visible form of Imperial oppression; so having one of their own in Malik be a Stormtrooper would be a massive betrayal.

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Welcome aboard troopers! You may all move your sheets to the Characters' tab.

Everyone else, keep working on your CSes, Sep previously has pointed out issues with your sheets but these can be fixed. Those of you that have not submitted sheets yet or have W.I.P. sheets up are encouraged to continue working. Please notify either (or both) Sep or I when your sheets are finished. Sheets that have not been accepted now are allowed to be submitted again with the suggested changes. We shall be doing another day of reviews, that will be the final day in which characters will be accepted. After those reviews have been done then our squad will be filled and character submitting will be closed. Then the IC will go up and we will start rolling right along.

The deadline for character submitting is Friday, October 19th.
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@Heat I've addressed the issue Sep pointed out, but what is it that you feel still needs to be different for my character to be accepted?
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@Heat I've addressed the issue Sep pointed out, but what is it that you feel still needs to be different for my character to be accepted?


Nothing. Heats just not accepting everyone at the moment, to give everyone a fair chance at getting in and making us seem like assholes when it comes to choosing people.
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Nothing. Heats just not accepting everyone at the moment, to give everyone a fair chance at getting in and making us seem like assholes when it comes to choosing people.


Yeah pretty much haha. With the squad roles in consideration, how many people expressed interest earlier (more than expected) and the size of the squad I didn't want to accept everyone at once. Gotta give everyone who wants in a chance to apply then judge them all fairly.
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Yeah pretty much haha. With the squad roles in consideration, how many people expressed interest earlier (more than expected) and the size of the squad I didn't want to accept everyone at once. Gotta give everyone who wants in a chance to apply then judge them all fairly.


Yeah like me and my slow ass >:[
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