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I just enjoy watching everyone writhe in agony from anticipation.

Ok not really, I just haven't had time. I'll try and see if I can get it started tomorrow.
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EDIT:

Welp everyone... ended up doing 2 characters





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Oh fun
We starting?

I'll have a posty post up either tonight or tomorrow morning.

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Come to think of it, I think I'm actually going to make a second character to use. I think I'll write them up fairly soon~
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I have for you, @IceHeart, a second character for your scrutiny.

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@Lugubrious So a few little things I noticed. First Racial classes do have levels so I don't think they can be zero, so that should be changed. Could go over it again with a brush too, few misspellings I noticed like bruther(brother), inter(enter), etc. The dad's Wii must have been one well kept antique since the series takes place quite a bit in the future.

Overall the character is fine but does need a few corrections.




We're starting with game version of Yggdrasil so the characters can experience the confusion of the transference over to a real world. Gives you some leeway to explore how they cope with the situation, or don't.
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@Lugubrious So a few little things I noticed. First Racial classes do have levels so I don't think they can be zero, so that should be changed. Could go over it again with a brush too, few misspellings I noticed like bruther(brother), inter(enter), etc. The dad's Wii must have been one well kept antique since the series takes place quite a bit in the future.

Overall the character is fine but does need a few corrections.


Thank you for the heads-up. I will admit that I was a bit rushed with some parts of her creation. I think I've made all the edits you've asked for.
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omg! 7 posts already! wow

its 3:00 am here, I'm very tempted to write mine now, but I'm also soo tired lol

I'll have mine done tomorrow XD
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@IceHeart
Alllllright, here we are!

I ended up making an NPC for her as well. felt like we could use a few more inherently good aligned guys, honestly.





@Lugubrious
Hm...curious. Senna also has Blood Knight at level 15. I assume this means she also would have these passive abilities of hers? Or how exactly would that work?

...might just be late and I'm overthinking things.
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@Lugubrious
Hm...curious. Senna also has Blood Knight at level 15. I assume this means she also would have these passive abilities of hers? Or how exactly would that work?

...might just be late and I'm overthinking things.


Well, Tea-Tania is like the fourth character with Elementialist - Air or Elementalist - Wind. You tell me.

An obvious solution would be to say they that while they're technically the same class, they were built in different ways. Given the ludicrous amount of customization in Yggdrasil, it wouldn't be out of the question.
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@Lugubrious

Ah...hadn't noticed that.

Yeah, that's cool. I shouldn't think so much when It's 3 AM.

Brain has a habit of not working xD
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@Rune_Alchemist
Looks good for the most part. A few little typos I noticed. One "and" should be an "an". Also there was one grammar issue I recall where there was an extra word in Protection of Faith, a "will" which makes the sentence not work. Other then a little fix up should be good.
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@IceHeart

Alright, should have found and fixed those issues.

Changed the description of a few abilities a few times when I was writing it. Writing it at 3AM probably didn't help, either.

Anything else?
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No, should be good, put it in the character tab.
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Annd a post from me. Decided to get a bit of character interaction going~
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Good to see everyone here is a self proclaimed PVP master. Quite refreshing...
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Good to see everyone here is a self proclaimed PVP master. Quite refreshing...


Heh, not everyone.
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Good to see everyone here is a self proclaimed PVP master. Quite refreshing...


I mean... PvP is one of the main aspects of a MMO for me
Sure, bosses, dungeons, raids and PVE in general is also pretty awesome if done right, but in a MMO where open world PVP is a thing... well... You pretty much need to be able to defend yourself even if your build is focused towards PVE .

PS: I did something XD
Something pretty flashy btw

PS2: Loving all the posts so far ppl!! <3

PS3: Quite surprised that no one noticed the (quite blatant and obvious) reference on my post, lol
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@Thecrash20It should be no surprise. It's in my character's CS.
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I feel that came out wrong lol. It wasn't a negative comment. I think it's good for the Mainstream of Players are as we will probably run into the one who shall not be named eventually. Also it helps our overall synergy, regardless on how improvised it may be.
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So I'm feeling that once we get into the New World, and have our initial posts of discovery and whatnot, we should probably have a short timeskip. Basically just to break up the players into whatever groups or cliques they want to form, and let them set up footholds in the setting individually.
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