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Okay, after a day off and two days of brainstorming ideas for either TMNT or Genosha, I am honestly stuck on picking one because I like both rough concepts that I came up with equally. I'd like to hear your thoughts and see how well they align with the overall story. Based on the feedback, I will select one concept to focus on. If you don't mind, you can review my incredibly rough draft of ideas below.




Just curious, but is there one that you have more of a story for than the other?

I had PM'd Half two separate concepts and based on our discussion, I'd originally thought that I'd be applying for the other idea (I still might). But when I actually sat down and thought about it, the only thing going for that concept was that I'd be guaranteed hooks for writing with other people. I had a story arc, but it was really a one-shot and nothing else planned from there.

By contrast, for Arthur, even though I was actually less hyped for it, I had a branching story concept that could keep spinning out as I needed. Which is why I ultimately went with Arthur.

So that's why I ask, are these two genuinely 50/50 for you? Or is there one you have more of a story for than the other?
Also Jaime.

It's bad enough Ted hangs out with Booster, if he starts hanging out with random teenagers people might ask questions


Ted is smart enough to know the secret to having your genius recognized.

Stand next to the idiot.
@Cyrania

I really want to get a UFO sighting reference into my posts now, but I'm not sure I'll be able to get it in the next one. So there may be a delayed reference to your post in the Arthur tales.
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Have you ever played a video game and instead of completing the main quest, you end up doing all the side quests?

That's how I write too lol


There was a main quest?
@Bounce

Gotta love how terrified they are for Arthur being exposed. XD


Garth.

Garth is being exposed on Mercy Reef and left to die, a call back to Aquaman's original/Earth-1 origin, while Arthur is on his way to school.

In a break from my usual "when will Bounce actually get to the action?" we'll be getting to heroics in the next post.
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You open for Sonic, you also open for Dragon Ball Z and none of us are ready for that.

(Though Ginyu Force and Great Saiyaman, as well as Gamma 1 & 2 would be pretty funny in a superhero context)


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I had thought about a DC version of Goku.


There has to be a Sun Wukong somewhere in Marvel or DC, right? He’s like the single most adapted character on the face of the planet.


Let's not break Half just yet. He should at least get to retain some semblance of sanity for at least a week after the IC opens.

Also, Arthur joins the IC.
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SKIBIDI ATLANTIS RIZZ (part I)
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CURRY LIGHTHOUSE
AMNESTY ISLAND, MAINE

The room looked as though a bomb had gone off in a toy store.

Colorful posters of Fortnite characters dotted the walls, while legos lay strewn across the floor like landmines in wait alongside Jurassic World dinosaur figures. The underwear-clad boy lay on the bed, the sheets spilling over the side where he’d kicked them off during the night. A Nintendo Switch was nestled beside him, its battery exhausted.

It was still dark out. The occasional flash of the lighthouse beacon overhead steering shadows across the room.

The boy’s eyes snapped open, bolting upright as though roused from slumber by a primal alarm, gripping the sheets in terror. His breath caught in his throat, blue irises scanned the shadows as if trying to untangle what he was seeing from what he’d expected to find amid a fog of sleep.

Slowly, his fingers relaxed their grip on the sheets and the child let go the breath that he hadn’t even realized he’d been holding. Stretching his body across to the night table by the bed, the boy tilted the clock up to read the time.

It was the asscrack of dawn. He wouldn’t need to get up for another hour to get ready for school, but he didn’t feel like trying to go back to sleep.

Bare feet pressed down among the bits of molded plastic and discarded toys as he made his way from his room to the bathroom, stumbling around when he flipped on the lights in the bath and instantly regretted his life choices.

It was too early for lights.

The sound of the toilet flushing and the open faucet, as he ran his hands under the water. The view from the window caught his eye as he went to dry his hands. The horizon was starting to form from out of the darkness, a splash of pink and orange creeping up the sky.

And the silhouette of a man at the end of the lighthouse jetty.

The realization caught the boy by surprise, which didn’t change even as recognition set in. “Dad?”

He was still barefoot when he stepped out of the lighthouse, though he had put on a blue Fortnite hoodie so he wasn’t just in his underwear as he met the brisk New England air. Drawing the hood up over the bed-headed mop of straw-colored hair, the blue-eyed child made his way down to the pier where a man stood in a puffer jacket and beanie, nursing a cup of coffee in one hand and holding a cup of tea in the other.

As if he was waiting for someone.

“Dad?”

The sound of the boy’s voice caught Tom Curry by surprise, the tea splashing over his hand as he jumped. “Arthur,” the man uttered.

He’d been crying.

Clearing his throat several times, the man brought an arm up so that he could wipe his face on his sleeve before he composed himself and continued. “What are you doing up this early?”

“What are you doing out here?” Arthur asked, ignoring the question.

“Looking for Mom,” the man answered. A simple, blunt honesty. Gesturing with his coffee mug, he explained, “She came out here to watch the sun rise every morning. Said she’d never seen one before.”

The boy looked confused at the tale. “...the sun rise?” Who’d never seen the sun rise?

“I’d bring her tea and we’d stand here. Me, freezing my ass off and her about as dressed as you are.”

“I put on a sweatshirt,” Arthur noted flatly.

The sun was starting to peek over the horizon, the pink and orange giving way to brilliant gold and amber hues.

“Do you do this often?” Arthur asked, curiously.

“Every morning,” the man offered in a somber tone.

Tucking his hands into the front pouch on the hoodie, the boy looked up quizzically. “Really?”

“You’re always asleep,” Tom Curry offered with a knowing look down at his son. Then, the man looked down at the cup of tea for a moment, before tossing the contents into the sea.

“Come on. I’ll make breakfast,” the man remarked, giving another look at the empty mug before glancing at his son and then starting back toward the lighthouse.

The hair stood up on the back of the child’s neck. Blue eyes scanned the blossoming horizon for a moment. As if hearing a silent siren’s call.

“Dad, what’s over there?” Arthur asked, pointing off to one side of the jetty.

Tom Curry looked back, tracing the path of his son’s finger for a moment before answering, “Mercy Reef. Shoals. It’s why the lighthouse is here,” he answered, simply, before turning and making his way back up to the house.

The child’s eyes stayed on that spot on the horizon.

“You coming?”

The boy turned his head, sparing a glance back to the horizon before his bare feet started back toward the house.

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AMNESTY BAY
LATER THAT MORNING

The entrance to Amnesty Bay was framed by rocks and shoals. To provide adequate warning to sailors, the Curry Lighthouse had been built onto an island at the mouth of the bay, which was known as Amnesty Island. At the other end of the harbor entry was the Amnesty Bay Coast Guard Station.

Arthur had to take a boat in to town to meet the school bus. A bright orange lifevest hugged his small form as he stood on the bow as his father handled the commute over the waters of the harbor.

A pod of orca seemed to be following the boat.

Not an unusual sighting.

“Willy come to see you off again?” the man called out, shouting over the sound of the outboard motor.

The wind swept the boy’s golden hair across his face. Sweeping it back out of his eyes with one hand, the boy called back and answered, “This is Porca. Willy is..." the child trailed off for just a moment, before pointing to a spot of empty ocean as he stated, “Willy’s over there.”

Just like his mom. It was a heartwarming thought.

That still inspired no small amount of fear in the man.

As the dawn light brightened, a fishing vessel bobbing not far off from Amnesty Island caught Tom’s eye. “Damn lobster hunters been drinking again,” the man muttered under his breath, grabbing the radio near the pilot controls.

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FISHING VESSEL IN VICINITY OF AMNESTY ISLAND LIGHTHOUSE, BE ADVISED YOU ARE APPROACHING SHOAL WATER. OVER.

On closer inspection, the fishing vessel looked as though it had been hastily raised from the ocean floor. Barnacles and rust clung to it, from mast to stern. Patched and cobbled together so that it was barely seaworthy.

It was only by the grace of the surface technology that they’d been able to both salvage and comprehend that the crew aboard it were alerted to the fact that they had been discovered.

It was not a welcome revelation.

“Lord Vulko, the Surface-Dwellers have found us,” the sentry posted on the so-called radio announced.

The aged, greying figure at the side of the ship lowered the binoculars that he held. “The Surface-Dwellers are not looking for us,” he stated in a matter-of-fact tone. “We do not know their customs. It is more like we have done something to draw attention to ourselves.”

The senty brought a fist to his chest and dipped his head in respect. “Shall we give answer, my lord?” he asked, not looking up.

“Shoal water. Shoal water,” the greying figure repeated, his eyes scanning around them as he tried to discern meaning from the words given.

There were jagged rocks in this area. Some close to the surface but not visible. These boats of the surface smashed up against them, causing them to sink.

“I think they mean to warn us of danger,” Vulko reasoned aloud finally, giving the senty a scant glance as he said, “Thank them for their words and state that we will heed their warning.”

The sentry pounded his chest a second time, before curtly turning to carry out his task.

A third sailor approached. Without word, Vulko passed the binoculars to him.

Peering through the device, the man soon found a large coral outcropping. Two figures were visible, using chains to strap down a smaller, child-like form that had been robbed of clothing as much as dignity.

Great Poseidon,” the man swore. “Prince Garth lives.”

“The king is dead. Long live the king,” Vulko intoned, his throat tightening with emotion at the fall of Shayeris.

Lowering the binoculars, the man dipped his head. “My apologies, my lord. King Garth lives,” he corrected summarily, before taking another look. Passing the binoculars back to the High Mage, the man noted, “There are only two soldiers, my lord. We can overpower them.”

“It is not the soldiers we see that concern me.”

“It’s a trap?”

“It’s a trap.”

Orm Marius was baiting them. Dangling the slow torture of a child dying of exposure as the lure to draw them into his clutches.

He wasn’t just baiting them. He was taunting them. Making a mockery of the rebellion. “Bastard. I would see him burn in the undersea fires of Kaikata for this,” Vulko mused darkly.

The helplessness he felt was heard echoed as the man beside him asked, “Are we to float here and do nothing?

The sound of the binoculars being crushed shattered the stillness of the morning.

Vulko didn’t have an answer for him.
To be honest, I felt the same way initially! (Especially after rewatching Mutant Mayhem the other night also) But I wasn't sure how to word it within the rules to allow for certain characters but keep it fair when rejecting others.


Wraith touched on this in the "how to be a good GM" post earlier, but whether a concept fits your design for the game is entirely subjective. Its your game. Its your opinion. And it really just needs to be as simple as that.

This applies both to Transformers as to someone reinventing Squirrel Girl as a Green Lantern, who is also an agent of SHIELD, undercover with the Guardians of Galaxy, and the current avatar of the Phoenix Force.
@Half Pint, how would you feel if I played as a nation (it would be a newly-formed Genosha) instead of a character?


I am disappointed this isn't a Krakoa app.

Don't just be the nation, be the freakin' island.
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"Get sendy!"
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Arthur Curry
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Middle School | American

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T H E S T O R Y S O F A R...
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The son of a lighthouse keeper in the sleepy town of Amnesty Bay, Arthur was born into a rebellion that he knew nothing about until it crashed upon the shores of Maine. The only child of Queen Atlanna of Atlantis, Arthur finds himself thrust into a civil war raging beneath the sea and the quest to try and recover the legacy of a mother he knows nothing about. A quest that will take him places beyond imagination, and the discovery of truths he may be unprepared to receive.

The dangers presented were made real when an out of town swim competition in New York turned deadly, with Orm Marius unleashing fire trolls upon the Big Apple in a bid to eliminate Arthur as a threat, before being turned back by the combined power of Arthur, Martian Manhunter, Captain Marvel, and other heroes.

Rather than wrestle with swim team competition or what to think about having been kissed by another boy, Arthur is confronted with the reality that his uncle wants him very dead, as well as newfound fame as the "superboy of New York."

P L O T ( S ) & G O A L ( S )
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The story of a forbidden love between an Atlantean queen fleeing an arranged marriage and a lighthouse keeper in Amnesty Bay, Maine, told in the vein of the Golden Age Superboy stories where Arthur's childhood is the story rather than relegated to flashbacks. Orm is the primary nemesis in this take, re-imagined as Arthur's uncle who has usurped the throne of Atlantis in his bid to become Ocean Master, using Atlanna's flight as justification for imprisoning her and assuming the throne. His quest to eliminate Arthur as a contender to the throne will bring other familiar faces to the story, including Black Manta.

In regards to Namor and Marvel's version of Atlantis, for this concept I'm interpreting "Atlantis" to be like GoT's Westeros, filled with multiple feudal kingdoms vying for political dominance. Atlanna and Orm Marius just represent the equivalent of the Iron Throne. This also allows for physical variation between Atlanteans (think Arthur's typical appearance vs. Garth's Year One appearance vs. Namor's typical appearance). So I'm trying to leave room for any future Atlantean character to be able to interpret things as they may need to suit what they want for their character, while still being able to mix into my lore.

My story will use Atlanna, Garth, Mera, Orm, Vulko, Slizzath, Black Manta, Siren (one iteration of her anyway), the Trench, and even my own version of Sardine from Super Friends. In keeping with past OU games, the Alpha Flight character Mar will appear, with Marvel's Plodex race serving as the OU version of the Brine. Giving away a spoiler, the Savage Land will feature when Arthur finds Atlanna. Everything else Aqua-related is up for grabs by whoever wants it.


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