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It's @Rune_Alchemist's character who had an attempt made on her, and yes, it's very early in life. Looking at your character, I think our ideas could very well mesh together. I'll leave Rune time to look over things, then we'll see where we'll go from there.


Oh pff. I honestly thought both of you had the attempt--my mind just didn't parse that you wanted a nearly assassinated sibling which is incredible work.

@Rune_Alchemist

That timeline works, but definitely different attempts on them if we're all sharing a mother.

I also just realized that calling each other siblings is uh

Just a little redundant
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So, as people whose characters may or may not have faced an assassination attempt: Any desire to play as siblings? I've got a fairly set idea of how the mother's like tho, so that might be a detractor. Just asking for the potential dynamic of my character having innate/repressed aptitude for an assassin having a sibling who suffered to someone like that. Well, even if not full blooded siblings, I'm seeing some good potential dynamocs there :p

Edit: Also for @Rune_Alchemist. Darn phone


Looking at my timeline, it might not work unless your character was poisoned early in their life. However, it's still probably fine if they are brother/sister if you still want that dynamic. Two separate incidents and all that. I don't really have any planned dynamic for her mother. But it's also very tentative. I can change things.

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The only thing I'd be a little wary about is remaining blind even after going back to the past, simply because I wouldn't want you to end up feeling too limited. While there are alchemic healing potions in the setting, and possibly some other methods (I'm debating with myself as to whether or not to include some things), depending on the specifics of how she was blinded it might not be enough. Sensation Type Aura would allow her to regain a lot of functionality, but unless her opponents are also always channeling Aura through their weapons, she wouldn't be able sense something like a sword being swung at her---the Aura sense only works on living things.

I like the idea as a whole, though, especially the take on her being one of the older members of the generation and having an influence on how others treated the ones who came after her!


I would also say that I didn't plan on her to be blind. More that she lost one eye and the other has bad vision. She can effectively never hit a target at a distance (though if someone spots for her, she can probably still hit something distant). To some degree and difficulty, she can still spot people normally (if it's bright out, at least). Probably the most apt analogy would be if she had one eyeball that was -5 myopic (coincidentally, that's slightly better than my IRL vision). That's also to say that she was extremely athletic and strong, but the same incident ruined her body and effectively set her back to 0.

The secret plan is that she's going to


Pretty much I've cheated a little and she'd technically be like a 6-8 XP character, but her own body was ruined to the point where she fundamentally lost every ounce of it and cannot recover to who she once was. So if she was reborn in her 18 year old body, she'd be an actual war hero prodigy. But she wasn't--she was born after she already failed and made mistakes.

In effect, she's not a character who a second chance to undo her failures. She's a character who has ultimately failed before the RP even started and has a second chance to make up for them rather than running away from them.

This is legitimately the most raw, work in progress CS I've made in a long time. I'm only posting it to share the base of what I have with others for the purpose of connecting with other characters better.

The other maybe is that she's a graduate of the academy. The idea I sort of have which I find incredibly cute as an idea is that she comes back to the academy as an instructor to look after her siblings. But if that's not in the cards, I can rework her to pre-graduation.



I'm sort of thinking of a wunderkind/prodigy archer who was sort of the hope of the generation--a little bit older than the rest of the Kaidelings. Sort of a free-spirited big sister who built up a massive ego and maybe bullied her way through her time at the academy (which might be part of the reason why all of the others got bullied!). Only moments before her graduation (or maybe she graduated, depending on the timing), she was either victim of an assassination attempt or otherwise failed resulting in her vision being absolutely destroyed.

This broke her and she basically ran from home to waste away, only to return at the very end in a moment of love for her family.

The main kicker is that she'd come back a bit after the assassination attempt--her ability to shoot her bow and arrow would still be ruined and she has to work around that.
I should probably drop my interest in here too if it's not too late.

and the strange beast


How unfortunate it was that the strangers the witch had met were not willing to be participants in her experiments. Ah well, she thought. The chance to acquire such knowledge would surely come later. The witch was patient, after all. She could gleam knowledge from simple observation. And she observed as the scales were muted and removed by the shaman.

The speech of divines and gods? Perhaps there was a force in this world that was alien to her. Something completely foreign and unable to be understood. Though, the witch didn't take that to heart. Everything could be explained with a large enough vista. That's what she, in this moment, believed.

Then came the scream. Of a beast or monster, without a doubt. The angelic one had plummeted while filling the air with apologies and warnings. Something was coming? Well, the witch was curious.

Though she could not observe without a care in the world now. The appearance of fire raining from the sky prevented that. She instead approached the elderly shaman, but remained distant. The skull-flamed man absorbing what fire rained on him was quite interesting. Seemingly unexplainable which she didn't like, but entirely interesting.

What was also interesting was the bald girl who had decided that moving towards corpses was a great plan. "Corpses do carry disease and parasites, you know" the witch loudly told her. Although smug, it was still a warning that came from a good place.

"Do your best," she announced to the other strangers. It would seem like the witch had zero intention of involving herself with the beastie. Though, she was prepared to rend it just as she had done to her own flesh dare it approach. "Oh, but do try not to damage it too much."
The man in the purple suit and the Saniwa goons were--beyond anything else--bewildered. Though, it was to be expected when a fly small enough to punt rolled up with four knives and threatened to fillet them. An eternity seemed to pass as though the Saniwa were waiting for a question that never came.

Everyone who wasn't Marty was nonplussed. The goons did little more than stand and observe the strange little fly man. A few even stood slack jawed. It was unimpressive--that was saying the least. That wasn't even to mention of the audacity of Beelz's partner in uncrime. Though, it seemed like the Saniwa didn't notice her power-stance a chair with their focus entirely on the fly.

The man in the purple suit moved. His shaking hand lifted a cigarette--partially bent and broken--from his jacket and placed it in his mouth. A golden lighter flickered in his hand. The sound of flint spinning against metal filled the silence. A deep breath, then an exhalation.

"Yea. Get 'em."

It would have appeared that Yam's assessment of Marty's diplomacy was overstating his abilities a little.

As if forming battle plans utilizing henchman to henchman communication, the goons approached after equipping themselves with clubs and metal knuckles rather than any sort of blade or gun.

It was a fight.

One that opened with one of the injured goons charging Beelz with the leg of a table.
Like his previous responses, Sato didn't know much. Though, the detectives could see him take longer and longer to think.

"Hit anyone hard enough and they'll liquify inside. Or enough chemicals will turn anyone to sludge. I know of a few people who'd do that kind of thing. Cleaners. But--you know--professional courtesy." Sato said. "And bouquets? What, is there some new serial killer on the loose?"

He paused--half to observe the two detectives, the other to think some more.

"I guess those Saniwa got liquified and turned into flowers, huh? No other reason why you'd come by. Good riddance. They deserve it."

He paused a bit more as if he was trying to predict the future.

"If you're going to ask if I think the concerned bitch did it, then no. She looked like the sort to kick down a door and pummel everyone with her fists. Or paws. Fuck if I know."

Caretaker remained an overly polite brick wall.
Alphard could tell that the former heir didn't really listen when he gave Sato his name. When asked about the Saniwa, a grimace came over his face. "I stopped thinking about that shit years ago. I don't want any part of that bullshit anymore and I don't change my mind."

Sato spoke more when asked about about the wolf.

"What are you, deaf? What part of wolf says 'human'." Sato unceremonious snapped back at Al. He sighed as he recollected himself. Whatever would get them out of his hair without any trouble. "It's a brown wolf or dog or something--she's a demon. Parts of black. Some bullshit nu-tattoo without any meaning. Large scar on her eye. A few scars on her body--didn't wear much."

He paused to recollect more.

"She had a huge rack."

With his memories now spent, he took another sip of his drink. He didn't react to the drawing of the eye that Alphard had made earlier that morning.

"What, it's an eye?"

The two detectives could tell that the complete non-reaction and slight befuddlement that neither Caretaker--the sheep-like demon--or Sato recognized the drawing beyond it being an eye.

"She cleans up this place," Sato answered for Caretaker. "Rarely misses a spot. Except for the high shelves."

His stool jostled as Caretaker weakly kicked one of the legs.

Caretaker simply shrugged when asked about something not leaving a trace. Neither Kelly or Al could sense any deception. She probably didn't know anything it.
It took some time for Lorelei's acquaintance to arrive.

Quiet and weak footsteps could barely be heard if one was quiet--twice as many, if one counted their own steps on their way up.

"It's been a while." A hoarse voice announced, their tone quiet and slow.

A small figure crested the stairway into the 2nd floor lounge. Someone of short stature, their loose clothing--though every detective knew that the figure's clothing wasn't meant to be loose--hid their figure beyond their surprisingly broad shoulders. Slowly, they continued moving up the stairs, both feet meeting on the same step before trying to ascend the next.

Their skin and hair was nearly flawless; fragments of age spoiled perfection, however. Of course, this was no natural beauty. Both Dezzie and Lorelei knew that this beauty was the result of hours of care and enough product to start a retailer. Barbados? The man's idea of "exfoliate" was letting the wind kick beach sand into his face. Contrary to their appearance, they didn't possess an ounce of youthful vigor. In fact, a light breeze would blow them away.

"Congratulations on the promotions," they said to Lorelei, "or I suppose transfers? It's been quite a while since I last saw you. How have things been going with your life?"

"Though, it's a bit strange why you'd ask me to meet up with some..." they paused as to look up and down at Dezzie and Barbatos, "swingers?"

They chuckled to themselves a little, only stopping as a languidness took them over. Rather quickly, they took a seat.

"I'm Lev," they introduced themselves, "my mother wanted me to be like a lion, but you can see how that turned out."

and the familiar sensation


It would appear that the man with burning skull didn't warp and shift. Strange. Was there some sort of condition towards her transformation? Or did the burning skull give some kind of immunity?

Though, her attention was split between her thoughts and listening to the wordy man.

How many had the witch insulted? That was an interesting question--where it not for the immediate issue one would come across when pondering such an issue. As always, her memories--and lack thereof--said zero. Her heart and instinct spoke towards an unimaginably large number.

"A rather daft question." She rebuked. Her eye flickered towards the manic one before briefly glancing at the man with grey skin. Her movements were exaggerated as if to accentuate whatever malcontent and spiteful point she was trying to make. "I would presume that you could infer the answer on your own rather than belie on rhetoric."

She paused for a brief second.

"Oh, and I speak solely to provoke." The witch rebutted.

As if to wave off the man, she once again turned her attention to the man with flame in skull. To make it worth his while?

She thought for a brief moment to consider how she could do such a thing. Only one thing came to mind. If it was the price to pay for knowledge of the flesh--especially what was esoteric, then she would easily pay it.

"Well, I can't quite do it to you here, but if the need arises..."

Her finger dragged across the top of her other hand. Her own flesh tore and parted as her nail dragged towards her wrist, a laceration forming across the length of her hand. Her nerves shuttered. She could smell and nearly taste her own blood. Yet she didn't pause or shudder. It was too familiar to do so. It was something that was ingrained into her soul. To accept this pain. To not yield to it.

Her blood seeped out of the fresh wound. Before it could spill on the ground, the blood stopped. She held her hand up to reveal the extent of the damage to the man with the burning head and those around him.

Just as easily as her finger tore through her flesh, the blood began to shift and contort into the wound as if time was reversing. But it was nothing as refined as altering chronology. No, it was brutal and primitive. It was just as painful--if not, more. Her flesh stretched as muscle shifted and reformed. Her skin darted into itself to hide what was just exposed. Just as easily as the wound was created, it was hidden. The witch felt every unnatural movement as she contorted her own flesh whole.

"...I can offer my services."

It would appear that she didn't quite understand what the man meant when he said to make it worth his while unless he had some very strange peculiarities. The grin that had formed through that ordeal nothing to help--unless he was oddly into that sort of thing.

As if that display meant nothing to her, she turned back to the altered one.

"And please do stick your hand inside."
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