Fallenreaper

Coruscant Sacked: Aftermath

Howler, hun, I'm sorry to say this but Miraluka are an unacceptable Race. Namely due to Force Sight not being acceptable as a Power in the rp, which they have by default and while I'm sure you'd be able to play it tastefully, it was decided best not allow the race due to their main ability of Force Sight not being allowed. I'm very sorry about that and I will tell Ellri to make that more distinct on the CS Tab when he gets online. Is it possible for you to alter the race while still retaining most the CS?

Create-A-Hero: A Superhero RPG (Closed)

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Yeah, if only I knew what exactly was in that box. If only Robeatics PM'd me earlier today and we discussed what was in the box. If only we planned that later down the line the box would be opened to reveal what's inside. If only.

@Marik

I was talking about writing up to the point where your PCs open the box and then sudden... you write their reaction and end the scene literally before it's revealed what's inside. Ever seen those cartoons where they finally, at the end of the ep, get what they need and go to open the box but you never get to see what's inside until the next ep? I'm sure with all the trouble they went through, they are expecting something worth it. Then you could wait for Robeatics to get to you with a pm, and you can either write another scene that reveals the box's contents or pick up afterwards with what they are going to do with it, still not revealing what's inside though you know.

That's how I would've done. XD

Create-A-Hero: A Superhero RPG (Closed)

Oh man, what's in the box, what's in the box?!

@Marik

Could rp up until you open the box, leaving a cliffhanger?

Create-A-Hero: A Superhero RPG (Closed)

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This is correct

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Sorry, I make a mistake. I need to tag @FacePunch. Please PM me @FacePunch so we can talk about Ares and Polemos! I am so sorry @EnterTheHero! It is obvious that I'm the crazy one! :D

I feel very dumb right now. :(

@Dedonus

*hugs* don't, you're human and it happens.

Create-A-Hero: A Superhero RPG (Closed)

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Fair enough. I wasn't criticizing them for it, I was just expressing surprise if Polemos was going to be involved. Sorry if that came off as rude.

@EnterTheHero

No it didn't, just voiced my thoughts was all. :P

Coruscant Sacked: Aftermath

This will be fun. Also, Genni, yes you can make a Jedi rescuer I would be fully willing to allow it. As soon as Ellri weighs in on your idea in the pm then feel free to start. In my opinion, it's a nice one and would work well.

Create-A-Hero: A Superhero RPG (Closed)

Dedoneus might've been referring to the wrong person. I've done that before. XD

Mass Effect: The Face of Injustice

I'll get a post, small one, up tonight.

Coruscant Sacked: Aftermath

@MonkeyBusiness
bio, 3rd para:
and to caught some > and to catch some or and caught some

Why did she not enjoy the peace?
Try to give a reason she did not enjoy it.

Something still feels off about this flaw:
“Inexperience of being a Jedi at her age”

A jedi of thirty years will naturally have more experience than one of sixteen, but that doesn’t mean she’s inexperienced. Someone can be her age and be very skilled, or they can be much older and have less experience. Had she been ten or so, then age and experience would be much more closely related.

It is far more likely that the ever-present war has affected her training. It probably isn’t intentionally, but the effect is there nonetheless. It might be a better flaw to focus on how the war affected her training and how never truly knowing peace has affected her.

It is perfectly reasonable for her to have little skill at fighting. Her experience in combat comes from being behind friendly lines, not from fighting in or beyond the front lines.

Fallen additions

Personality: I’m not sure if she had that before, and I missed it, but the torture hasn’t started yet so it’s not easy to predict how she will be affected. Namely as the Jedi Prisoners don’t know what the Sith Players will do or what challenges are planned yet. I suggest to make the attitude you mention be more general as in she can be easily discouraged in dark, gloomy situations rather than just because of the torture.

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In addition, the Sith that have been posted CSes: we're still waiting on revisions to be made. These can still be approved as Sith as the reference to Sith being closed was made to any new interest and anyone who's not delivered a solid idea of their PC before it was closed.

Create-A-Hero: A Superhero RPG (Closed)

So I finally got a Lyger post up, he's got a little bit of a mean streak in him. Had some fun writing that one

@nitemare shape

What PC doesn't have a bit of dark in them? :p