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Garnian Salient: Final Hour on Hill 58, August 25th - Hellfire


At first, his boots sank into a small patch of mud before he retrieved them and placed them upon the duckboards that were still intact. He had to hand it to the Imperial sappers, they'd done a really good job with building up the trench's infrastructure and foundation, so much so that the majority of it had survived the incursion. There was credit always to be handed out when it was due. Even some of the Officers in the Federation hadn't lied during their training days. Jean always remembered his Drill Sergeant going on and on about how the Federation soldiers had to use their might, mettle and mind to break down the superior technological advancements of the Imperial war machine. It was a scary thought at first, but now that it was here in practice he couldn't help but thank them for surviving the Federation bombardment prior to the charge. Behind him were Kalisa and Diana, obviously the latter being closer to him after her strange and yet strangely warming confession. He still didn't know how to react to it, as in reality Jean had eyes on both of the lasses in a way that he could not yet decide who truly would catch his heart. However, Jean was still in an awkward silence from the lashing out of Daniel, one that forced him to return with a horrifying realisation of their situation. His mood had collapsed before them all, and for Diana it definitely seemed like it was taking an affect on her.

He dwelt upon the thoughts that Middleton had forced into his system. Their mission was technically a success yet none of the official objectives were completed. Not a single piece of metallic trombones, ones that instead of shooting out the sweet symphonies of baritone brass they unleashed waves of destructive projectile dysfunction towards an adversary, had been found. There was nothing. No one was left alive to fully tell Middleton of where their artillery had gone, but it was clear that there were still some traces of the Imperial bombardment plans still left behind. None of them seemed to be in date, and some were simply scribbles of artillery bombarding the mountain, to which Staff Sergeant Baker imagined it was a memoir of the Federation cannonade only a day or two ago. A strange wisp and silence was left hanging in the air, wind now making the only accompaniment to the sharpish sludges of mud beneath Jean's boots and duckboards.

Jean quietly turned his head towards Kalisa and Diana, signing heavily before regaining his composition to speak once more. He felt bad for leaving the two beauties on a bad note from Jean's own retribution, and so he tried to make it up to them with his own words.


"I really must apologise. A...About what Daniel said, I think you should just ignore it and not dwell upon such tedious remarks as I, myself, will. Having you two suffer could be the single worst things this shitty Lance Corporal has to deal with." He pointed to himself with a sheepish thumb, half-smiling yet still feeling the damage of the realist's words. The Darcsen was taking his two new escorts towards Middleton's general direction, simply out of pure curiosity and lack of any decided route. It was a case of randomised walking, but to where they reached the midpoint of the trench, something strange caught Jean's ears and eyes off guard.

It was as if there was a...a shift, one that altered time, space and reality all around them. It was an instinct that let him feel slightly woozy at first, one that he could not fully explain just from its initial effect. He stumbled, falling back into Kalisa and Diana gently in a stagger. He didn't lose his footing nor did he fall over, but he froze in position, standing still with a concentrated face of worry and anxiety. From what his ears could pick up, there was nothing more than the whispers of the morning winds, slowly caressing themselves across the faces of all the soldiers and trench lines. A coarse underlining of the gale spoke in hoarse tongues, gruffly mentioning a name he could not know. In the thinnest distance, far from their reach, the gently tap of what could've been a bass drum kicked up. Once. Twice. Thrice. Bang. Bang. Bang. All the distant thumps were so gentle and light that there were barely noticeable to anyone who hadn't payed attention. Not even the soldiers around them, many of which who were still trying to calm their nerves or rest their aching arms and legs, seemed to notice these strange crescendos, ones that never made it apparent they were there. He wasn't surprised if Diana or Kalisa could hear it, or if anyone else he'd met so far could, but Jean knew for certain that he was hearing something.

Were they the war drums of a charging battalion, preparing to reclaim the hill they'd simply lost not too long ago? The thought of such an approaching incursion and skirmish left Jean gently unslinging the Longfield rifle from off of his shoulder and into his hands. His face was worried, almost traumatised. There was no telling if Diana nor the Darcsen could fully comprehend his action, but his preparation could've seemed worrying and almost pathetic to the outsider's view. There was no telling if he was simply traumatised from the previous engagement and charge, but he was certain something was up. Was it an orchestration of drums? Could it be? Or was it something else...something far more sinister?

Several more patters of beats could be heard in the distance, and then it came. For a few seconds, he heard it when his eyes and ears looked up into the damp and drizzling sky. A whistle, unlike any other, began to quickly crescendo. It held a high pitch, one higher than the wind itself, as it started to screech out loud. His eyes awoke quickly, and the unnamed soldiers around him suddenly noticed the squeal too. Jean was quick to act, quickly turning around as the incoming screech continued to squawk in immeasurable decibels. His eyes showed nothing more than the fear it had seen once before as his superstitions began to come alive. Those bumps, beats and thunderous claps of the unknown were now rendering themselves as the barrels of distant cannons, unleashing all that they had upon the recently captured hill. And the whistles that were descending and approaching from above? Why...they were the payload, returning the favour of the Federation taking their prize hill.

With hesitant eyes, Jean lunged forward, tackling both Kalisa and Diana to the floor without any gentle behaviour. Like before with the dead Sergeant's corpse, he reacted with instinct and sudden compassion for those around him as he pushed them into the mud, dragging him with them until they all hit the floor. With his arms, he held on to the top of their helmets, covering their faces with his forearm's sleeves and tucking them closely to conserve space. As they fell into the soil, he yelled out the worst uttering he had to since the war had taken its toll on him:


"S-Shit! Artillery, dig yourselves in!" When the three landed together onto the floor, the first impact suddenly went off not too far from their left. Its first collision came with a heavy thunderous screech before an eruption of electrifying noise and desolation suddenly shook the very foundations of the earth beneath them. Already, those who weren't quick enough to react to Jean's call to aid were caught in a state of panic. Jean had buried his two subordinates' heads into under his sleeves, but the only thing he had to cover his own vision was the rim of his helmet, to which it still left him vulnerable to the elements of destruction. Not too far to their left, only ten metres from where they'd previous argued with Daniel, a large shell slammed into the ground and blasted hundreds of small fragmentation all over. Those who were stood next to it, soldiers Jean hadn't seen or talked to before, were either flung into the sky with their limbs and blood flying all over the land or simply evaporated into the thinness of the air and sky. Their screams were shrouded with a thick smog and smoke that left after its landing, but that second shell didn't repent. Soon, more and more began to descend upon the Federation's position. Shell after shell, all landing in a slightly different place from the last, starting to cover the entire area in large vapour. Jean clenches his fists, tightening his grip on Kalisa and Diana's helmets upon their heads to almost tuck them in more. A body landed several feet away from them, thudding with their blood spraying out upon the cowering trio.

Jean felt the soldier's life spread and soak into his uniform. The blood was warm, still so very warm, and could be easily distinguished upon the cold and wet moist of the rainy day. His mind couldn't focus on such tragic rainclouds before more shells continued to pound the land. Again. And again. One. Two. Three. Four. Shouts and panicked screams continued again, this time somehow even more terrified than the charge had initially brought. Jean knew why. This time, there was not even a chance to fight back. These were already fired shells, raining upon them in a hellish demonstration of power, iron death and explosive compassion. Dirt and mud threw themselves high into the sky with every impact, creating almost artificial clouds shaped like devilish and poisonous toad stools. Unfamiliar voices were being cut off as a shell would land near them, peppering certain bodies with fire or fragmentation. It was quick, ruthless and brutal. No one stood a chance, it seemed, yet the lucky ones who'd dug themselves in particular spots seemed to detract the attention from the projectiles. Jean, Kalisa and Diana were all huddled together, held tightly by Jean's embrace of safety and almost paternal desire for protection. As each shell fell, he hoped that none of the bodies near them, nor the soldiers who were still alive, were those who'd been assaulted or shared conversation with Jean only moments before. It was hellish to think that everyone, including himself, had the chance to simply die here and now. There would be no pain. It would be instantaneous. No one would ever be able to say goodbye to him. Jean felt tears stream down his face once more as he grit his teeth in mental agony.

And then...The final shell fell. It landed just beyond the trench, towards the rear side. Jean was unlucky enough to lift his head out of the mud when the single shell fell, reminding him of the death it could cause as three separate men were all tossed into different directions, one of which without a head to even scream from. The gore and slaughter of the rain left him quiet, shivering whilst caught in the embrace of his protective intention. He wasn't sure if Kalisa nor Diana were even alive nor welcoming to his almost engulfing cover, or whether or not they'd been struck by some fragmentation themselves.

He raised his head up slightly more, watching the smoke still clearing from the trenches. There were screams of those who were still alive, likely without limbs or fully enclosed intestines within their stomachs, whilst others were simply coughing from the influx of smoke. It wasn't poisonous, this ridiculous air luckily, however it was definitely enough to force the wind out of their pipes and lungs. Jean looked in fear at the supposed soldier that had sprayed his blood upon the triage of cowering souls. His face was empty, colourless and devoid of life. It seemed that the artillery strike caught him so off guard he hadn't the second to even panic or discover he was breathing his final breaths. He slightly loosened his grip of Kalisa and Diana, knowing that if they wanted to move they could at least wriggle around to adjust their position after the rough landing in the mud.

Despite this, a suddenly few boosteps came from the smoke behind Jean, facing the two female's feet. They seemed heavy, clinking alongside the patronising noise of a ceremonial belt that had recently been scuffled by the remarks and bites of war. What a spoiling way to ruin such a glorious rendition of death and agony for Jean's mind, his arrival was. Middleton was not stood straight as such, and there was almost a combat ready stance to his posture, but he wasn't drawing any weapons of his own. He grabbed Diana and lifted her, simply leaving the two Darcsens to do so themselves, before letting her go to stand for herself without any needed support. There was slight urgency to his tone, one that showed that he too was somewhat caught off guard by the bombardment that shook the foundations of the platoon. He spoke in a course voice.


"Up and at them, lads. Get on your feet. We're returning to the rear lines back down the hill immediately. No hesitation. Move. That's an order. Lance Corporal, when you get to the bottom, wait for my arrival and I'll strike up a casualty count. I'll be the last one to leave this fucking trench, and you better bet that this platoon will not be gone for all I know. Now haul yourselves. Quickly!" And so, he left the two Darcsens to slowly crawl up to their feet. Once Diana, Jean and Kalisa were all arisen, Jean suddenly felt himself lunge forward again, this time however without any intention to push them over. With a strange sting in his fragile eyes once more, the Darcsen Lance Corporal wrapped his arms around both Kalisa and Diana, hugging them tightly as he suddenly breathed heavily with pressure and agony still seething from his lips. There was nothing more than mental stress upon his moralistic mind. Stress in itself was enough to break the poor fellow.

"T-Thank...thank the stars....we're...you two are okay. We're...we're alive." Jean wasn't sure if they'd even have appreciated his attempt at saving them, or whether or not they saw it as a useless attempt that changed no fate of theirs, but he was determined to share his gratitude with them being near for him to simply embrace in cold panic. His voice became frail once more as the wind had completely exited his lungs during the bombardment. He hadn't fully mustered a single respiratory inhale before he finally brought out those words, showing the two that for some strange reason he felt compassionate enough to announce his happiness for their survival. Although they were alive and breathing, Jean was still in complete shock and awe at the bodies nearby, trying his hardest to shield the two's eyes from the situation. Before long, he quickly turned around sporadically, unsure of what to do, before grabbing them both by the arms and hustling them forward through the trenches, through the thickened and bloody smoke, with the intentions of simply escaping. They had an order and this time it was one to finally run from the frontline. New troops were entering the trench and evacuating the dead and injured, whilst many new riflemen, machine gunners, mortars and sappers were reinforcing the frontline and preparing for what would be an apparent counter-attack if the Imperials committed to such an advancement. Jean was hopeful to get all three back, suddenly feeling a lust to not be left alone and cold in the miserable smother of the rain and blood upon their uniforms. His mind hoped for everyone, from Daniel to Michael, Isaac to Mimi, Lucia to even Britta...All of his mettle had shattered in false prayer that his comrades were alive, especially because they were on the path to becoming the greatest of allies. Once the trio scaled the trench walls and began to jog, or rather more of a staggered run, down the hill towards the safety of where they'd started that day off, he looked back at the two he'd dragged with him and almost imperishably called out for their reminders. "W-We're nearly there. Don't stop...we never stop. No one ever stops...Not Kalisa. Not Diana. Not me. We never stop. If we stop, we're as dead as our souls have already become!"

Alright, I'll lay claim to that, then!

Time for work. See you guys later!


Don't forget the discord! We're all in there now!



Garnian Salient: Post-Empire Trench Capture, August 25th - Inhumane


Kalisa, shining a slight breeze onto the situation with her almost...alluring composure, joked if he wanted her to be jealous. Jean hadn't felt discomfort like this ever in his life, yet it wasn't for any negative reasons. It was more discomfort for the pacing of the situation. Everything was happening so quickly and he seemingly had both a Darcsen mistress and a Edinburgh damsel either side of him, talking to him in very different manners. Jean loosened his collar slightly and tried to keep his calmness at stake. For once, it was the first sign of comfort on the desolate plains of human sacrifice. His mind had been fully detached from the previous suffering they'd endured just over an hour prior, and Jean wasn't too upset about that. Every now and then each person needed their breathing room of humanity, giving their soul a chance to simply let loose and show its true colours. Both of the girls around him seemingly knew that better than he did, and as a Lance Corporal he couldn't help but question whether it was okay to have such a playful encounter with such a Darcsen. They were similar after all, so he honestly wasn't too bothered about who she was as a person, neither was he for Diana. But the reminder of his rank also allowed for him to recognise her almost patronising tease of his rank, clearly not knowing his name personally.

Jean fumbled with his own sleeves and ceremonial cufflinks. Unsure of how to respond at first, he could feel himself brighten up as he finally composed his words. For the first time in a while, he managed to speak with clear and almost unhinged dialect. In all fairness, he was quite proud of the way it came out.


"I wouldn't know. Maybe you could tell me? And for the record, I prefer to be called Jean. Jean-Robin Charpentier. We're all destined to work alongside one another, some closer than others, so I'd rather be personally involved with all that the Platoon presented. Besides, everyone needs a guiding light amongst darkened paths, even Lance Corporals. Wouldn't you agree, Private Larsen, ma'am?" He returned the patronising language back to her, this time with a grin on his face. But soon after saying what he had to, Diana suddenly piped up with something almost unprecedented, even from her apparent straight-forwardness in behaviour.

Jean was taken even further aback when suddenly, from the depths of naivety and confusion to her own wishes, Diana seemed to let loose an emotion that challenged the playful situation. His face froze for a second, creasing halfway up its left side as he was confused and unsure of how to react to the situation. It was...different. No one had ever uttered such lustful words, especially in the now quiet battlefields once more. It was almost undeniably adorable, but at the same time it made him uncomfortable. A race of emotions shot from the bottom of his boots and to the top of the strands that spouted from his scalp, beneath his helmet. Jean finally lifted his helmet off, trying to give some air to his Darcsen hair for the first time since the battle fully started. For a moment, he was stunned as to what words he should use. Jean's eyes were clearly taken aback by the sudden sentence, even so much as to garner a reaction from Kalisa. He quickly flashed between the two, but before he could even muster a word, the roughened voice of another male, still within their platoon and age range, cut her confession off.

Taken from the coldness of his tone, Jean couldn't help but be agonised by his voice. There was nothing really wrong with its sound of course, but as a Lance Corporal he couldn't help but worry about the respect suddenly shoved within his direction. Well, he would be lying if he considered it respect. Jean wholeheartedly understood the situation and stress of the others, and the distractions he had before him were simply something that took his mind off of the situation. However, Daniel, as he was identified as, was simply right in his own sense. They were amongst the fields of the dead, and Jean's mind suddenly fractured when the comrade of his reminded him of such trivial behaviour. Jean looked down towards the ground, his eyes widening as he brought his mind out of the colourful environment, before looking around at the murky tones of the world before him. Jean instantly felt himself fall victim to his words, and instantly looked straight into Daniel's eyes. Before he could leave, he made sure he would utter the words of someone who was expected to lead troops, which was still a position Jean was forgetting he held.


"I may be spineless, Private, but I can take what you say to heart. Your words have meaning, a meaning that I must...think and use. But I'm not forgetting that I have humanity down below me. If you have anything against this Platoon, I can change my ways if I must really lose myself in this battlefield. I guess that's all we have left now, isn't it, Private? Are we all required to lose our humanity to do an adequate job? You run along...Tell yourself you have the right mind to kill. At least let me remember what I was like before I had a rifle's stock in my shoulder, iron sights trailed on a living, breathing person and more than a dozen men, women and comrade's lives within my very word. Can you deny me of such small pleasures and desirables in this grim world?" Daniel wandered off, clearly troubled by his own words. It had downtrodden the mood, and even Diana fell to her knees in order to cry more and more. Once again, the temporary happiness he'd felt, for the first time since that fateful letter with the purple ribbons told him of his own kin's death.

Olivia?


Olivia.

Olivia...

The name stuck within his mind, floating around like a lost weather-balloon in the Summer storms, drifting with anguish and little retribution upon its cold, rubbery outer shell. Jean felt...broken again. It was a happiness that had only been temporary, but the realist reminder of Daniel's outburst did tell Jean something. It told him of the true meaning of the world; Jean was no more a man of the Federation. He was a soldier of his own honour, an honour that never existed in the first place. He had no one, as far as he was concerned. Mother and Father were still at home, or so he thought, waiting for his first letter to come back since he joined the frontlines, but Jean was never able to word the horrors before him. Olivia had given everyone the chance to benefit from doubt by writing about happiness, birds she saw soaring through the Spring trees, yet little did she ever mention the violence that took place. Jean was starting to understand. Jean was starting to realise. Jean was becoming the realist he didn't know he would become. And in that moment of silence, where neither Kalisa or Diana, for just a few seconds, said anything, Jean once again felt as empty as before. He left, silently, trudging through the mud without any knowledge of whether Diana or Kalisa were to follow him.

But he was a Lance Corporal. Lance Corporals were not allowed to cry. Lance Corporals were not allowed to show fear or spring a leak in their own security. Daniel was right, from what the Darcsen would figure. As much as the two beautiful angels before him were kind and considerate, even one of them had been broken by his cruel revelation. Lance Corporals were not allowed to cry. Lance Corporals were not allowed to show fear. Soldiers...Soldiers were not allowed to be human.





Garnian Salient: Post-Empire Trench Capture, August 25th - Cruel Realisation



There was little but the smooth coarseness of his chin to move his fingers through. At times like these, he wished to hold a more...sophisticated collection of facial hair to accompany such muses. Only the odd one or two runners from the other regiments further down the line were reporting to him, and others had apparently stepped on several anti-personnel mines along the way. Even in the bitterness of war, however, Alexander felt little compassion for the faceless before him. If there was one thing that his brutish father had taught him, it was that to be a perfect soldier, he had to abandon that feeling of humanity. There was never a moment where a soldier could aim down the barrel of his gun and see a human. As a 1st Lieutenant, Alexander was a good soldier. They weren't human, to him. The Darcsens. The Imperials. Even members of the Federation proved his point. Was anyone here truly that human, or were they the perfect soldiers he was promised?

Every now and then, the almost childish giddy chants of victory spoiled from the lips of the greenhorns assigned beneath him. In reality, he was frustrated at the outcome of the charge. Whilst it was successful, and that in itself was a grand relief on his behalf, the losses weren't within his own ideal's favour. Alexander was dependent on his loyalists. Alexander was dependent on those who had dropped all their will to continue serving their nation with morality and lack of jingoism. Most of them were now gone.

Alexander had spent the first three years of this forsaken war creating his own unique collective of talented soldiers. Amongst the ranks of the 15th Atlantic Rifles, 7th Platoon, were fine specimens who had dedicated their life's work to adjusting to the conflict. Many of the Non-Commissioned Officers around him were hardened and even transferred from his original posting within Edinburgh Fusiliers. There was dedication in their words. However, the charge had not only been costly for his Platoon, and the other platoons who'd been under his command in that singular event, but it had also taken a huge toll on his commanding staff's strength. More than half of his NCOs, mostly compromising of Lance Corporals and Corporals, with several Sergeants, three Staff Sergeants and two Warrant Officers, had been wiped out. Machine-guns had a better advantage than he'd taken, but Alexander was simply glad that his actions had won them a victory. After all, it was about time that the Brass sent him a new wave of boots to be filled from the reserve lines, all from other Regiments awaiting physical assignment.

What frustrated him, however, was not that their deaths were swift and unnatural, but the fact that there was the need to replace them. Alexander had only ever gained a personal interest in two subordinates beneath him: Staff Sergeant Yuri Bonora...and Private Lucia Farris.

The former was his friend, one who actually stuck with him since his first recruitment. Whilst Yuri never intended on enlisting through the Officer corps, preferring to keep his closeness with his own soldiers on a personal level, the two were an instant icon from a young age. Alexander was glad to have a single friend, one who drew his attention away from that perfect soldier his father had painted into his mind and system. It gave him humanity, something to look forward to. But when she came along, almost stealing the youthful Staff Sergeant straight out of his grasp, both of them were murdered in cold blood by the Imperials. The only major friend he ever had was killed. Dead. Deceased. Gone. From that day, Alexander lost that personal touch with his soldiers almost instantly. He headed into solitary vigilance. He dismissed all contact with any former companions within the Regiment, and even transferred to the 15th Atlantic Rifles for such pain he felt. It was the last time he ever felt pain.

Nowadays there was nothing more lifeless than the common soldier. Alexander knew that to survive he had to abandon that feeling of compassion. Staff Sergeant Bonora was no longer with him because he'd associated with the wrong crowd, the lower classed and expendable infantrymen of the frontlines. Never again was he, as an aristocrat and the final atonement of his father's disciplinary wishes, to render himself as that friendly man, trying to protect each individual. When death came by, more and more, from artillery, bayonet, blade, stone and bullet, he grew further and further away from the sensation of human suffering. All that mattered to him was the war. The war was now his life. It was his soul. It would last forever if he could make it, giving him purpose and...life. Lucia had been someone he'd taken from the new recruits pile. There was something about her he absolutely despised. She never shared the same coloured hair as the Darcsen freak who allured poor Yuri from Alexander's safety, but her voice, kindness and face simply gave him the perfect image. She had to be converted into the perfect soldier too. Lucia was just a canvas awaiting Alexander's paint to adjust.

But suddenly, his mind was snapped from its place as yet another runner from the Fusiliers and Vinlander Volunteers approached him with a quick and rugged salute. He handed him a small piece of paper, holding several bits of code and small lettering only he could decipher from first glance. A grin sprung up on his face. Staff Sergeant Baker, one of the few who survived the charge, waltzed up and began to assess the situation at hand.


"Sir...We're awaiting the Sappers to complete their trail and move the artillery up. The men around us are fatigued and tired, but they will stand their posts when you order them to."

"As they should be expected to, Staff Sergeant. You don't need to remind me of how I run my Platoon now, do you?" A sly glare came from his darkened eyes, meeting William Baker's shortly before turning away. They diverted their tense glare, and he simply denied the clearly sarcastic quotation to his report. "By the time we're back on the rear-lines, Mr Baker, we are required to go through a few promotions. Greenhorns will have to fill the boots of those who were...unfortunately lost in the midst of battle. I'm low on commanding staff, so it is a necessity, don't you agree?"

Baker hesitated, shaking his head for a second only to be met with a sharp scold once more. He disagreed, thinking that they required more of the experienced to take that mantle, but even he knew deep down that they lacked such sufficient soldiers who met that quota. Middleton always got the last say on what his Platoon was in terms of composition, and to him it was simply a phase of trial and error. Unless their name was Lucia Farris, he would not make any major attempts to change them into that perfect soldier. She was his exception.

"Soldiers are soldiers, Mr Baker. Nothing more, nothing less. We do not treat them any more than they are, because that would be false. The Imperials are likely to attack us soon, and yet half of them aren't preparing their own defences. The weak die, Mr Baker. The weak die and they do nothing more. I must've judged wrongly if my previous Staff had been killed. Strong men, strong women and strong children survive because they are born, coded and shown such ways. My father did that. Your sister, Mr Baker, seems to be taking quite the roadtrip through emotions. I suggest that if you want to continue being a part of my platoon, and to prove to the Imperials that you are indeed strong, then you must dispose of her feelings. Either she reminds herself that deep down she is to be my husk, my soldier and my loyal warrior, much like the entire Platoon is, or she herself will soon face the mud, the blood and the soil that she stands upon. Wouldn't that be tragic?"

"Y...Yes it would, Sir. I'll...I'll go right away and talk to her, Sir. Just remember that we only have another hour or so left here before we are due to leave. High Command still wants us to Siege out Amone and we'll-." He quickly was cut off, yet again, by the voice of his booming superior.

"Mr Baker...You have a job to do. Go do it. I'll devise my own preparations, like I always do. And whilst you're at it, please tell Private Lucia Farris to join me in the Officer's cabin of the train ride to Amone. She only just came out of training, and as her first battle, I assume she'll need my...expertise to guide her once more. After all...Soldiers do not feel. Soldiers do not whine. Soldiers, Mr Baker, are not human, and can never be such creatures."




Garnian Salient: Post-Empire Trench Capture, August 25th - Awaiting Reassignment


Jean finally realised that she began to stir in her slumber, awakening to see him oddly analysing her from a close proximity. It wasn't creepy in any ways, just a Lance Corporal standing and inspecting his troops, potentially; right? The fellow Darcsen snapped herself to attention. He could tell her descent clearly from the shade of her hair, one that anyone in Europa could realise. It was a strange gloss, at least in what Kalisa's looked like, as she introduced herself. There was something sweet about her almost shining example amongst the murkiness of the mud and soil. Jean couldn't help but find himself smiling uncontrollably at her, with some admiration and almost appreciation for what stood before him. However, for a second, her sweet and formal introduction almost made him feel somewhat important, which was a feature he was still yet to get used to. Initially, he simply led out his hand and held it against his slightly muddy face, which had dried up since in the hour they'd been stationed in the previous graveyard. Jean found some comfort in the beauties around him, almost making it seem life-like and detached from the previous horrors still etched into his head. Nevertheless, he still finally got around to speaking, laughing slightly.

"I...I appreciate the formalities, Kalisa. Uhm...if you wouldn't mind me addressing you by name, it's just easier for my memory. And, well if we are going by formalities, shouldn't you be remembering that you don't salute an NCO?" Jean quickly decided to poke a small amount of fun at her, not aiming to damage her reputation or integrity of course. It was the first joke Jean had made in a small while, almost bringing and revealing that lost life from before. "Oh...and...well please don't stand for me, I just...Well there clearly are more capable people you should be respecting that aren't be, right?"

She suddenly noticed something he had tucked beneath his collar. It was indeed the small Autumn shemagh bearing the Darcsen pattern. The pattern was a sign of peace and camaraderie in their community, but recent years had diminished such valued purposes and sentiments into a symbol of prejudice and hatred. Jean was equally surprised at her keen eye, despite the fact he hadn't really tried very hard to hide it. The Lance Corporal was something of a strange case. Most Darcsens still lived in fear, hiding what they could and when they could. Despite actively hiding from abuse, Jean never hid his true colours or identity and found it to be his strongest quality. Kalisa, the Darcsen mistress before him, had a fount of respect and intrigue, adding relief to her system when she found out he too shared her heritage. It actually warmed Jean's heart a small fraction, making him feel more at home with this figure of modern perfection.

Jean drew his knife, almost spontaneously, and brought it up to his scarf. Whilst unveiling a small part of it from beneath his overshirt, he began to gently tear a small fraction off of his dressing. It was only a small patch of what the scarf actually was, perhaps around 5 by 5 centimetres in size, but it still retained the pattern clear enough to be identified. He walked forward, albeit a little nervously around the fellow Darcsen, and placed it in her pocket located on the frontal webbing. He slightly smiled to himself as he did so, looking down to her as if they'd been friends for years. It was one of the strange bonds of Darcsens, being able to read one another's personalities and share mental struggles, even by first glance.


"Well, I do appreciate another Darcsen being present. It helps me become at-ease with myself, especially in this terrible world of conflict, ones that are really shaking me up. Here...We are in the same Platoon, it seems, so maybe take this as a token gift from me. And besides, I prefer the name Kalisa to Private, anyway." Once more, he smiled and brightened up, though only a little. It was hard to differentiate his emotions and colours from within the muddy confines of Hill 58's peak, but he still attempted to his very best ability. She mentioned his helmet shot that appeared when charging up the hill and his face slightly dimmed, remembering the shock he felt when it first collided close to his scalp and skull. Jean removed his helmet and held it in front of him, scanning the marks where the bullet had skimmed earlier. It was surreal to imagine such a narrow gap between life and death was encountered within his first battle. Honestly, it was a terrifying reminder of what was to come, if he were to make it any further than that day. "It's...I don't think it's done any damage other than...shock. I still am shocked. I'm still alive, and this piece of iron and steel was what kept me from biting the bullet. It's...you shouldn't think about it too much, causes too much worry."

Suddenly, from his flank once more, the second angel Diana returned, somewhat staring at him in a different way to how he stared at Kalisa. She seemed to be nosy, having interjected herself in a comedic way into the conversation. Part of her openly questioned why he was staring at Kalisa, which instantly brought an array of awkwardness onto his shoulders. His face brightened up into a somewhat reddish bliss, making him look between Kalisa and Diana with strange hesitation. Whatever she was getting at, it somewhat took him off guard, making him almost panic on the spot.

"I...uhh...Wait I was...staring? I...uhm...well you see...I just...was inspecting the t-troops, you know...Morale...nothing to do with Kalisa...Uhh...Private Larsen, and her being...uhm..." He started to drift off, shedding his own argument into nothing but byproducts and dust. Almost immediately, Kalisa suddenly jumped onto the train of teasing and questioning, raising her own satirical concerns on his relationship with her and Diana. Jean immediately felt himself fluster and stammer, his hand trembling in awkwardness. He almost dropped his knife, but a small part of control allowed him to sheathe it once more into his webbing. "A-Admirer? Oh well...I think we might b-be jumping the gun a bit, Kalisa. I...I certainly wouldn't put it that way as, well, that way. Why...are you jealous of that fact?"

He did it.

What an idiot.

Jean suddenly slapped himself in the face, realising that he indirectly returned that same giddy fun back towards Kalisa and Diana. He felt himself tense up from nerves as he simply swivelled around on his heels, facing away from them as to let out a grand sigh. Was he really this inept as to facing these two darlings, so far? However, Jean could take one positive from the mockery and friendliness, and that was it took his mind completely off of the previous slaughter and the potential hellfire that was yet to come within the hour or two.


Actually, due to unforeseen implications, I will have to pull out of this RP. I am really sorry, especially seeing as it was just starting to get going. Hope you all have a cracking time and I wish the best of health to the scenario and story!

@Obscene Symphony Alicia Nilsson — Loved her and the fact that you picked a genre that isn't always as highlighted our out there in mainstream music. It fits in well with what I envisioned for Honey Lake artists, not to mention you picked a very cute name for the band. Also want to note, if we don't find you a band, might need you to make some NPC's to fill that void up for the rest of Gramophone.

@LetMeDoStuff Owen Riley — The transitions in his life as a person and an artist is very believable. For me, that's one of the biggest things that I look for in characters, the believeability that they have to actually be a real person. To his emo songwriting, to his not wanting to change himself into a mainstream media singer, but developing into a current artist by also (what I assume) retaining his artistry as an angsty singer-songwriter.

@RavensMuse Katt Mercedes — You did what I was looking for in having the possibilities of having characters have any open role within a label. But her backstory leaves things to be desired. She is isn't interesting, but she wants to inspire others, I feel that those things are contradicting each other as people find inspiration in things that are noteworthy or interesting. Even her nickname, Muse, ties in with what she wants to accomplish but telling us that she's not interesting makes that statement kind of unbelievable. She's also very young, which isn't a bad thing, but it seems as if she's done a lot in a short amount of time. And to the mystery that someone from HLR solved, is it that they found out who she really is or is it that they found her interesting enough that they would want to hire her?

For now, unaccepted, but with the right changes you should be good.

@Metronome Kurt Moretti — First thing, if you could use the format posted for the character sheet, that'd be awesome! Now onto the review. I'm a fan of angst, as it played a pivotal role in my own life, so characters who have a lot of that, totes magotes. I can see him being that band member that no one really knows about, but you do know they are there (looking at you Howie). The thing that irks me though, is the whole not talking part, but I mean you explain it that he does know ASL, so that helps kind of relieve a bit of uneasiness with me. I do want to question what was the incident that caused him to have damaged cords? I don't believe it was ever stated and that was an important event in Kurt's life, so it'd be good to know. Also something similar that I mentioned to one of the others, if we don't find some people who'd like to join your punk-rock band I might need you to make some NPC's to fill in the voids, just for contingency sake. So right now, after a few of the changes I believe you should be good, but until then not accepted.


I wouldn't have called it Emo but I see the relevance



Garnian Salient: Post-Empire Trench Capture, August 25th - Securing Hill 58


The time in which he reacted to Diana's compliment on his smile was drawn out. For a second, he could feel himself smiling and becoming slightly flustered, almost forgetting about the battlefield around them. Almost. She had a lovely, yet strange, ambience to her presence, one that threw genuine happiness into the souls of the weak. Jean was indefinitely taken back by her, albeit nervous, response to his weary smile, but it was her voice altogether that added the icing atop of the statement. Jean smiled again, looking away in a very unsubtle embarrassment, forcing him to take a stand onto his own legs again as Lucia was led off. And there he stood, still and utterly emotionless, for what was quite possibly an hour. People were chatting all around him and yet Jean continued to feel almost ethereal as the blurs of everyone around him scooted by. The temporary divergence from the war was broken when he looked simply at the clearing of Imperial and Federation bodies from the trench. Soldiers who hadn't been within the charge were put on the duty of cleaning up such corpses as if they were entitled to giving them the unruly burial. Rather than give the Imperials the opportunity of a respectful conclusion, many were tossed aside and occasionally looted for treasuries.

A hand placed itself down on Jean's shoulder, gently, yet forcefully, moving him to face the direction of its origination. Striped, he was, with thrice as many as Jean had. A Sergeant, respectively. With a great load of facial hair surrounding his upper lip, he definitely took the burly, nationalist NCO stereotype to a whole new level. Jean looked at him with a few empty blinks. The Sergeant, in a rather crude joking matter, pinched his cheeks to try and spark some light back into the man.


"Lad, if you don't stop staring at that lass you'll start drooling." Objectively, Jean knew that the man was wrong. Jean wasn't looking or spying on the females of the group by any means and instead was musing over the treatment of the dead. It sickened him, to say the least. "Now come with me, for a moment. Lieutenant Middleton wants all NCOs to report to him for analysis. Do you know where Lance Corporal Black is as well..?"

"Taking care of a...a young soldier." Jean finally mustered the courage to say something, trying to snap himself out of the horrifying reminder that he was surrounded by those who's fleeting moments were spent drowning in their own oozing blood. The Sergeant looked upon him with a sceptical raise of the eyebrow, despite Jean having been correct for once. He twirled his bountiful moustache and muttered something before finally responding to his claim.

"Is that so, lad? Go get him."

"W-With all due respect, Sergeant, she was very badly swept up. P-Perhaps he can keep the morale of the Platoon up. I'll...I'll just relay what the Lieutenant says to him after."

Jean held his breath before the Sergeant reluctantly nodded, seeing the logic in his place. He too agreed that the morale of the troops was something to uphold, which Middleton may had seen it as least important. Even with conflicting views, Jean couldn't help but stare at the Sergeant and only imagine him as a puppet to the Lieutenant, being made to do irrational things for the irrational means of another spoilt man.

They began to walk, in unison, further down the trench system. A few twists and turns were required as the expanse of the battle started to make itself clear. There were far more bodies required for clearing on the left side of the trench, which was luckily the side Jean's group hadn't taken. More of the soldiers of the Federation who were still alive on that left flank were bleeding, holding in their own wounds or awaiting treatment of their own, even after an hour of the charge's finish. Jean's legs wobbled and shook when he thought of it, shuddering in its position. The sockets ached when he thought of what it truly felt like to get shot. Jean did, as evident by his helmet's dent, scrape a bullet by his head. If the angle had been any deeper, Jean would've been dead without a doubt, yet he wasn't. He never understood why he hadn't been given up for such a stupid act of rescuing a dead body, but he hadn't yet fallen. It worried him, in reality.

As the pair continued their journey towards Middleton, Jean finally found the confidence to speak his mind when he saw the bodies of the Imperials, once again being tossed simply outside of the trench into ditches previously dug by artillery fire. There was no honour in their burials, it seemed, and Jean couldn't help but feel sorry for them. As a humanitarian by heart, it pained him to see such disregard for the decease of many, many men and women.


"Sergeant...M-May I..." He paused for a moment, seeing that the Sergeant simply turned towards him and nodded, awaiting his question. "I can't help but...but feel nervous as to why we are giving our dead to graves, but not the Imperials. I mean...doesn't it just seem a bit weird how we don't value them in the same way?"

The Sergeant stopped walking, turning around and placing a firm, painful grasp onto Jean's shoulders. He whispered into his ears about treason, words that kind of slipped by Jean as he felt his ears go numb. The bitterness of the cold, alongside the firmness of the Sergeant's grip, made him shiver and shudder. In reality he wasn't fully getting anything of what he was saying, but it was crystal clear that the Sergeant was warning him to choose his words correctly. Saying the sort of humanitarian ideals around in a battlefield environment could be insinuating that he cared for the enemy. Middleton's Regiment was built mostly on the famous values of nationalism and anti-Imperial sentiments. It was a real case of dehumanising the enemy. Jean could see now that the war was built entirely on thinking lesser of the opposition and placing their own comrades on a pedestal. But to the Federation Lance Corporal, how could he respect the brass and higher ups if his first battle saw the slaughter of hundreds before they even reached the top of the hill? Was this a common battle for the war? Some of the Sergeants like the one before him seemed completely composed about the structure of the battle. Had the war really been fought in such a barbaric way this entire time? Jean felt a foul taste come into his mouth.

Eventually, the two arrived to a small crowd of muddy NCOs, all surrounding Middleton. The Lieutenant had a sharp look on his face as he stared through the binoculars wrapped loosely around his neck. On the approaching distance, Jean could hear him muttering to himself and other fellow officers who'd joined the formation. It was clear that Lieutenant Middleton held ultimate authority over the rest of the 2nd Lieutenants around him, as he had apparently orchestrated the whole assault itself. Some of the NCOs around him, such as Corporals, Sergeants and Staff Sergeants, all coloured themselves impressed by his strategy in comparison to previous trench raids from certain Majors or Captains. Jean was definitely not a sceptic as such but he knew that the charge of Hill 58 was no manifestation of a tactical genius.

Middleton eventually turned towards the rest, counting the heads of the other NCOs who'd arrived on the scene. At first, Jean thought that this was just to see who'd bothered to show up, but the stout truth to this was simply to see who was still left alive. He realised this shortly after Middleton stared straight into his own eyes and gave a sort of annoyed look as to how thin the NCO list had already become. It was more of a nuisance and thorn in the Lieutenant's side, but how could he care on a personal level without having any need of human life other than to orchestrate and complete the means of war and strategy?

Within a few seconds, Middleton finally let out a large sigh and turned his eyes around in his sockets. There were some pressing matters to attend to and he could only afford around 14 other NCOs, 15 if he counted Isaac who couldn't attend the meeting. It was more of a short update, preparing them for an upcoming storm of such. It seemed that Middleton had a keener eye than Jean had expected.


"At ease, ladies and gentlemen. As you could expect, we've ran into some minor complications. I want you all to take a look around and tell me what's wrong with this trench." With his vague and almost cryptic introduction, the NCOs began to all look amongst one another in confusion. Jean didn't dare make eye contact with the other contracted killers amongst the group, but instead he simply looked at the corrupted officer with a strong glare. From time to time he did look around, but his mind wouldn't bother suggesting what he had figured out on the way towards the meeting. Before Middleton could confirm anything, a few answers from the NCOs began to come into the light, all of which he denied quickly.

"Is it that the Imperials did not build a strong defence?"

"It must be that they haven't included any dugout holes either?"

The Lieutenant smirked and chuckled at their apparent insolence. It was quite clear towards him that he knew the answer best, and so he decided to share it with a more composed face, once he'd had his laugh of course. Why wouldn't the man take the time to enjoy himself in the face of imminent panic?

"And they call you officers, of the sort? No. Remember our objective. We were assigned to charge up this hill and to secure the artillery positions. Now tell me, my subordinates...Do you see any artillery cannons?" By a matter of fact, Jean was slightly surprised by the answer given. The Lance Corporal thought it was to do with the lower Imperial defender numbers than originally anticipated, but the lack of artillery guns made him stagger in confusion. Had they simply charged up this hill and sacrificed hundreds of soldiers without even reaching their objective? Jean was appalled by the revelation and turned around quickly, his head thumping with the images of the battle once more. These Imperials seemed to have a knack at defending, it seemed, and this hill seemed like the perfect place for trickery and deceit. "I have reasons to believe that whilst we have done our part in securing this hill, we are without the knowledge of where their guns are. Until now, that is. If you look closely enough down the opposing side of the hill, towards the newly penetrated Imperial frontline, you can see larger duckboards, easily known for transporting heavy gear and soldiers over thickened mud. It has become apparent to me that they knew that we were to be upon them like the devil within a matter of hours and thus retrieved what they could. Don't let the spoils of their trickery hinder our victory, though. We captured the hill, which I needed for us to take. We now have the higher ground over the Salient, and thus have broken through and began to alter. For now, we will be holding here in these trenches for three hours, approximately. Sappers from the 12th Vinland Mortars voluntary division will be reinforcing this hill alongside the 3rd Atlantic Fusiliers. Just sit tight, you horrible lot."

Jean could see that many of the NCOs would let out a sigh before beginning to disperse from the meeting, but a pressing matter was still lurking on the man's mind. He knew that not all the answers had been given and he was yet to learn more about the tactical reasoning behind this revelation they'd been bestowed upon. He took to the front, slightly having to push his way past the more senior of non-commissioned officers and seasoned veterans.

"L-Lieutenant, if I may?" As he heard his rank called, he and the other NCOs all turned to Jean and his urgency. The pressing vision of their eyes resting upon his muddy face made Jean feel even more anxious to ask, but he followed through anyhow. "I still don't...I don't understand. Why would the Imperials move their artillery off of the hill when it was their advantage? Couldn't they have just bombed us before we...before we charged?"

His heart thumped. Once. Twice. Three times, again and again. The eyes of the beady rested upon him with ruthless judgement, actually finding it weird that a greenhorn Lance Corporal would actually try to get more information than he was gifted from his superior. Most of the time, the information like that was only known to the highest of brass, yet Jean was eager to get some answers and to help understand the tactic the Imperials had in play. Maybe there wasn't a tactic and it was just fear, but Jean was so certain that because of the perfect timing and planning put into moving such heavy pieces of artillery that it could not merely be an act of cowardice.

"God, it's like you Darcsens really don't understand...Are you slow, Lance Corporal?"

"W-What, uh...Sir?"

"Are you, or are you not, a slow thinker, one who doesn't understand my hints like the rest of the dark-heads do?" The bluntness and coarse tone of the racial question caused a few of the Corporals and Sergeants around him to laugh and snigger at the Darcsen. He was again embarrassed and scared as to the pressure they laid upon him, but he tried to prevail and hold his ground with nervous intent.

"No...no, S-sir!

"It seems like it. He called for all the other NCOs to disperse, leaving the Lieutenant and the Darcsen alone together for a brief moment. Middleton wandered forward and placed a hand on his shoulder, albeit quite gently, and held a strange tone that made Jean uncomfortable by all means. "It's simple really. You arrived here before the rest of the Platoon, I know that, and you must also know that they didn't strike us with artillery in the few days before the charge, correct? Well, it seems they expected us once more. Why give us the artillery advantage as soon as we take the hill, especially when they can just delay us further by making us wait for the our own artillery and mortars to get here?"

"So...we're...we are like targets, then? They wanted us to slow down to buy them more time? Did we not...did we not account for this?"

Jean felt a hand silence his words, a gloved hand pressing against his mouth in a sort of unfunny comedic manner. The Lieutenant chuckled lightly at his own silencing of the Lance Corporal, before he noticed something. It was time to try and take Jean's mind off of the matter that they were in fact prey, potentially, and he would do so by noticing the pieces of paper within his pocket. Jean was too slow to react to the Lieutenant grabbing and reading the letters, noticing the poetic lines and stanzas presented before him. Jean was embarrassed immediately, seeing an almost mocking grin sprawl across his superior's face. A burst of laughter made Jean shrivel his head into his shoulders, almost hiding his shame. At the very least, it was alright that his comrades and other NCOs were not present to the mockery, but he couldn't help but see the punishing man rip him to shreds, including his passions. Was he being petty or was this just another way to try and toughen the Darcsen up?

"Is this yours, Lance Corporal?" Jean nodded slowly, before the Lieutenant pushed them tightly into his chest, slightly scrunching up the paper whilst doing so. "How will any lost soul read this soppy stuff? How about you devote your time to researching tactics, and maybe we would never of had to have this conversation, perhaps? Now go make yourself useful with the platoon and wait for further orders. We're here for another three hours, remember, before the mortars and artillery pieces arrive. Then we can return to the rear-line and prepare for reassignment."

"Re...Reassignment, Sir?"

"Yes. I cannot share the details now, but you'll learn. Hopefully tomorrow or the day after we'll be leaving for another frontline. Won't spill any spoilers now, so you can wait and see. Should be more...accepting, for greenhorns like you. After all, the 5th Army Group, including the Assault Regiments from Edinburgh, are going to take over with breaking down this Salient. Don't worry...we're the ones who will be hailed as heroes."

Jean hated that phrase; nothing was honourable to him about being called a supposed hero, especially when he had to crack an imperial skull in with a rock he found on the floor. If that was what being a hero was, demoting his own humanity towards being a primitive species of violence and destruction, then he would have rather been nothing more than an expendable soldier who'd been killed early on. Jean trekked back through the trench, finding himself back where the majority of his newly found comrades were. There were only a few people near him specifically, and the only one of notice Jean could see was the strange and lightening aura of the girl who complimented him before. He didn't know Kalisa's name, and Diana was probably elsewhere or awaiting for him to return, but like the latter girl he felt a strange feeling when gazing upon the more stern girl. He didn't know he was staring, though more in an admirable fashion than a stalkerish one, and instead felt his mind drift away to a perfect dream land.




Garnian Salient: Front Line, August 25th - The Battle of Hill 58


During his solitary snivelling, Jean was first approached by the blonde man who'd been caught in the small exchange between himself and the supposed Michael, one of the Platoon's other sappers. Since their last encounter from behind the church rubble, it had been rather demolished with the sights of faces being caved in from bullet cackles, bodies deformed by the explosives thrown by his own soldiers and the endless sounds of screaming coming from both the Feds and Imperials alike. The man had a sort of glimmer in his own words and speech he decided to give, and for the first time in a long time, Jean felt his own belly boil and mind cramp up. Optimism was never a strong point for Jean, and this was one of those periods in which he couldn't help but wonder why someone was simply accepting this fate. Jean was merely a broken young man, if his age could even qualify for adulthood, who was trying to escape. It was the first battle, one that many of the veterans back in the homelands would always rumour to be the worst. It was filled with irreplaceable images of death and decease all around them. The skies were lurked with an endless barrage of gargled screeches chirping from the mouths of many. Jean was scared. Many were scared, and perhaps this man was too, but he showed little appreciation for the situation they were in, as if he were accepting the fate.

It was a surprise to see him lift his head, his hair slightly ruffled from the scuffles of the first charge. His helmet still had its scratch across its factory paintwork, where the bullet had narrowly missed gaining the appropriate angle to kill him. A slight annoyance was in his expression, one that required the tenderness of another to calm down.


"Get...through this?" Clearly appalled at attempt made, despite its good intentions and happiness along with it, Jean had muttered loud enough for those near to hear them. "Is that all there is to do, now? Are we already at the point, on some of our first days, in which we agree to conform to such atrocities? By what this war has proven, friendship will be only temporary at this stage, and yet we will be separated by the cold bullets of one another's barrels; whether that be the Imperial's or the Federation's armaments. I appreciate your efforts, mate, but the...everything is not good. Is it not fucking good enough to just turn ourselves in? Are you saying we should sell our bloody souls to the damned devils and chain our limbs to their puppeteer-like fingertips? And I don't drink either, not that I will live long enough to even see the bloody pub."

Suddenly, Jean was forced to spit a small splutter of blood from his chapped lips. He'd never been this harsh before and it was indefinitely due to the stress he had just endured. Part of him was completely sorrowful for Archibald, who clearly had some good intentions himself. Jean saw his religious prayers before he was approached and it slightly unnerved Jean, but as an atheist in his own rights Jean was very much in denial that he could be mentally healed from such undoubted violence. He unfortunately didn't know the irony that these men and women around him were to grow into his greatest comrades, ones that would last a lot longer than the simple months of the first Europa War. It was dramatic irony at its finest, and yet the writer could not ever predict it.

He was in dire need of calming down, as Jean was slowly beginning to tighten his fists in a blind rage. The imagery all around him struck a nerve so violently that his innate appreciation for like-minded stability left him in a constant state of plucked anger. However, suddenly, but surely, after his quick outburst at Archibald that he so regretted, a divine spectre descended upon their position.


Jean was blessed when an angelic apparition appeared before him. She had a rather crisp shimmer within her eyes, despite the murkiness of the bloody battlefields they were surrounded by. Her hair was yet to be stained by the grudge of the world, still shining as brightly as it had likely done many years before. Though they had slightly met for a second behind the church's rubble, they hadn't yet exchanged such conversations as she was about to press upon him. A sweetness in their Edinburgh accent made the impact of her words tenfold their original amount. Jean's breath drew short simply because her words were suddenly calming his outburst, reminding him that it was nothing more than a false facade of his true personality playing tricks upon his soul. She fluttered a small feeling inside of him when she clearly claimed she wanted to get to know him better, using a great technique to calm him down, and claiming that she was conscripted. It made him feel even more poor-minded, knowing that fair maidens and lords from all around Europa weren't just volunteering, but being forced into combat by the threats of legal imprisonment.

Jean looked down for a second when her hand lent onto his shoulder. For once, it was human physical contact on these new frontlines that didn't involve holding the blade at one another. It wasn't the choking of an Imperial's mud-stained hands grasping at his throat. It was the tender and bittersweet graze of a pure-blooded girl, one who knew nothing of her fate. It saddened Jean's heart for a second, making him wonder what was really in store for them. He suddenly hesitated, nodding slowly and looking up towards her with a pale glance of hope. With intentions to even set-aside his Darcsen heritage, Diana was awaiting his response.


"I..." Jean was unsure of what to say at first. The words she used were far more impactful than Archibald's, mainly because of the tender voice she held. Archibald wasn't a bad person, from what he could tell, but the choice of words simply switched Jean into his mistreated explosion of emotions. Jean politely took Diana's hand for a second from his shoulder and placed it beside herself, freeing himself of her gentle grip. "I...Apologise. I lost a nerve there. I...I can't express my anxiety more than anyone else can, but...I'm sure you truly meant well, Archibald. And, well...Thank you Diana. I guess I really need to pay attention to the true nature of those around me. Perhaps we are stuck here, and no matter how painful it's going to be for us I seem to have a cast of...people. I don't know anyone personally yet, but I guess that's something I should work on."

Jean looked up at Diana and finally let out a rather wobbly smile. It wasn't a very charming one, he imagined, but it seemed to be one that complimented her adorable kindness. Maybe these were people who may stick around long enough to help Jean through the war, but Jean himself was still sceptical of the true potential. The speed and rapidity in which bodies fell into the trench reminded him every minute, through ruthless memory, that at any minute of every hour one of these acquaintances, or even himself, could fall in the face of battle.

But before Jean could continue to talk to them, knowing that there was supposedly some time to rest in this bloody trench, which would likely require the emptying of its deceased, something caught him and the others off guard. As it slowly came towards them from behind the trench walls, a feminine, youthful pant of terrified vocals broke free of the silence of the battlefield before she, the small angel of the Federation, fell down into the trench. Jean looked and even jumped in place, trying to gather his place on his feet once more, before he saw that this was the same small girl from before the charge...





Garnian Salient: Front Line, August 25th - The Battle of Hill 58



During that moment, when her mind fell blank, she could not fear anything else other than her own violent capabilities with a rifle. Lucia was a damsel in distress, in which she had caused herself the pain and horrific origin story to that predicament. Her eyes were of a bloodstained red when she eventually dropped into the peak trench of Hill 58. She hadn't joined the initial charge but Lucia was more than aware of the aftermath as she ran the silent fields up there. For her, there weren't any machine guns or rifles aiming towards her as she made up the small reserve force called to fortify the newly capture position. Yet despite this, the soulless and lifeless eyes of the Federation's newly deceased scattered themselves across the battlefield. Mud engulfed the stretches of land and hid some of the more gouged of corpses. Lucia had even tripped and fallen over some of the bloody messes left behind from that first wave.

No one apart from her truly knew why she had joined that reserve force in the first place, but ever since the final girl, most likely of the same age as her, entered the trench in retreat from the battle, things went downhill. Lucia never felt so guilty as to have executed someone of her own ethnicity and allegiance. On the orders of her superiors, as well, she'd taken her rifle and unleashed all she could upon a fair maiden in brown drabs. Regret had coursed through her fragile veins to the point of wanting to escape the scene of her immoral objective. Lucia never wanted to see that girl's body ever again.

When she fell in, a few soldiers instantly surrounded her, questioning why she was in such a panic, asking if she was okay and courteously helping her to her feet. It was a kind gesture, but nothing of that small compassion could ever bring the beautiful maid into a state of calmness. Tears constantly flowed from her eyes and the overwhelming power of self-hatred tore her mind from the realities of purity and light. Lucia was crying alone, once more, and soon an unfamiliar face almost crawled towards her. He bore the Lance Corporal's insignia, and he spoke quietly to her.





Garnian Salient: Front Line, August 25th - The Battle of Hill 58



"S-shh...Hey...It's okay. Hey..." In that moment, Jean suddenly rose to a strange sense of sympathy. He took the words of Diana and Archibald to heart, knowing that there were people relying on his imitation in order to find morality on their compasses. And so, Jean, despite not being a young man of physical kindness and confidence, felt his own arms wrap around the smaller girl in a comforting way, attempting to quieten her nerves and tears. Some could have called it a fatherly gesture, but Jean simply did it out of instinct for the similarly broken girl. "S-Shh, we're here. Our Platoon is here, your platoon...Lucia, is it? Don't cry, we'll find you some way to ease the pain of your head."

Jean quickly took another instinct in caring for his whimpering comrade, one he barely knew too, and pointed towards one man he knew the name of. Despite blood dripping from his uniform, Jean knew his name from the words of others. Michael, he remembered.

"Michael...S-Sorry to be a pain, but please take Private Farris somewhere...somewhere warm and calmer. Go with the Can-" And for a second, he paused as he looked upon who he nearly chose to accompany Michael with. She was drenched, head to toe, in Imperial and Federation blood. Crying in her own boots, quivering perhaps of the crimes she may have committed in her outburst, the supposed Candy Lady was a hesitant choice. Jean honestly was a little frightened of what she'd done, and so quickly shifted his fingers away, trying not to make it any more awkward than he suddenly made it. He pointed to Isaac instead. "G-Go with Lance Corporal Isaac and take care of her...p-please?"

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