Lord Wraith

The Corrigan School for Advanced Learning and Development (A DC School RP)

@Hillan & @Blue Demon both sheets are officially accepted despite Blue Demon's blasphemous words :P

The Corrigan School for Advanced Learning and Development (A DC School RP)

@Hillan Will double check!

@Avanhelsing I'm sneaky like that.

@Blue Demon Heh, sorry was going through and saw it had a sample so I thought I'd add it onto my review.

The Corrigan School for Advanced Learning and Development (A DC School RP)

@Archmage MC That really doesn't help your case, I still don't see the character as fitting in, sorry man. You're free to apply with another character but Light just doesn't work for me.

And while I did say it was fine to be inspired by Marvel or DC, I still have the final say on what I allow into the RP.

The Corrigan School for Advanced Learning and Development (A DC School RP)

@Archmage MC After re-reading Light's sheet she's a fun idea but to me she just doesn't fit the RP. She almost seems too silly, not that I'm saying this is a gritty RP but to me she's just too different. I think what bothers me most is the fact that Light appears so out of place. I just don't see the concept working in the long run.

@Hillan Julian is looking good. I don't have any issues with the CS aside from it being incomplete at this moment.

@Avanhelsing I like Jack, although I do think it's a little boring that he seems to just be a male Catwoman. Would have been interesting if his male parentage had given him some interesting gifts such as metahuman abilities. If you don't want to change him, I'd be happy to accept him once you've double checked the rules ;)

@Tyler Everything looks good, as always I'm hesitant towards weather manipulation since it covers such a wide range of abilities but yours seem well balanced and checked. Will be happy to accept it once you've double checked the rules.

@Blue Demon As above, everything is looking quite good but the rules do need to be adhered to. Just missing one small detail.

@Mr Allen J I've accepted it before, I'll accept it again! Welcome aboard.

The Corrigan School for Advanced Learning and Development (A DC School RP)

@Blue Demon Everything is in order to me!

I'm going to start going through all the CS's now and giving them my verdict and feedback.

The Corrigan School for Advanced Learning and Development (A DC School RP)

@Mr Allen J You literally could.

The Corrigan School for Advanced Learning and Development (A DC School RP)

@Avanhelsing Pic is all good. Honestly as long as it doesn't look like an anime faceclaim I'm not overly picky.

Edited the Brine to the Brew after it was pointed out to me our characters have an age cutoff as 19 thus rendering an alcoholic bar pointless lol.

The Corrigan School for Advanced Learning and Development (A DC School RP)

@Little Loser Yep, I likely won't start doing any CS reviews until I finish my CS. I might start them tonight but I definitely won't be closing them for quite some time if at all.

@Archmage MC Eh, give me a chance to look over the CS again first. From my first impression I'm not quite sure Light is exactly what I'm looking for in terms of characters. She seems a little too out there but I'll reevaluate once I read the sheet more thoroughly.

The Corrigan School for Advanced Learning and Development (A DC School RP)

@Lord WraithBTW. Your CS differs between the OOC tab and the Characters tab. Just so you know.

@Blue Demon

Huh. I will fix that ASAP.

EDIT: Fixed. Also I have started my character sheet.

The Corrigan School for Advanced Learning and Development (A DC School RP)

I'm open to the idea for sure.