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10 days ago
Current I turned 40 recently. Nothing happened, no crisis or anything. Turns out it's just another year.
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@Aeolian
Great concept—sort of 'mad' scientist, yes? There are two things, though, that I can comment on.

First, the timeline is a bit wonky. The comet arrived ten years ago, when your character was 34. Your chronicle reads much differently at this time. Am I right in this? Otherwise, I completely misunderstood everything.

Second, the spirits and 'mind' magic. I think it was during the first iteration of The Spirits Within, years ago, that I and those players deliberated on what spirits could and couldn't do. All sorts of 'mind' magic was excluded. Spirits express themselves purely in an elemental fashion. So, reading minds is something that we'll have to cut out and replace, completely, unfortunately.

There isn't as much focus on character powers/abilities in this as it is in typical Marvel/DC stuff, I think. By 'focus' I mean 'uniqueness'. In this, it's more how you attack instead of what you are attacking with. So, any uniqueness has to come from the 'techniques' a character uses to express spirit/elemental magic. I listed some common techniques, but they're by no means the only ones. I gave my own character a technique that isn't listed, and that's fine. I encourage everyone to keep this in mind.
I assumed it was heavily based on Kit Harrington


Man, why does Game of Thrones feel like it concluded 10 years ago? I think that's the guy I had in mind but couldn't name.

@Aeolian
Hey! Well, look at that. All the old greats of the past showing up out of the blue. I love that.
@nodogs
Hah, there he is! You're very welcome, as well, of course—now or whenever your muse puts that idea on paper.

@DeadDrop
That's okay. We'll keep it as it is, but do continue to look for something. I'll look for something myself. I'm pretty sure that guy in the concept art is based on an actor, as I recognize that face.

Here's the edited image: i.imgur.com/8qK7UdP.png
Put it all up in the character tab.
I'm thinking I'll start with a 'prelude' for the story, of sorts, so that people can start posting without making progress in the 'main story' while we wait for all players to complete their characters. When everyone is ready, we'll start 'chapter 1' or something like that to mark the beginning of the main story.

@Krash
I'm guessing it's this one, also based on your character's chronicle.


@Rockette
Oh yes, baby. More than welcome.

@Salsa Verde
As long as nodogs doesn't think I'm trying to snatch players from his game or something, we're all good. Always room here, welcome. Even if it seems crowded, you know how it is—life will happen for some, eventually.






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Player Count: 9-ish.







@Siber
Very nice. I've fixed it for you, so it's similar to the others.
i.imgur.com/9lq5Kl8.png

@Krash
I've got yours too here, so you can put it in the character sheet.
i.imgur.com/1JMOdVE.png

@Prosaic
Are you still with us? Giving you a nudge, either way.
@DeadDrop
Cool concept. Got me thinking of all those Top Gun: Maverick trailers that the YT feed has been spamming me.

What you can do is to add a little bit about Robert's reputation as an Aeon, generally. And then, maybe something about his time in the Navigation Division—just to expand the Chronicle just a little bit.

A strong mix of Fire and Earth spirits would work for what you describe as the destructive side. That is, this mix would entail a more molten/lava kind of fire, "hellfire" as you worded it.

While the picture is terrific, are there any 'real life' options? If not, then that's fine too, but have a look around if you haven't already.

@Siber
Very nice. This is the caliber I was looking for—great comeback.

I have just one tiny thing to comment on, which is a lore thing. You wrote this: "back when the UDF was pairing Archons and Human soldiers together". Did you mean to say "Aeons and human soldiers"? That was and still is the primary means of doing things in the UDF. They have Aeons lead groups of human soldiers wherever possible, but Archons do not meddle with human affairs in this sense. Archons are more likely to disrupt human efforts or interact with them on a very personal one-on-one basis.

Also, the picture—great choice, although a bit low resolution. Did you look for a 'real life' option? If you still want the metal arm sleeve to be visible, we can include a separate picture of concept art, just like @Archangel89 has a separate image for his character's weapon.

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Tagging the rest of you here: @RezonanceV@Martian@Krash@FollowthePath
I've generated a world map using some site, which was kind of neat. I've added a black band across the whole thing to indicate the comet's orbit. This will be the main war zone or 'dark zone' for the conflict, you could also call it 'the scar' or something like that.

So, those of you who created locations, look at the map and determine where they would be, so that I can add them there.


Direct link:i.imgur.com/2TwD3Lx.jpg
My last post here was 13 days ago, which feels like yesterday. The post before this one, right now, is 4 days ago, which feels like 2 weeks.
@DeadDrop
Nah, it's not quite that rigid. Everyone can be one, if the need arises. But, there is always personal preference.

@Siber
Hah, it wasn't a bad job. It was a good start.
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