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5 mos ago
Current I feel like the guild should have a different section for those that were born after the guild
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6 mos ago
Don't let lack of original thought stop you from posting in the status bar. It never stops anyone else
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6 mos ago
I made the mistake/choice of listening to a Star Wars audiobook now I feel an old familiar itch returning
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3 yrs ago
Ahsoka been out for weeks now where all the Star Wars rps at
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4 yrs ago
Desire for Star Wars or Stargate roleplay intensifies
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E V I L S C O T T I S H G U Y


So I have been on the Guild for a long, long, long, long, long, long, LONG time. I first joined the OldGuild around, my best guess would be 2012? I've been active in the Star Wars scene on the Guild since then, there have been very few games based around that genre that I haven't at least nosed my way in on. My very first game was a Star Wars game and that's what actually really got me into the Star Wars Franchise.

It's weird to think but I am such a major Star Wars nerd these days, yet before I was on the Guild I wasn't. I got into a Star Wars RP, got onto the Wikia, and then away I went into a spiral of nerd-om that I currently live within. I've grown since then, I game quite a bit, I write when I can. I have a wikia full of a lore to my own original creative universe and play around with some 'cool' comic book nerds.

Active Roleplays:

Roleplays I miss:

One Universe: Unlimited - A Marvel/DC Comics Roleplay by @Master Bruce
Ultimate One Universe by @Master Bruce
No Turning Back by Me.
Star Wars: Galaxies at War by Me.
Absolute Comics by a load of people.
Ultimate One Universe: Emergence - by @Master Bruce and [@Sep]

Most Recent Posts

@Sep Hard to know what would constitute an improvement if I'm just stabbing in the dark.


As Wraith said we're still in the deliberation phase, but your character is at what we call Year 0/1 in that they're just making their debut, and they're a pretty major character. Really any details on any potential plots you're going to do, villains you'll face and heroes you'll work with would be beneficial.
@Lord Wraith Any need for me to contribute to said deliberations? I feel like it even going on this long bodes poorly lmao


If you feel like there's anything you could do to improve your chances I'd always recommend doing it.
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I do not have much experience with this kind of RP, but I think a lot of my trouble likely stem from anxiety and self-doubt like many others do. I find whatever I write to always be a bit disappointing and demotivating wishing I could have done it better. And I always feel no matter what I do the stuff I manage to put out is dull, boring, and not very creative.

Everyone here seems to be very kind and very supportive which I think is actually helping me gain a bit of confidence and has pushed me to actually try and speak to others instead of just lurking like I would usually do (unfortunately).

I feel like I get short bursts of "oh yeah this will be good lets try this" and then when I write it out I am like "what was I thinking this sucks" haha.


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This here is pretty key, because nothing is as demotivating as complete radio silence where it feels like you're firing stuff off into a void.


Honestly having a group of people you can get kind feedback from or support from is great. A lot of people here you could ask and they'd probably willingly proof-read your posts, I used to do that a lot or of something isn't sitting right I'll still do it, sometimes that support net of people reading it before it's public and going "actually if you change this it will flow so much better" is great.

I know for example if you ever want too just throw me a PM and I'll happily work with you. The very fact you're asking all this is good.
Shameless double post because I'm a monster. Well, fucking sniped.

I've got a question of the day if the GM's would indulge me.
These games have a habit of burning bright and fading out, and I can't help but wonder why.
What do you think your biggest pitfall in writing is? What's the thing that kills your motivation the most often?

On the creative side, I think my issue is being too hard on myself. The belief in every-expanding betterment. I've come to realize in my advancing age that maybe the drive to always make something that's better than the last isn't helpful. That it's okay to make something creatively that is by all means worse than a previous project without it invalidating the growth you've had as a creator.


Historically in these games I've tried to keep discussion going in order to generate interest. I know I dropped once due to seeing Endgame (I was playing Iron Man and it just burnt me right out, I still stand on the hill that I didn't particularly like Endgame and I will die on it.... but that's not important now).

I feel like burn-out is hard to pind own as there's lots of different reasons why it happens. Increase in work, drop of interest, self-doubt. I always try and compliment people as much as possible and plan to bring back the 'award'/'vote' scenario back from one of the games we did previously.

Lets go onward and upwards!

Thank you all, I appreciate it. Will try and keep these things in mind for the future. I always feel quite shaky and unsure when it comes to doing things for the first time.


Hillan raises a good point.

For example:

Flash fights very quickly, he's trying to put them down quick and rapidly.

Hulk is very chaotic, childlike.

Superman is very methodical.

Natasha is very tactical.

Get a feel for it, we'll all support ya. We're all friends here, I mean my writing has improved dramatically since joining this group.
Does anyone have any advice for writing fight scenes? I found myself really struggling and needing to rewrite and rethink a few times but still in the end feeling rather unsatisfied. Feel like it is rather hard to make it flow naturally and had difficulty in thinking of what should go where or if there should be dialogue in some places or none and so on and so on...


I feel like do it in a way that seems more natural, you can gloss over as DeadCruiser suggested. I tend to describe it, I never found I was particularly good at writing fight scenes but someone told me I'm okay.

Honestly take a look at what your favourite writers here do, you get some that go more poetic and some that go more descriptive. The most important thing is this: Find your own style.

I've not read your post yet but I will, and if I see anything I'll throw you some pointers in your PM, but we're all pretty friendly here and quite happy to give feedback/advice.
@Kale19 so did Brawn jump out the plane? Its kind of unclear. Like is falling out of the sky a metaphor or is it legit?
@Mao Mao happy birthday

Send cake.
On a different note, just so people are aware, I'll be away for the majority of next week as of Tuesday. I'll probably still be able to reply to messages, but won't be able to sit down and actually write


How dare you. I want more Tim.

Guess I'll need to settle for Dick.
@Sep and @Kyoka

How should this next few posts work? I've never really done any RP's with a lot of inter-character communication, so I'm not sure if this is one of those 'do a Collab things' or 'post and wait for everyone else to post things'.


We'll try back and forth and if it becomes tedious we'll switch to a collab.
I will say in future its best check in before you go head towards someone else,
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