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@Crossfire@Banana
8 A.M. Local Time
Western Hills, Overlooking Sol's Fortress -> Sol's Fortress Control Room
Sovereign Valley, Rokarr

Taleste grinned, and scrambled over the uneven surface of the ground from their location to the breach location like running water. She was an expert and covering distance fast while not drawing attention to herself. She was a thief, after all. She followed behind Tibulus, letting him pacify the guards. He was a better shot than her, and she couldn't move and kill at the same time. To Taleste, assassination and fleeing from a crime were seldom done at the same time. Killing was to prevent the alarm from raising, and if you were running, you'd probably failed in that job.

While Tibulus went to the control room, Taleste split off and followed the signs for the locker room, taking out her silenced pistol as she did so. She only passed two guards on the way there, both of whom were taken out by shots to the head before they could blink. When Taleste reached the room, she stripped off her boots, gloves, jacket and pants, and donned one of the guard uniforms, hiding her hair and eyes with a cap. That done, she calmly made her way up to the roof, past many a patrolling soldier. None of them questioned her despite not necesarrily recognising her. This female soldier oozed confidence and authority and it would seemingly be a stupid idea to stop her.

None of the men on the roof suspected the female guard who came to relieve them of duty so they could join the fight on the ground that they were itching to help partake in instead of standing around waiting for people who might not show up. It was a surprise when Taleste slit their throats one by one, working her way round the roof.
@pyroman

It's seemed bleak before (and never really recovered) but it seems bleaker than normal right now.
@PaulHaynek

Sure. Should I write that here or put it in the CS?
I'm still here
@PaulHaynek

I changed her views to make her more of an ally to the good guys an less of an anti-hero, and found I didn't need to change her backstory to accommodate. If I should make more changes, let me know.
@PaulHaynek

I'm good with a few tweaks, even if they're tweaks to every aspect of her. I just don't like throwing away entire characters.

Also that question didn't really answer my question. Or should I just replace her views with a new bunch of views and keep trying until I get something you like?
@PaulHaynek

Um.

Is there anything I need to change to make you accept her?
@PaulHaynek

Made some changes in personality. How's that?
@PaulHaynek

How do you mean?


Kasuke Mina


Mina woke up at 7:30, tired and ticked off. She was still annoyed that Haruka had answered her last question with silence and walked away. She also felt some regret for the way she dismissed Donny. She'd have to make it up to him. She did a morning jog around the school; one lap just to take the stiffness out of her joints, followed by stretches in the shower, and a walking breakfast. She arrived in class on the dot, and took her seat, wondering what they'd learn today, only to audibly groan when it was another practical exercise. She still hadn't fully recovered from yesterday's!

@Feyblue@Lucius Cypher@pkken






Maeda Hitomi


Hitomi ended up not tagging along. The heat made her sleepy, and she retired early. The sheep girl woke up, still in her uniform, and her hair still in the cute ponytail that Hitomi had enthusiastically glomped the small girl in thanks for. She decided to keep it. She wondered if she should change when she noticed the time, and instead quickly sprayed deodorant on herself.

However, when she got to her support class for the morning, she found a note on the door telling her that today she'd be taking part in the Hero Exercise due to a number shortage. She gulped. An actual Hero....Exercise? The sheep girl timidly knocked on the door and entered the classroom, finding a spare seat and looking really uncomfortable with where she was.

@liferusher@pkken






Mako Akane


Mako entered the breakroom, still yawning and stretching from the few hours work she'd already done, and sitting across from Sarge. She grinned. "You know, I don't think I've ever seen you eat before," she commented, pulling a beer from the minifridge and cracking it open. "You never struck me as the type to eat with the manners of a gentleman in the breakroom"

@pkken
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