Stormyx

Young Justice Renegades: A Team Worth Dying For

<Snipped quote by Stormflyx>

Wish it was morning. 7 and a half hours of shift to go.

@Sep

I have an hour until my day of doom starts, I would also very much like to skip through to the end ;-;

Young Justice Renegades: A Team Worth Dying For

A very good morning from down unda

Young Justice Renegades: A Team Worth Dying For

@Stormflyx keep doing it, I love it.

I'm going to work on my post tonight, hoping to get some more sleep before night shift but it doesn't seem to be cooperating.

@Sep

Once I am more familiar with the characters, I am likely to bust out character related memes, character playlists, and do sketches.

I am.... a fangirl of roleplays I am in.

Young Justice Renegades: A Team Worth Dying For

@Hound55

Another great post! I really love Red's attraction to Cece, and how it plays out quite innocently - him just dropping everything to help her when she probably doesn't need it. It's a very disarming trait. Just stuff like this....

staring at Gabi whilst she was running on the treadmill, and somehow time would pass and he'd hear a gurgling underneath him as Kevin was having trouble putting the bar back up,

So telling of him as a character, I love it. Matches what you'd put in his CS and I appreciate that playback to the detail in your intro post. I really like your writing, you keep a nice pace and it's just enjoyable to read as is your character.

What I'm digging so far about all of these posts, and I think I'm just reiterating on a point I already made but I like how every post is so different from the entry prompt, basically. I really like seeing all of the characters fleshing out :)

Speaking of different, @Natty, I enjoy that you have gone for teasing the conflict with Cece and Gabi -- so far, everyone has been amicable about each other but you haven't been shy to write Gabi's hesitations which is really awesome as a roleplayer that you're doing that. Sometimes it's easier to just write your character getting along *cough* me *cough* but you've kept true to Gabi's personality. I also really liked the colourful imagery around her upbringing and how she related the blackout to Guatemala.

Then there's posts that are just so creative, @Roman. Loved Vincent's intro! :D The description of the round room and how it annoys Vincent is just *chefs kiss* of characterisation and is (I am repeating this so often, lol) but just telling of his character in a really clever way. It's easy to picture that whole scene and it gets me into his head a little bit and makes me understand him that tiny bit more, which I love. Really love your writing, and the humour in it. I think in your sheet that you said you've written Vincent as a way to practice just letting go a bit (or something along those lines) and I think you've done an awesome job at that, I am seriously looking forward to another post of Vincent. Also, did he really exit the fridge? Another one of those "oh my glob hawhaw" moments.

@Tackytaff good bean supreme Selene <3 love her. It's so sweet that's she leaning into family comforts in her new home at the penthouse. I really like her unpacking things carefully and contemplating things, it gives a really sincere insight into her - she seems very sentimental and I love that. Also, I laughed when she blew out the power with it hahahaha. Lovely stuff, looking forward to more <3

Oh lord, best believe I screamed at @psych0pomp's last few lines. Look, every roleplay needs a character like Hana - who has no filter, who just says what she's thinking and says it proud. I love that about Hana and I love that about you for just writing it and being 110% true to her wild personality. Even the way that you describe penguin waddles and barely giving Jesus room just feels so much like Hana, you've injected her into the prose of your posts even and it's so bold and standout.

Seriously, oh my god I need more posts, these have all been fantastic so far.

(also hoping this isn't obnoxious of me, I just have a habit of digesting posts in OOC haha)

Young Justice Renegades: A Team Worth Dying For

<Snipped quote by Lord Wraith>

Well, I'm sure there'll be a lot of that going around. They're a bunch of hormonal young teenagers shut in a house togeth--

@Hound55

Listen.

We’re not all Red. 😂

Young Justice Renegades: A Team Worth Dying For

<Snipped quote by Sep>

@Stormflyx, I thought about our previous discussion, and I'd be happy to come back as a Mod...

So I can teach this punk some manners.

@Lord Wraith

...

It will be done.

Young Justice Renegades: A Team Worth Dying For

I swear I am learning a new language everytime Sep and Storm post...

@Lord Wraith

You think that's bad? Get me on voice chat after a few tequilas.

Young Justice Renegades: A Team Worth Dying For

Alright there you go @Sep and @Dead Cruiser

Young Justice Renegades: A Team Worth Dying For

"What's the craic Eilidh?"

“Hmm, let me see here,” Eilidh answered, quick off the bat with a response for the Irishman while she poured into his mug. He smelled like books, and the black tea steam that came from his mug conjured an image in her mind’s eye of Conor as a studious figure in a candlelit library, nose to paper, brows furrowed deep in concentration. It was a comforting aroma, inducing a relaxed mood within her.

“Well I dinnae if ye ken,” she began, holding a deliberately theatrical pause, “but the lecky wen’ oot!” She didn’t have to talk so slowly around Conor, she liked that. There was an extra freedom in their conversations where she had to think a lot less. Still, she sold her words as if it was the first he would have heard of it - eyebrows raised and all - even if her irises sat steady and unmoving - staring right through him.

Whatever time for response he had, was swiftly taken by Dandelion who had arrived also, hoping for a cup too. Eilidh had felt them enter the kitchen before she heard them. Their full and heavy presence pushed back against the energy that she could already see. Dandelion was a large shadow in the room, but despite the ominous appearance, it was an unmistakable feeling of friendliness and good will that floated around. Strangely in a colour she wouldn’t have been able to give a name to, but knew the feeling of none-the-less. “Dandy, Dandy!” she sang out with a smile. “Tea ye can indeed have,” Eilidh grinned, her hands finding their way to a second mug that she’d already prepared. With a shake of the pot holding hand, she could estimate there were still a few cups worth of hot water in there. “Try dunkin’ ye biccie this time, promise ye’ll like it.”