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4 yrs ago
Current Sometimes you spend so long looking for peace in someone else, you loose sight of that peace you can give yourself. Don't forget that guys.
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5 yrs ago
"Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery. But today? Today is a gift. That is why it is called the present." -Master Oogway
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8 yrs ago
So many writing ideas, so little time to write. Being an adult sucks...
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8 yrs ago
It's the most fattening time of the year!
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9 yrs ago
There is a madness to my method. Or is there a method to my madness?
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As the water saint stuff touches on something that might interfere with @expolar's plans, I'll let him approve that.

As for the weapon, anyone could say that it was hard to break. I imagine Damian's blades are hard to break, after all. I just don't think indestructible is fair-it means you always have a weapon no matter what and that doesn't seem right, really.


On this debate, I am fine with an indestructable weapon. It just means one of two things happens when a fight goes south for her. One, she get's disarmed and beat down, or two, she gets an attack deflected that opens her wide and still gets beat down. Ultimately, an indestructible weapon doesn't really affect the RP enough to warrant a ton of scrutiny at this point. If it becomes a problem in interactions and battles, THEN it's OP.
*Pokes @Zarkun*

Lugu, if you read this, I'll try to reply to our collab sometime tomorrow.


I'll post soonish. Kinda in panic mode right now.
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Changed it slightly, but I need to change the backstory for Manami a tad I believe. Just too lazy to do it now.


Still don't like the catch all slayer of slayers. Sorry mate.
paws at people


So you aren't going to critique the CS's?
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@Zarkun
Better? I changed the magic to make it most effective against Slayers (course it will still pack a punch against normal people, but so does all magic when used well) which was the main aim anyway. I wanter her as an 'anti-slayer' so to speak. I might change the name if I get a decent suggestion XD
I edited the others slightly as well but unsure how to change Sophie in anyway. Her magic is full of openings and weaknesses.
Also I made Shiro to pretty much be anti-Cody XD
A mage like Shiro is Cody's worst nightmare to verse, teleportation is quite effective against him. Or speed.
But in all seriousness I can't seem to make Sophie's magic any weaker XD Point out what the problem is there.


OK, so back to the first one, the big issue is we're still not accepting Slayers. Unless something was said while I was unconscious in bed. Second one, in her back story it now reads 'Act of Guild' XD Just thought you'd like to know. Third one, I think rather than including a photographic memory in his magic, why not just give it to him? Also, still not sure I like his Byakugan style see all magic vision.

Fourth one, well, I'm not sure a black hole is a good idea for innocents, or even personal, survival. Their range of suction is incredibly wide, even for a small one and there simply isn't anyway to truly "control" a black hole once it's let go. I mean, I like the magic, but the Black Orb is dangerous beyond reason, even for a dark mage.

Fifth one is good, though perhaps instead of Ghost magic, which people are going to go, "He can summon ghosts?" call it phase magic or something. Just a suggestion though, to avoid confusion with others. Sophie is good as well, though I feel like you're shorting yourself with her just a little. Anyways, new critique done. I hope you're enjoying the dance.
@Caits@Expolar@Zarkun
Been a while and sorta forgot these characters XD
There are more I just thought I would post the finished ones.












First hider is a Slayer, which to my knowledge we are not accepting right now. Of any kind. My next issue is the All Seeing Eyes magic. See the future? That's cheap. Not even Grant can effectively see into the future enough to completely do what you're inferring Simon can do. Another issue is that I don't see any kind of weakness to any of their magic. Another issue, upon further inspection, is a catch all Slayer. I can accept straight up Angel slayer if we were allowing them, but...I'm sorry, but no. Perhaps a PM with all the GMs to iron things out?
@Caits

Lava flooding the streets and areas getting painted in blood and gore is an everyday occurrence in the capital of the country that banned magic for the past hundred years or so?


More accurately put, any non-mages would regard all the various displays of magic as nothing more than show right now because of the Games. Martial law would undermine what the Royal Family and Magic Council are trying to display magic as and besides that, much of Crocus has been damaged numerous times by magic, so anyone not well educated in magic itself would blame traces of old magic flaring up.
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Yes.

@ZarkunThat's the place holder name for the Reincarnated zombie people that Nidhogg can make.


Ah, yeah, it's fine.
@ZarkunQuestion: Is it okay if I make a 1 or 2 Reborn NPC's?


First, what's a Reborn? I has the dumb this week and can't brain.
Just over three hours for me.
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