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4 yrs ago
Current Sometimes you spend so long looking for peace in someone else, you loose sight of that peace you can give yourself. Don't forget that guys.
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5 yrs ago
"Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery. But today? Today is a gift. That is why it is called the present." -Master Oogway
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8 yrs ago
So many writing ideas, so little time to write. Being an adult sucks...
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8 yrs ago
It's the most fattening time of the year!
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9 yrs ago
There is a madness to my method. Or is there a method to my madness?
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Well, that's up to you, mate. I mean, sure Raynor and Nova had a bit of blood between them (after all she DID capture Jim at one point and maaaaaybe or maybe not managed to blow up what was left of Project Shadwblade by 'volunteering' the Raiders on a possibly false premise).

However, that's mostly water over the dam by 'our' present day. Still, your call.


Except for canon is that she didn't get the Raiders to blow it up...Which is what I'm running on XD

EDIT: All the same, Rave is going to be making a call on all Dominion channels. Whether or not she answers it is up to you.
@CHammer Oh the temptation there XD
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You have a Senya?


It's not uncommon for different people to have the same name, even in the SW universe.
@Baraquiel

Small but rather important typo/grammatical issue, as it changes the entire meaning of and confuses the statement:

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Adamant is misspelled, but thats neither here nor there, the problem is the way the statement reads, its saying he is determined to use the dagger to hurt people, which conflicts with the character and the next statement.

I would also suggest explicit stating the energy/magical limits of his, as healing magic can be abused or game breaking if not set within well defined limits.


You seemed to have missed the part where I said that isn't a determinable issue until they're actually writing it. We can't predict what might happen. Based on that, we can't ask them to define anything until we see how they're going to write things out.

EDIT: I know I didn't specify what wasn't a determinable issue when I passed judgement, but this was one of them. We just need to wait and see what happens before we know what the issues actually are.

Rave "The Shadow" Mallard

Frixion Prime




Having followed Akagalcia, he looked in the window with her, appraising the items inside before nodding. "It would help us shake any pursuit as well. Shall we?" He approached the door and followed his companion in, taking a spot against the wall near the entrance. "Pick out some things that you like, few different sizes. Find what fits. You can try them on in the changing rooms that I imagine are near the back."

Rave "The Shadow" Mallard

Frixion Prime




Rave nodded and got them back into the flow of people heading towards the ship dock, all the while keep an eye out for any police checkpoints that would force them to find a way around. As far as he could see, there wasn't any, but that could change quickly. "Only know what to do because this isn't the first time I've had to make a run from one planet to another. Was a common practice for me back in the Koprulu Sector for a good many years."

Stopping at a corner, he checked around it and in the other direction before continuing on down the way. "So I take it you've just been familiarizing yourself with a small area for the sake of familiarity?"
Ayo! Please do tell me if there's anything I can change about my cs. ^u^
Also want to thank you for the warm welcome xD



I don't see too many issues with the CS and the issues I do see aren't necessarily going to be game breaking until we see them put into play. I give it my seal of approval. @Expolar@Caits Just lettin' ya see this so that you can critique it.
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Thanks.


No problem.
@ActRaiserTheReturned You might want to go read the lightsaber thing in Arcann's sheet. You still have Vader's name in it.
I. WANT. TO. JOIN.

can I? XD If I can, maybe I can join Dragon Fang :)


hatake is correct, we're always accepting. And Dragon Fang would be glad to have you!
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