I'm going to post after someone else has.
I'm slowly working on my fall of GORT post, but I was going to have Elias arrive at Paradise after Koren got back.
I'm going to post after someone else has.
<Snipped quote by Zarkun> Edited, assuming I fixed the thing you were referring to.
<Snipped quote by Zarkun> Are you talking about the point I made in the strength section? Can that not be something I make an example of IC?
<Snipped quote by Zarkun>That part I left over from my first draft that you saw, true, I shouldn't have left it in. He's not a force user anymore, so I changed it up.
Updated my CS. Should I have still posted in here first? I was just editing my previous post so I thought I'd leave it in the CS thread.. up to you.
*pops out from hiding for 4 years and waves*
intense and thoughtful discussion
@Zarkun
It's by no coincidence that my backstory is your primary issue. I struggled to invent as I was writing it and knew it was bad, yet couldn't fix it.
Hi, I'm Triesa.
Everything you pointed out is truth. I find character history difficult to write.. it's like trapping fire in a bottle. What you read was my first attempt at writing an RP CS and yes it made no sense, not solely on the fact that I'm inexperienced at roleplaying, but because- I admit I really don't know much about the star wars universe even though I really like SW. I look around and everyone seems to know a great deal so I was a little daunted at the idea of possibly jumping into this with posts largely relying on slice of life masquerading as SW, without understanding the world to make it convincing.
I'm thinking Radda being purely a bounty hunter could work if I give him a good enough motive...
K, my CS is still a WIP assuming I can even fit into this roleplay.
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That's one hell of a title :D
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Ok, didn't know that. I admit I think my char's history is a bit weak, but I'm finding it hard to expand it.. writers block, fml.