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Okay I should be done and have my CS cleaned up today.
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I've got my CS ready, dark mage has been taken. Now if my internet would work...
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I'm hoping through the rp, I would be able to make it so that Chara opens up more as she meets new people and finds out that not everyone is scared of her and that world isn't that bad of a place to be... I also went over the limit but I just got so into the typing I forgot about it, and I hope that doesn't tax me so much that I can't be in this rp because I really wanna be in it
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OK, so my CS is up, tell me what you think...


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I'm pretty sure the Sample Post size has to be more than a single paragraph.
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Having a certain semblance of structure to the post would be the ideal, so it's harder to achieve with a single paragraph, but not impossible. In truth two would be the idea length, I think.

What I want to avoid the most of all are really walls of text, since those are supposed to be simple CSs, for a relatively old style fantasy RP, thus I don't need piles of info other then what might really come to use in the game.

Either way, I'll review the presented CSs later.
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@KoL Here you are, resident Dark Mage. The ears are a coincidence, so now all the warped Elven races need dog/cat ears now.

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@KoL Alright, I finished mine. Just one point of interest, which is whether or not a shield with a rotating handle would fit with the technology of the time, just asking to be certain.

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I'll finish my CS tomorrow.
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I'll format it pretty when it's moved to the character tab
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So, after some delay, here's the first round of revisions:

@TheWindel: You're good, jut finish your CS and you're approved.

@CelticSoldier: You're approved as well.

@Mega Birb: Ohoho! That's the stuff, that CS was really cool from head to toes. I'll even disconsider the fact that you managed to sneak a goblin on my city when I'm thinking on the best way to skin y'all.Either way, approved as well.

@RoflsMazoy: You are good as well. As for your question, I don't think that such a device would be out of bounds, but certainly it's a custom stuff, so you won't be buying a replacement for it so easily if it breaks, just telling ya.

@Themerlinhawk: You're approved as well. Actually, that tarot deck as a nice name to it, it could come to be interesting IC, since it's the same as the title of the Knight of Legend Arianna Weiss, The Knight of the Gales.

All who were approved can move their CSs to the CS and begin posting IC at your leisure. bear in mind that we won't have a post rotation or something like this established for the time being, but let at least a couple people post before you do so again.

Now, for the last issue:

@The1Rolling1Boy: Your character is not bad per se, but that writing sample worries me. It's not the length or anything like this but the way you wrote it, since I won't really take that kind of writing IC. I'll ask that you redo that in proper prose format, before accepting your character and, once you are accepted, that you don't write like that IC, since it really feels bad to read.

Everything else is good, but that tiny bit really worries me. So, sorry for that. Fix the issue and you can consider your CS approved.
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@KoL the deck itself is called the Mist Tarot but his ability to use it as a weapon was what I called the Knight of Gales but that's an interesting coincidence. Although the deck will have a litteral: Knight of Gales card know it so that could be REALLY interesting
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Is this still open to joining? It looks real neat, and if this is still open I'd like to start thinking of what I'd play. Don't wanna make a character just to be told it's full, y'know?
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Is this still open to joining? It looks real neat, and if this is still open I'd like to start thinking of what I'd play. Don't wanna make a character just to be told it's full, y'know?


Yes, we still have space for a few more characters. You can join if you want to, don't worry.
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@KoL awesome, I'm not at home today but I'll try to get something up for tomorrow
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@KoLWere you going to do an opening post or are we weapons free?
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@KoLWere you going to do an opening post or are we weapons free?


The Opening Post has been there ever since the thread is up. Just check the IC tab... :)
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