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I guess I'll live with that. But I still have one more trick up my sleeve to at least save the rest of the team, even if they'll lose out on the treasure and the teleported room.

Food for thought, does Miyu's self destruction null the cease fire since it was technically an angel who just vapped the supplies that where suppose to to go the machina and demons?
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You lost Ryo. Just accept that. None of your plans worked because someone else came along and did theirs faster. I'm sure no one really planned for things to go down like this, least of all us, so just take it with grace and die already.
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@Ryonara Seeing those supplies are still in the forge room, and Miyu's explosion probably won't destroy that for the sanity of the GMs, no, not really. You could all die and your team will still get the same share of the supplies.
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I'll try to get a post up tonight. It'll mostly consist of "What the fuck?" And "Fuck you."
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Omega can comment on the chaos happening?
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Kinda wanna join but so much story to catch up on anyone wanna gimme a quick briefing my dudes?
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@Grombus Kay.





Also, edit mentions don't work.
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Alright sounds sweet imma go read some of the more recent IC and try and memorize all the names and make a char.
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Name: Maen
Title: Mad-One
Age: I can't remember...
Gender: What am I?
Allegiance: Demon
Race: A mad thing.
Personality: Insane, never interacted with any living creature until brought to the nexus so he is unstable, not malicious but can't control himself. Confused at all of the new things he is seeing.
Appearance:



History:

Alone. Since time immemorial I have always been alone. I do not remember my beginning, I can't remember how it all started. All I remember is the midnight shore, the sea of glass, the nameless stones, and the songs the moon sang to me.

Under the moonlit whispers upon the midnight shore the lightning chased the thunder, and the
voices sung blood down upon the sand. I knelt my head upon the nameless rocks, and took them
in my hands but all is ash and dust and pain. A distant song sad and melancholy danced on
the waves, tides of glass washed my arms as ash to dust which once was now is again. A soundless
whisper upon the wind carried far away, to break the tide of glass upon the midnight glade.

A dark and soundless song, sung behind the moon. The starless night listened wide
yet sound it did not hear. The glass is shattered noiselessly upon the nameless stones. The
lady on the mirror, beckoned to the wind, as storming silence sank the blood into the midnight
sand. Under the sea of glass the voices called again, a whisper first but more yet
came to bare. The roaring voice that softly screamed a song of years gone by. Behind the
moon a dark so deep, a black so cold it cuts across the sky.

Madness cries its twisted call to broken minds and fears, their visions seen through eyes of weeping
red. Minds frayed deep, seeping bloodied ichor, born of sightless lies. No god nor man can escape
from where madness lies, it lies in truth and shadowed gaze, in all things known to all. Born
of pain of age it tries, of truth it cannot hide. For only the mad could live a life upon the midnight
shore, where the singing moon is true as voices whispered in your ear. Only here did the tide of glass
shatter upon the nameless stones, for all its truths and all its lies only here did the lightning
chase the thunder across the starless moonlit skies.

All is lost and darkness reigns, for the midnight shore is gone. Its blood soaked sand and moonlit
whispers lost for none to see. The only sound is secrets kept and silence too deep to breath. The moon
is gone and the dark is here, with nothing left but me. Blind as much as men can be, I see no lightning
hear no thunder, consumed with all the rest. The silent shattering tide of glass that rolled back
out to sea, no longer crash against nameless stones or soundless whispers naught. Yet now I hear a
whispered song, sad and melancholy, perhaps behind the darkness the moonlit whispers cry, or maybe
madness comes, and madness dies, and all is gone, and all is lost, to a dark so deep, and black so cold
it devoured everything but me.

I know not what I am, and know not where I go. The dark is so very quiet, the black so very cold.

What am I to be now?

I can't hear the songs.

Why won't she sing to me?

What did I do to her, to stop the song?

So alone, alone, alone alone alone alone alone...

CRACK

Suddenly the darkness was not so dark, a single point of light in the never ending void. The light started to web out like cracks upon a window, and with a noise like gunfire the darkness shattered and disappeared, replaced with a place Maen had never seen before. A sprawling landscape lay before him, strange green hairs on the floor under him tickled his toes and unknown scents wafted to his nose. The sky was blue instead of black and confusion was written plain on his face, a word rose unbidden to his lips "Nexus" he breathed.

Powers:
Form:
His form usually just a black smoke cloud moves fast. Can change form into a physical body. In mist form can enter in bodies from mouth, ears, etc. all this allows him to do is strangle people from the inside. But this is easily stopped by magical defenses. Can change physical form slightly, has a main appearance that can change things like having claws, fangs, etc.

Aura of Insanity:
Maen's mind is so broken that his presence shatters the minds and wills of weak willed creatures, effect of strong creatures very reduced.

Midnight Shore:
Can call upon the Midnight Shore after it was consumed by the Dark So Deep, the Midnight Shore is the land where Maen lived. It was a small sort of pocket dimension which consisted of just the Sea of Glass, the shore and the moon. He lived there for as long as he can remember, being soothed by the songs until his bouts of madness caused his power to consume the Shore.
Sub Sections Of Midnight Shore:
Sea Of Glass: Can use the sea of glass as a weapons, millions of shards of glass available to be summoned and controlled as blades to fight. Blades can float and be used in other ways, the glass is completely silent.
Moonlit Whispers: Can channel the power of the moonlit whispers and song of the moon in the form of singing and music, playing on emotions and the mind. Able to soothe the darkest fears or cause the most vicious nightmares.
Wind: Ability to control wind, uses to fly.
Musical Master: Can play the lute, and flute extremely well.
Dark So Deep: The Dark So Deep is a power he has trouble controlling, it is essentially a formless darkness that consumes things. The power can either consume something and "destroy" it, or integrate it into himself giving him some of the powers of the thing he integrated, this is extremely slow though as it took untold years to consume the Midnight Shore. The darkness can be shaped into weapons like a sword or bow, but if his emotions are running wild then it reverts to tendril like whips that strike out at people.

Weapons: Lute & Flute: Maen's only belongings, doesn't know where they came from but they appear and disappear at will. Made of glossy black wood. Can be broken and then summoned again repaired.

Other: On demon faction because of his uncontrollable nature, it's the only one that seemed to fit him. Since he can't control some of his powers, in a fight demons may get injured too.
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@TheWindel @Kol @Lonewolf685 edit mentions don't work so new post i guess
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@Grombus
Sorry for the wait. Took some time to get multiple people to look things over.

Since Windel puts it best, i'll just convet his words on the matter:

First off he needs to format this into paragraphs. Second, he needs to be clear how this guy got into the Nexus. Purple prose is fine but he needs to be clear for the GMs.

Needs to explain what the purpose of the mist going in people does.

His insanity ability is hard to do because aside from NPCs, there's no one weak willed. Unless we say he has to get permission from a character's creator to use it on them.

Needs to explain what a Midnight Shore is.

Needs to explain Dark So Deep.
TheWindel


While we can appreciate making some stylistic decisions, being so vague in a competitive setting isn't doing anyone any favors, so some elaboration would be appreciated.
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@Grombus

Ok, so, my opinion on your character. I do appreciate the general mood you've set. In fact, it remembers me a bit of Poe style stories, so I do really like it.

That said, while vagueness, insanity and subtlety are good things for a novel, or maybe a horror/mystery RP, in a PVP focused game such as this one, you could do us a favor of adding some objective notes on how your character's powers work, and what they do.

As for your character's background, a bit of stretch to explain how/why he got on a war ridden plane of existence such as the Nexus would be appreciable, even if backgrounds hardly make any difference in the long run, keeping the continuity stable is a good.

That was all I had to say at the moment. Sorry for the wait, but RL is kind of a very capricious lady, y'know?
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@Lonewolf685 I explained the powers more and what the Midnight Shore was, I also added how he got to nexus. Also when he says change it to paragraphs are you talking about just reformatting the poem bit, because if so I can do that easily since it was only like that because I copy pasted it from my notepad.

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@KoL
Thanks b0ss

if you guys need me to change anything else or if powers are still to vague just say so and i got your back kiddo

EDIT AGAIN:
also for the insanity aura thing it was mainly just meant for npcs or if people gave permission to start messing with their heads in a fight
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@Mega Birb

We're going to be skipping ahead and ending the round, so consider this the warning to get your licks in while you can before we go to intermission. Not really a 24 hour warning, but tomorrow, the Battle of Alt Signia will be concluded in its entirety.

So if Torag wants to take up Suparna's offer, or react to stuff exploding, then best hurry.
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I think you're good now. If anything else comes up later, we can work it out.
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@KoL should i put it in characters page now?
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@Grombus

yes, go ahead
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@KoL should i put it in characters page now?


Since Windel and Lone gave their go as well, you can do so.

Just wait until tomorrow, when this battle is officially over so that you can post IC during the intermission times.
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@Mega Birb

We're going to be skipping ahead and ending the round, so consider this the warning to get your licks in while you can before we go to intermission. Not really a 24 hour warning, but tomorrow, the Battle of Alt Signia will be concluded in its entirety.

So if Torag wants to take up Suparna's offer, or react to stuff exploding, then best hurry.


Thank, though you can probably wrap it up whenever. I'm pretty sick right now, so if that post doesn't happen, just assume he told Suprana to not do the thing and went to check out what exactly exploded.
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