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@redbaron1234 Okay, given that, I would think the most egregious part of her moveset is her beam attack. I can rework that into some kind of short-range ki explosion.

And as I said before, I don't have a metric to actually quantify her strength with. In terms of raw physical ability, I would say that I would want to place her somewhere around the 70th or 80th percentile among Nomads.
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@Savo Great! Thanks for helping me iron Callus out! I’ll add him into the CS as soon as I get home.

(I also have shown you and the other gms ideas about a certain concept. Might wanna see what I have regarding my ideas)
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Well here he is. I've rewritten his backstory and added/modified a few of his techniques. I have no issues with any possible nerfs if he has too many moves or some moves that are too strong, in a worst case scenario I can just give him the same toolkit he had from the previous rp. I look forward to feedback.
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@wxps350

This is my formal petition for use of your faction in Mori's backstory?
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Karliah is gonna have her work cut out for her, trying to keep up with everyone.
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@Darkmoon Angel Call up Doomfist and have her borrow a gauntlet or two lol
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Here's my first entry for a character. What should I change?

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Alright, to respond to the people I did not get to responding to last night... will review character sheets when I get home, so don't expect much here... in any case...

@Dead Cruiser the percentiles is unnecessary. I'll give you an example of what we are requesting you to do when I get home. I don't want you to list it through percentiles, I want it to be shown through the description of her attacks... or something like that.

@Pirouette I talked to wxp about it on discord and he responded that she looks good; nothing screws up his own plans with his company so the complaint I had earlier now equates to nothing :P

So work on Death and Decay as you mentioned earlier and tell me when it's done. If it works well, she gets a stamp of approval on my end and I'll see whether or not the other two see nothing wrong with her.

@dragonmancer, I was about to say you would function as a returner in this case, lol. But for now since you've made your dude... oh well, will look over him later. Glad to see you're back, though this does raise a few questions about Fafnir... again, will ask later.

@Lmpkio I have taken a glimpse and found the notion interesting. I'll read the rest over tonight over Diego Brando's organization.

In any case, I'm half tempted to finally induct you all into our discord... maybe I should, maybe I won't? I'll just wait for a bit and see how things are... also will try to have the prompts for the arcs up as soon as I can... but for now, adieu!
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I've noticed at least two other characters with knightly armor. I'm especially interested in how a conversation would play out between Fafnir and Vikkar
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@dragonmancer I was going to point that out actually...

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They should join the knights of the old cult
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@Savo K.

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Hidden 6 yrs ago Post by Darkmoon Angel
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Will our characters get new abilities as they get stronger, and if so, will we have to edit our character sheets if they do?
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Alright, now lets knock out a few things, shall we? Judgement will rain from above in a few minutes.

@Darkmoon Angel trust me, Karliah won't be at the bottom of the pecking order at the moment. That award will go to a trio of characters in the making who are some birds of a feather that flock together.

And along with that, every so often we will all do changelogs to update our characters, so aye, we will most likely get new abilities to a certain degree... either that, or improvements performed, either or, everyone will know when the time is right.

@dragonmancer I'm more curious to see how the conversation between him and Margot might turn out since their last excursion... possibly Aldous as well, mayhaps...

@Dead Cruiser alright, so, here's the example I'm going to demonstrate. My recommendation is that you change it from this...

■ Black Star Strike
Makoto's power cannot be understated. Even this technique, a simple straight punch, is enough to defeat most opponents, with all of her terrifying strength behind it. Those that have endured it compare it to being struck by the cannon of a battleship.


... to something like this.

■ Black Star Strike
Makoto's simply rushes at the opponent and launches a straightforward, but powerful punch at the opponent. While she has been able to best most average opponents in one punch with it, she has never exactly used it against an actual Nomad.


It doesn't come off as too overblown, but it doesn't undercut her strength either. You see where I'm going with this for the description of her specials and fighting style?

With that said, back to the chopping block... *Sharpens cleaver.*
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Question. are aliens allowed? yay or nay?

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@dragonmancer The conversation would probably involve some fists and fire lol
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I was taking a brief glance and for a moment thought we had a new alien character @DracoLunaris...

Also, yay. Again, will get around to doing your oni kid soon, still thinking on stuff in our chat.
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Time to set em' up, knock em' down, domino's!

I'm going to get through the ones I think are the easiest first, sooooooooooooooo-


@Pirouette lets skip all the formalities and get to Death and Decay.

... done. She's good to go. Get your approval from both @redbaron1234 and @KaiserElectric and you're free to post her in the tab.


@dragonmancer, a returner with an altered character. Description, backstory, and personality are to go on For the most part his rushdown kit has remained the same with some differences than before, most of which are acceptable. My main question is... why does he have both Warrior's Wrath and Dragon's Blaze in his kit? Both of them function as a knockback.

Maybe you could take out one of them because I don't see either or as necessary.

Supers look fine so far, but for now, only issue is why he has two of the same things (sort of; only like two differences between the two), so unless you have a good reason or remove it, he's not approved in my book.


@Valor alright, so I still didn't think you needed to remove one of your supers just because we couldn't figure out how long a set post would be for it to be enacted. I still think you should keep it, save have it worked out with trust/your best judgement. It worked well for what it did, but that's just me, imo.

Moving on...

The only real beef I have (other than you removing that super :P) is the permanent damage over time effect for Living Metal if someone strike him and leaves their fist in him for some insurmountable time. At least give the users some way to get rid of it, like make the DoT temporary, or keep the damage "permanent," lest the fighter does something to ward them off, sort of like using a torch in Dark Souls 3 wards off the maggots eating away at your character in a certain part of the game.

So yeah, straighten that portion out and he'll be good to go on my end... unless you add the speed super back, then we'll do a bit of discussing on my end :P


And there goes what I consider the easiest reviews for me... welp, time to stop being lazy and get to the rest!~
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@Savo

True, I'm sure his conversation with Margot will also be interesting.

I don't have much to say for the similar abilities, I'll scrap Warrior's Wrath. Anything else to cover before I put him into the Char tab?
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@Savo

True, I'm sure his conversation with Margot will also be interesting.

I don't have much to say for the similar abilities, I'll scrap Warrior's Wrath. Anything else to cover before I put him into the Char tab?


Yup, you gotta wait until you get red and Kai's approval too. Once they give you the thumbs up, then you can move him to the character tab.
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Makoto is modified for re-review.

Conceptually brewing my second character. Here's the preview for it.
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