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THIS RP IS FULL.

"With the passing of the Age of Gods and the start of the Common Era, Mankind has become the most prosperous species in the world. The fate of the planet is in our hands. We are the ones who will write its epitaph. Thankfully, there is a map to prolong mankind's survival and ensure its everlasting prosperity.
In the world of magi, this is known as... the Human Order."




Welcome to Chaldea. You are the best of the best. At least that what we’re telling you. But we’re just thankful you’re here at all. Chaldea exist as an observation facility primarily. But since the founding of our organization we have found the odd moment in human history that is a blemish. A point that exists to mangle our timeline, and send humanity off its course. These are better known as Singularities.

To combat each Singularity, a team of four mages are gathered, and then sent into the field. Summoning Heroic spirits in the process. Chances are you have had time to talk with your servant from a prior summoning, or perhaps the servant summoned in done on the field. It’s your choice.

Consider this your mission briefing in that regard. The facility has been in need of fresh blood for a while. You’re it.

Your first point is a small singularity in Fuyuki. Something about things going off path. Anyway, small squabbles like this happen all the time. Show up, find who or what went wrong, and set it right. Time will set itself right when that’s done.

Are you ready? Don’t respond, we’re sending you there now.

Rules
1 - Don’t Godmod
2 - Be a decent person. If you have a problem with another player, you are invited to tell a GM. We’ll do what we can.
3 - There will be only four Master slots. But Eight Servant slots. Each Master can provide mana for two servants at a time.
4 - If a servant dies, the player is allowed to perform a re-roll. If a Master dies (Which is less likely) they are not allowed to re-roll until the end of a Singularity. If a Master quits, another player is allowed to take over the character, and replace them when the Singularity ends.
5 - At the end of a singularity, you are allowed to make a new servant, and replace the old one. To keep scenarios from getting stale.

Servant Gatcha:
While likely unnecessary, the mods have elected to include a Gatcha system. We have made up a list of Servants/Classes, and if interested you can ask to roll the Gatcha. One of the 20 options will be rolled up, and you will be allowed to roll again, or go with that idea. (Or decide to do something else entirely.) It’s for those who have an interest in random chance.




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First.

Nah seriously. Expect an Olivier your way sometime tomorrow or later in the evening.
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boop

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Well, here she is. My confidence is in the negatives XD

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@Rondo of Blood
- So, remove the revelation stuff from Protection of the Goddess of Wisdom. Mostly because as an assassin, you're shockingly more frontloaded in the combat department. Perhaps just use the explanation that "Because Athena has no beef in this, she doesn't feel obligated to help. She already did her stuff with Dio." Depending on how the story goes, she may jump in to slap him with a "HEY! BITCH! LET ME HELP!"
- Remove the armor. I feel like Assassins just wouldn't wear armor into battle. Since you're trying to be sneaky, and armor just gives you away. He's already got a lot of CQC stuff, and you can keep the shield. Maybe pick one weapon instead of having both sword and shield.
- Drop the rank of Palládio Antistrofí - Devious Theft of the Divine Sanctuary to C++. Feels more suited to a rank that scales depending on the amount of defense it takes away, rather than a flat rank.

@ERode
- Gawain is good. Accepted by Flood and I.

@Pyromania99
- Accepted by Flood and I. Feel free to give her a little more ability outside combat if you wish.

@XmasForJuan
- Accepted by Flood and I.

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@XmasForJuan

Ah, I would like to mention one thing however. Feel free to remove the debuff from your 2nd Noble Phantasm, its unnecessary and we would accept it without the debuff.
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Oh really? o . O
That Noble Phantasm was actually something I wasn't too sure about since it seemed needlessly powerful, but I'll take it ^^
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@Rondo of Blood
- So, remove the revelation stuff from Protection of the Goddess of Wisdom. Mostly because as an assassin, you're shockingly more frontloaded in the combat department. Perhaps just use the explanation that "Because Athena has no beef in this, she doesn't feel obligated to help. She already did her stuff with Dio." Depending on how the story goes, she may jump in to slap him with a "HEY! BITCH! LET ME HELP!"
- Remove the armor. I feel like Assassins just wouldn't wear armor into battle. Since you're trying to be sneaky, and armor just gives you away. He's already got a lot of CQC stuff, and you can keep the shield. Maybe pick one weapon instead of having both sword and shield.
- Drop the rank of Palládio Antistrofí - Devious Theft of the Divine Sanctuary to C++. Feels more suited to a rank that scales depending on the amount of defense it takes away, rather than a flat rank.

For the first point, I'd like to point out the revelation portion being a very important part of his kit as an Assassin. Diomedes wouldn't have pulled off the stuff he did without following prophecies. I can specify it being a strictly out of combat thing, but I feel like it's an important part of his utility to remain as a guidance sort of thing.

For the second point, I agree and will lose the shield and armor

For the third point, I feel like a rank of A is appropriate mainly because of how much of an impact the action did in the Trojan War, as well as how it's tied with the overall destruction of Troy as a whole as well as the paradox regarding the Palladium. It feels weird deranking it especially given how quite a few canon conceptual defenses play on an absolute rank-by-rank basis (such as God Hand), and mods wouldn't matter in that case either.
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@Rondo of Blood

I'll accept Diomedes, wait on @Reflection.
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Well, so let's see:

@Rondo of Blood, @Pyromania99, @ERode, @XmasForJuan, @Rune_Alchemist - Supposing that you are approved by @Reflection and @floodtalon, you should all be ok by me as well.

@Stormborn - However, your character has issues. Mostly related to her backstory and the way it should affect her CS. Here are the most important ones:
- Since she's not a part of the Mage's Association she shouldn't have a magical crest at all. That's more or less an endemic concept to the mages of the Association since it's the best way to secure that their family's knowledge is preserved in their search for a path to the Root. Other spellcasters don't do that.
- Speaking the language of Elementals is something that's not a skill that's possible to be achieved by normal humans no matter what your magecraft foundation is. The only modern human that's known to be able to do this had a very specific set of circumstances happen in his background to allow it that's absolutely impossible to replicate. Your character may be capable of some basic comprehension when it comes to communicating with creatures that don't speak human languages, but the ability for unrestrained talking with animals and Elementals should be considered lost knowledge.
- What exactly those two first mystic codes (the cloak and dagger) in her description do?
- Also, you can't talk with the dead if they are already departed from the World. While it's not impossible to communicate with past generations of one's family this would also mean that all of them have been hanging around in the World as wraiths, or similar presences ever since they died. And since spirits dissipate over time, this has a limit of how far back you can achieve any meaningful interaction with them which is probably around no more than a couple centuries or so. Any spirit older than this is probably too far gone from humanity to be able to understand or be understood.
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@Reflection
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Feel free to bombard me with criticism. :3
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Change Log (6:20PM on 6/20/2019):
-RIP Dragon Shot 2016-2019
-Slightly modified the purview of Mystic Code Crafting to better reflect intent
-Expanded on hexagram bullets to fit things I didn't mention in initial draft
-Annoying typos
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If those two new slots are still free, I would like to state my interest! I can join the Discord when I'm home!
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