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S H I N G E T S U
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The Demon Slaying Corps have accomplished their mission, Kibutsuji Muzan has been destroyed and the demons that remain throughout Japan are beginning to run thin. The age of Demons fearing Humans is over, and now the only thing left to do is to purge Japan of those that remain.
Or so you would think.
It is the dawn of the Shōwa period and with imperialism on the upswing the emperor has caught wind of the secret organization and wishes to assimilate them into the Imperial Japanese Army. The Ubuyashiki Family wishes to retain the tradition of being independent of military control. Not only this, but a schism itself has formed within the Demon Slaying Corps itself. While there are many who with lasting grudges against demons for slaughtering their families and loves ones, there are some who believe that there may be a possibility that some of the remaining demons may not need to be slain. This divide within the corps has caused a schism between those who wish to fully eradicate the demons from this world, and those who wish to allow non-malevolent demons to live out the rest of their long-long life.


The Dawn of a New Era




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The Demon Slaying Corps : 鬼き殺さつ隊たい

The name of an organization that has existed since ancient times, dedicated to protecting humanity from Demons. There are hundreds of Demon Slayers within the organization and have as of yet been recognized by the government of Japan, but steps are being taken to change this. Demon Slayers are primarily hand-selected by a master who is currently enlisted, or was prior enlisted in the Corps, however there are instances of those who hail from families that served the organization over several generations being brought upon Final Selection nonetheless. Upon the completion of Final Selection, a student is brought to the summit of Fujikasane where they choose the ore used to create their Nichirin Sword and are gifted a Kasugai Crow. Their prime directive was previously to seek out and destroy Kibutsuji Muzan, but after his downfall at the hands of one of the Pillars the goal of the organization seems to be vague at this point.
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The Imperial Japanese Army : 大日本帝國陸軍

With the growing movement of Ultra-Nationalism in Japan the people would transition away from the artistic free-thinking of past eras instead local leaders, such as mayors, teachers, and Shinto priests were recruited by the various movements to indoctrinate the populace under these ideals. They had little time for the pragmatic ideas of the business elite and party politicians. Their loyalty was practically to the Emperor and the military. With this harsh and hardened political state the militarism of the country would have it's own renaissance as soon-near wars would witness the newfound strength of a unified Japan. The spread of military presence can be felt throughout all of Japan, and would-be prospects for the Demon Slaying Corps have even been poached from their masters for the war machine themselves.
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Shingetsu : 新月

To counteract the continued state of animosity towards demons within Japan, an organization known as Shingetsu has emerged out of the darkness to protect demons deemed innocent from harm. The members of this group are both human and demon and range from the power of a Mizunoto all the way up to that of a Pillar. While Shingetsu's existence is known both to the Demon Slaying Corps and the upper echelons of the Japanese Imperial Army, the members of this organization have kept their identities safely hidden. It is believed even by the current Ubuyashiki that leads the Demon Slaying Corps that one, if not multiple pillars may be a part of this group without his knowledge. Because of this knowledge being readily known within the Corps there is a constant air of distrust between comrades all the way up the ranks even to the Pillars themselves, unknowing of who was a traitor, and who would live up to the symbol painted upon their back. “Destroy.”
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Would it be okay to reserve the Fire pillar slot? I could have a sheet up by tomorrow.
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i need to stop staying up until 3 AM

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No reservations I am sorry! I won’t be reviewing sheets till I have 5-6 though so you may have time.
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While I’m not reviewing sheets till I get a few more, I just wanted to let you know that while incorporating fire into your breathing style in a realistic way is fine. Users of Breath of Flames don’t actually innately do this, and manipulation of the element in which a Breath is named isn’t really the point. The fundamentals of why they are named after these things is symbolic of the mannerisms or the sword style, and effects that the specific Breathing Technique have on the body.
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@Haruharara Oh, I see. The anime led me to believe it was closely related to manipulating the actual elements (since they show water, fire, and lightning), but I suppose that isn't the case.

EDIT: Edited things a bit. Hopefully now it's a bit better.
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Hiya folks, I'm very interested in joining this RP
I do have a few questions though, hope you don't mind me PMing you Haruharara :)
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I'm fairly interested! In the interest check you mentioned characters of varied backgrounds/upbringings, and I have a pretty weird idea I'd like to get your opinion on @Haruharara if you don't mind a PM?
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Of course, send me a PM and we shall discuss!
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CS Review Time~
@Zoey White
Hello person! You should know how my review system works at this point so I'll get straight into it.
*. I'd like you to glance through your bio and hone down more-so on the Demon Slaying Corps. What drew her to the Breath of Wind style? How did she find out about Muzan? Just some more elaboration on her time-experience on how she got to the point she's at rather than solely on the pre-dark-stuff? Just convey that story a bit more clearly, and I'll give you the big green light.

@OwO
Hi UwU.
*. Another character with a revenge story against the demons, but thank you for explaining the transition of noodle boy to swordsman and as such bio checks out. Blade is unique and fits the thematic, Breath of the Crane is cool and the use seems viable and unique and as such he's solid. Green light to move him over to characters whenever you're ready.

@SilverPaw
Ohh, this art looks promising.
*. So while the bio checks out and the sheet itself is very detailed and well-written, the only thing that I take issue with is the the use of literal fire in your sword style when the Breath of Flames is already established and kind of embodies something else entirely. So while I'm not outright going to reject your sheet, I'll have you rethink the premise of her sword/combat and make it a little less fantastical.

@heroic2019
It's the other saber.
*. What a refreshing bio, and it checks out too. Breathing style is unique and viable so it also checks out with a Haru stamp of approval, and the Zenitsu super-hearing is fine as long as you don't abuse it. So you get the green light and can move the character over whenever you're ready.

@Jacky
That's an edgy boy.
*. Okay, so your bio would check out if not for the quick jump to Pillar without any elaboration of how he came to that point or the root of his swordstyle. You need to kill a Demon Moon or inherit the role from a previous pillar, and that's the only way to get to that role. But the Mountain theme of your style on the other hand isn't explained really well either, so if you could elaborate on what sets it differently from Breath of Stone/Earth because it sounds eerily the same. But other than that, just rethink some of those things and spin him back.

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@Haruharara Yeah, I was already considering doing so since discovering the breath techniques don't lead to manipulating some sort of supernatural force (which I kinda assumed). Will do some changes to the moves.
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Here we go c:

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@Haruharara Okay, made some changes. Hope it's better.
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I haven't been on this site for years but a friend told me about this RP I am interested!

Give me an hour and I'll have a sheet!
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Second round of reviews will be up tonight or tomorrow.

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