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I’m already fighting the urge
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We love an edgy
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We love an edgy


@Lord Wraith loves edging
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@Lord Wraith loves edging


Uh, yeah, edging builds trust, intimacy and submission.

Plus, big explosion.

Ka-boom.
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Uh, yeah, edging builds trust, intimacy and submission.

Plus, big explosion.

Ka-boom.


This is like the cliff notes of a traditional Wraith post
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I’m already fighting the urge


Resist Brutal. Cause if you do that, I'm gonna have to make a love interest who has fallen from grace and finds your edgy character in the pits of her despair and has them help guide her out of it.
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You know me too well.
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Going back to the edgy conversation, assuming I'm able to stay consistent enough to be granted a second character my idea for sure leans toward the edgier side of things considering the whole premise revolves around hunting monsters and demons while having family ties on the dark side (going 2 for 2 on characters with parental issues). Definitely keep hearing Animal I Have Become in my head everytime I think about the character.
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Oh so a lonely girl who is so oversaturated with all the death in the City that she barely experiences the world directly isn't edgy enough for you?

no storm, that's just melancholic

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Oh so a lonely girl who is so oversaturated with all the death in the City that she barely experiences the world directly isn't edgy enough for you?

no storm, that's just melancholic



So the son of a dynasty who has been outcast because he doesn't fit his father's expectations and now lives under an assumed name in one of the poorest parts of the city surrounded by grime and crime while he lurks in the shadows doing the occasional good deed isn't edgy enough for you?

no that's just cliché
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@StormyX I love the way you write Eve’s prose. That shit’s hypnotic.
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@NeoAJ@Theyra we are terribly sorry for the delay, but accepted.

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Finally finished catching up and will get something out either tonight or tomorrow.
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So I feel like putting this here. This is a plot that is going on in the background for everyone and a couple of people are already getting invested in.

These are most of the facts as Dusk understands them, and most these facts have been reported on.


  • Greys all over the city are going missing.
  • Most, if not all, these greys are mundane every people who use their powers in their everyday lives.
  • some have shown up months later, blood drained, clean clothed, scrubbed clean and missing their hair.
  • Mountain is the most public killing, however doesn't wholly match the pattern.


Eve is getting in on it, Dusk will be entering the scene soon as will Rock and Scott.

I'm reading all the posts and finding ways to loosely connect things. I'm personally trying for an Invincible style approach where there is more going on in the world than one big thing. The story changes with the whims and words of you all.
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Was thinking that maybe a St Dymphna’s kid could go missing if you wanted to do a collab at one point
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@StormyX I love the way you write Eve’s prose. That shit’s hypnotic.


Thank you so much, I've been enjoying writing her a lot. Wanted to just post here too that
Every muscle protested and like a seasoned politician, he simply ignored them.
made me lmao. Low key Bret being Cumbrian cracks me up a bit as well because that's far too close to home for me

Caught up entirely on the IC now, can't believe we've blitzed out a page and not only that, everyone has added some lore and depth to Calder City to help flesh it out.

Scott is trying to do his best as a hero and live up to his generational legacy. The save of Marth was really sweet and I hope the characters interact again!

Archie is so enjoyable to read as this origin story. Seeing where he is now in his life and knowing the jump we have to make to get him to becoming the Warlock... I CAN'T wait.

Dani, with Scott are the heart of the RP for me so far, really representing what I feel it means to be a Grey and want to do your best. I really like what Eddie is setting up with Dani in keeping her anonymity, but still needing to step in just because it feels right. I hope she gets her radio job!

Bret and The Pilgrim are doing some great lifting in adding a seedy underbelly to the City that's also making it feel so alive - with another crimelord alongside the Raciti Famiglia in the City, I would imagine they are rivals and might have plays for power which could give Eve an in with Bret at some point. (Thinking ahead)

Love Richard's powers, it's so needed in the City to be able to fix and mend things and I enjoyed the way that was writter, I'm looking forward to seeing more of him, and how he will interact with some of the other characters.

Another heart of this RP, is definitely Joanie - you can feel the love she has in that first post and the respect the other kids have for her. She's everyone's big sister, until she meets her own twisted sister in Eve (that was a fun collab so thank you for cameoing!) I love what Natty is building up there, and I'm rooting for Joanie. Also, we absolutely hate Caleb in this household!

The Lucie post was a fun read, and I kept having to wrap my head around what it would be like to live such a life (or 4 I suppose!) but it was really sharp, funny, and gave quite a few tells to the character(s). Keen to see the dynamic continue!

Absolutely love Rock and the way Doc wrote that first post, leading into a fantastic plot with Detective Dusk; Sep has been doing some great work to develop plot threads for the overarching story of the game. I really like that Dusk carries a tainted legacy with him, and is trying his best to do good things despite the pressures of his family and his name.

Qing Yuan too - absolutely cannot wait to see more of him and I'm just looking for any kind of excuse to have him and Eve meet, I don't know, RP intuition I think it might be an interesting meeting that they'd have, and I think Qing could really help Eve calm her mind and her spirit (and spirits lol)

So, that is all to say GREAT STUFF and I'm fully hooked and invested, and we still have more characters to go.

Please give me all the collabs, thank u.

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@StormyxAs a Cumbrian, I want my people represented! So I thought fuck it, let’s make a Cumbrian secret agent. Why the hell not?
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@StormyxAs a Cumbrian, I want my people represented! So I thought fuck it, let’s make a Cumbrian secret agent. Why the hell not?


Oh god you're a Cumbrian? That's where I am now and most work days. It's not impossible we've driven right passed eachother.

I don't like it.

Also even for people not actively tied to the plot I'm weaving I'll try and find a way to make you work in the narrative so you feel like part of the world.
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Oh god you're a Cumbrian? That's where I am now and most work days. It's not impossible we've driven right passed eachother.

I don't like it.

Also even for people not actively tied to the plot I'm weaving I'll try and find a way to make you work in the narrative so you feel like part of the world.


Born and bred but I haven’t lived there for about ten years now. Moved down south when I met my wife. Though now we’re moving up to Edinburgh in a couple of weeks, so I’ll probably be visiting the family more often.

Also in the same vein as Sep, I’ve already talked to a few of you but if anyone has any interests in the superpowers drug plot, I’m open for you to get involved and help build it. It’s very much a work in progress and not something I have ironed out in any great detail.
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So I feel like putting this here. This is a plot that is going on in the background for everyone and a couple of people are already getting invested in.

These are most of the facts as Dusk understands them, and most these facts have been reported on.


  • Greys all over the city are going missing.
  • Most, if not all, these greys are mundane every people who use their powers in their everyday lives.
  • some have shown up months later, blood drained, clean clothed, scrubbed clean and missing their hair.
  • Mountain is the most public killing, however doesn't wholly match the pattern.


Eve is getting in on it, Dusk will be entering the scene soon as will Rock and Scott.

I'm reading all the posts and finding ways to loosely connect things. I'm personally trying for an Invincible style approach where there is more going on in the world than one big thing. The story changes with the whims and words of you all.


You know, as someone who's still trying to figure out how and why Aurora starts moonlighting again, this wouldn't be a terribly difficult hook to start seeding...
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