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Hidden 6 yrs ago 6 yrs ago Post by mickilennial
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At any rate, my short (but to the point) opener is up. I've got a few notes outlined for post two, so that'll be fun.

Edit: Adjusted some typographic errors and formatting choices I missed.
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Batman will join the proceedings later on tonight.

There's alot I want to get right with this post, even if I'm 20 posts behind by the time it's finished.
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I see Time Stamps.

RIP Continuity.
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This RP is really gonna force me to get better at writing fight action.


I low-key hate writing fights.

Okay, "hate" is an overstatement. It's more like... frustration. The kind of frustration you get when you don't understand something in school, or when you're not as skilled at a hobby as you'd like to be.

Boy, probably not a great thing to hear from the Captain America player, huh? Well, at least Rogers will be throwing down with a lot of folks this season, so I'll have plenty of chances to get it right.
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I low-key hate writing fights.

Okay, "hate" is an overstatement. It's more like... frustration. The kind of frustration you get when you don't understand something in school, or when you're not as skilled at a hobby as you'd like to be.

Boy, probably not a great thing to hear from the Captain America player, huh? Well, at least Rogers will be throwing down with a lot of folks this season, so I'll have plenty of chances to get it right.


I'm Low-Key glad to have my Reverse Flash out of the way and going against the Rogues.

What's worse than writing a fight scene with One Speedster? A fight scene with two fucking Speedsters. It's such a cinematic/pictographic ability that the fight isn't very interesting in writing.

Also it's hard not to make a fight feel rushed when one person is going so fast they're literally a blur.
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I am assuming that the entire world knows about the big fight on Raft, the Silver Surfer and his first introduction, and the other superheroes and it's on film? I don't want to fuck things up when I post my second part.
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I am assuming that the entire world knows about the big fight on Raft, the Silver Surfer and his first introduction, and the other superheroes and it's on film? I don't want to fuck things up when I post my second part.


I think that's a pretty good assumption.

@Morden Man made a case of pointing out reporters on the scene, Iris herself reported on it too. I think all the major events will be public knowledge, even the Surfer V.S Superman and Flash fight was public knowledge.
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I would also assume that the Surfer v.s. Superman & Flash took place a month or two before the big battle?
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Probably a few weeks prior. A month would suffice.
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Formatting my post now. Should be up shortly. Past 2 is in its infancy so probably won't happen until Wednesday. But planning on writing a lot this weekend.
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Character sheet up tomorrow. Internet should get fixed Friday, and I'll look to have 2 or 3 posts in the chamber by then.
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Woo, did the thing.

Took me several hours, but I did the thing.
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And with that, the two part prologue is done. I will try to post more later on this week, but I have three midterms to take this week. So, I will be doing that for most of the week.
Hopefully, there isn't nothing wrong with my post.
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@Star Lord there's some continuity issues. Flash ran after the board, supersonic punched Surfer and ko'd him and S.H.I.E.L.D then took him into custody. It's not a case of Surfer coming back to earth, it's a case of him breaking out.
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@Sep oof. good thing that I posted at two in the morning so nobody else can see my mistakes! hehehe
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@Star Lord Just to clarify then, your current posts are set three months ago?
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@Sep Yes, those two posts are set three months ago. Now, however, the rest of them will be set in the present.
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Currently working on post two out of... however many.
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Woo, did the thing.

Took me several hours, but I did the thing.


I just checked it out. Good post, but Green Goblin and Norman Osborn are used in it a lot. Did you check with our Spider-Woman player to make sure it was okay to take those liberties with a character in his sphere of influence?
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Introducing Iris West as the Flash!

Wait damnit, I did that last season... I didn't screw with the timeline enough.
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