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7 days ago
Current You know you're getting old when you start getting excited after discovering a new cleaning product that makes it SO, SO MUCH easier to clean stains from the bathroom floor.
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5 mos ago
I'm back! Still recovering but I'm finally home again.
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5 mos ago
So... I ended up having to be hospitalized... Doing fine but not enough to go home yet. Sorry for the delays. Hopefully will be back home this week.
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10 mos ago
I've just realized that in all the 9 years I've been part of this site, I've never had to change my name, make an alt account or anything like that!
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"Humanity takes great pride in three things. Their willpower, their greed and their mortality.

Their will and endless greed allows them to grow and ascend past other creatures
But their mortality denies them divinity

It's a delightful purgatory between being Fallen and being Divine"


Most Recent Posts

@Gowi

I am by no means saying that I will ignore or deliberately infringe any rules stated by you for the RP.
If my writing level does not meet your standards I will, sadly, drop the RP, if that's what you desire.

I don't think you needed to be that authoritative on your last post too. I hate unnecessary conflicts. Say a word and I'll be off without even replying (again, if its your wish). Arguing about such trivial matters is useless and will serve only to bother both parties.

Especially about all the line breaks.

As I said, if you can tolerate posts without as many line breaks as you want (again, not because I'm deliberately ignoring your ruled, but because I might forget about them), then I will gladly participate of this RP (which is, by the way, getting me extremely hyped), but if it doesn't, I will understand.

PS: My keyboard is fcked up. Some letters doesn't work as well as they should. That explains why my "d" and "g" sometimes doesn't appear.
You can hit me all you want with your rules, but I still defend that rules are detrimental to creativity in general.
*flashbacks**

Oh no...

ITS THE D DAY ALL OVER AGAIN!!!

PROTECT YOUR GRAMMAR ERRORS EVERYONE!!!

Not kidding though, although my formatting might not be *your* ideal formatting, I hope you can find my style at least tolerable.
Or maybe about obsession for formatting and grammar?





I didn't take it as a critic, but I got mildly offended by your assumption that I don't know how to construct a proper text.

You don't need to teach me. But if you are that worried about formatting, metric and rigid rules to build a text, i'll abide by them.

Just remember that there are innumerous ways on how to organize a text, and not only one. Wordsmithing is not math. There is not a specific formula that you need to follow in order to produce good results.

There are many writing movements, both traditional an modern, that defend constructing texts without any metric or laws, instead thinking that it should come naturally but there are also some that think that every text needs a rigid and specific metric and organization.

Personally I defend freedom in writing. Writing a story or a poem is different from writing an document. Any type of creative writing should be done without any kind of "rules" restricting it.
For example: emulating a foreign accent in a text.
Its more impacting if you write "Like zis for example" than doing something like

"Oh, how are you today, fine gentlemen?" he asked with a strong germanic accent.

Of course, both can work, but witch one is more impacting in a text? Which one helps the most to create an atmosphere?

OBS: IMPORTANT!!!
I'm not mad ppl! I might be slightly annoyed, but I'm not irritated or mad at all! Take it easy~
@Gowi

Well, as I said, they're perfectly fine and organized for me.
I don't usually write "like a blob" as you said, cramping everything together, but I also think that excessive formatting is both too tiring and unnecessary.

Typos are very rare, since I actually DO get ashamed when I write something wrong. Be it only because I wasn't paying attention or because I was writing them from my cellphone.

People often have different standards regarding to post formatting and different writing styles.
I don't think there is anything wrong with my posts. Especially due to the fact that I tend to separate each sentence that a character say, so its easier to read the dialog itself.

I tend to organize every post in a way so its easier to read the dialog between two characters. Separating each sentence, followed by the character's thoughts behind the sentence or any specific action performed by it following the said sentence.

I can use a formal, more correct and traditional formatting if you want. You just have to tell me to do so. I started doing so because many people used to complain about my posts and their formatting when I started writing on the "Free Roleplay" forum. After some time, I started to organize my posts like that so they wouldn't get too cramped and tiring to read (the way they are organized you can straight up ignore most things directly after my character's answers (mainly my character thoughts & things like that.) and still understand what's happening.

PS: don't misunderstand the way I'm writing. I'm not mad or anything, writing like this is just a bad habit of mine (using formal words etc.)
@Fetzen

I couldn't help myself. Your tags were so organized and pretty...

So I went there and... stole em'

@Fetzen

HAHAHA you got me!
Well... I
Did a thing




Emmerich Jaeger


Interacting with:@Superboy@TheDoctor@Dark Light@Noxx@Deos Morran@Ellion@shagranoz@WeepingLiberty@Fetzen@Bright_Ops@Bright_Ops

After the gnome issue was dealt with, and the transforming hunter dead, Emmerich had no reason to stay like that anymore.
"It vas a delightful night indeed." he said laughing as he took off his mask. Almost instantly, his posture changed, and the creepy and sinister aura that hovered over him disappeared as suddenly as it started.

"*sigh* Every time you get out somesink happens, doesnt it? Kruel and rusless as alvays... At least try to not get my kloses dirty next time..." Emmerich said to the mask before putting it on a pocket inside his overall. "Zee hunter kould still be saved..." he mumbled to himself, looking to the scorched remains of the hunter and kneeling down examining the remnants of some gnomes.

"Going avay or stayink silent is not an option... I vill need to explain myself to zee osers..." he thought to himself, looking to the mangled bodies on the floor and trying to clean his clothes from the foul smelling blood.

As he walked back to the tavern, he looked around for Avalon. He didn't know if she would look for him after what his other persona did, but he hoped she would. He didn't know why, but he felt... different. He felt like the beast inside him was under control when he was with her, he felt that it stopped trying to claw and gnaw its way out from the back of its mind.

It was getting worse each day. He knew that the beast was part of him, but each day that passed he feared that the beast would take control.

With those grim thoughts on his mind, and a weird warm feeling on his chest he kept searching for Avalon, but was interrupted by a very... unique sight.

Under another hunter, there was the most intriguing creature he ever saw. A hybrid. Part dragon part girl, and apparently, she was using some very powerful magic. His scholar side took over almost instantly, curiosity growing stronger as he walked hastily towards her, with his eyes shining.

"Little miss, don't be afraid, kould you ansver me some questions? Vat are you? How vere you born? Are your parents witches or humans?" he yelled, asking the little girl.
His posture and aura were completely different from before, he had the eyes of a scholar: excited and happy when staring at the unknown...

"*ahem* I'm sorry." he said regaining his composure.

"I don't sink she is very komfortable under your weigh. No offenses, of kourse." he said with a chuckle, offering his hand to the hunter.

"Zee fight is over, now its time for zee mediks to do zeir vork. If I'm not mistaken, you vere yelling somesink about healink and taking kare of zee vounded, yes?" he said to the hybrid girl, looking to his burnt hand. "I vonder if you kould heal my hand later."

"Maybe you vill be able to help some of zem, but i must warn you little one, be kareful. I'm a scholar, so its only natural for me to be attrakted by you, but there are some around here zat voulnt be komfortable to have a vitch around zem. Your life may be in danger... I'll try to make sure zat no one looses zeir mind ven zey see you at zee tavern, but i kant promise zat i vill be able to stop zem. Its your choice: you can eiser go to zee tavern and try to heal zee wounded and earn zee hunters' trust or run away." he said, genuinely worried about the hybrid girl.

"Vell, i cant run, nor change vat happened... I believe i owe some explanations to zee oser hunters. Meet me at zee tavern if you care to hear zem..." he said to the hunters nearby, heading towards the tavern, but still searching with his eyes for Avalon.



Shai

Interacting with:@Superboy@TheDoctor@Dark Light@Noxx@Deos Morran@Ellion@shagranoz@WeepingLiberty@Fetzen@Bright_Ops@Bright_Ops

" Get down!" the nearby hunter yelled, throwing himself over her, kocking her down

"Ouch! Why would yo-" Shai was protesting as she heard a whistle and felt two big bolts passing over hers and the other hunter's head.

She stood there, laying on the ground, in shock for a while.

"T-thank you. You saved my life." she said, her eyes wide open.

When she looked up again, everything had happened so fast... Fire everywhere as a weird woman yelled, scorching and killing many gnomes.
Just as she looked towards the hunter that she was trying to save, she saw it burning inside the flames.

"No... The doctor said it could still save the hunter..." she mumbled as its flesh turned to ash in the hot flames.

She kept looking for the terrible scene in front of her, the fire, the dead hunter... It was too chaotic, too many things were happening...

“Someone start looking for injured and get them some medical attention!” Shai heard the firebomb woman yelling.

Shaking her head, she recompose herself. "Right... the wounded. Umm, mr. Hunter, thanks for saving me but... you are... kinda heavy..." she said trying to push him off her.

"Little miss, don't be afraid, kould you ansver me some questions?" a voice with a heavy accent called for her.
Looking around for the owner of that voice, she jumped as she saw the sinister and creepy man who was dancing around the battlefield, only... there was something different with him this time. It was almost like it was a completely different person. His eyes were shining, and he appeared very excited and glad as he walked on her direction

"Zee fight is over, now its time for zee mediks to do zeir vork. If i'm not mistaken, you vere yelling somesink about healink and taking kare of zee vounded, yes? I vonder if you kould heal my hand later." the odd hunter said to her.

"Oh yes, i mean, i can heal your hand and the other wounded hunters. After i help the other who are more wounded I'll sure look for you." she said, still wary and unrestful about the odd hunter.

"Maybe you vill be able to help some of zem, but i must warn you little one, be kareful. I'm a scholar, so its only natural for me to be intrigued and attrakted by you, but there are some around here zat voulnt be komfortable to have a vitch around zem. Your life may be in danger... I'll try to make sure zat no one looses zeir mind ven zey see you at zee tavern, but i kant promise zat i vill be able to stop zem. Its your choice: you can eiser go to zee tavern and try to heal zee wounded and earn zee hunters' trust or run away."
Although the hunter appeared to actually be worried about her, his words fell on her like a cold shower, opening her eyes. She was not safe. The hunters were as dangerous to her as the gnomes were. Yes, she met some hunters that were trying to protect her, but she didn't know what the others would do.

"I know... But i need to heal the wounded ones before going away. It was for this exact purpose why i came here." she said, afraid of what could happen to her.

Finally being able to squeeze her way out of the heavy hunter's body, she got up and ran to the other hunter nearby, he apparently was in a lot of pain.

"I'm sorry for being so indelicate, but he is suffering." she said to the hunter that saved her.

"Now breath deeply, try to be calm and stop trying to fight against the magic, let it out, I'll absorb it." she said, slowly touching his forehead with her hands. His skin was very hot, but thanks to the water the other hunter poured on him, wasn't hot enough to burn her hands.

She started to siphon the excess magic out of his body. Something was indeed wrong with it. It doesn't seemed to be his magic. It was something wild, full of hate and that existed only to destroy things.
As she siphoned the excess magic out of him, Shai's hands started to get hotter and hotter, as the magic passed through it.

"Argh! It burns!" she gasped, letting out a cry of pain as she jumped back, falling on the ground.

"What... is that?" she asked, surprised.
"What do you have inside you?" She asked, afraid.

Calling two of her cards, she put them in front of her hands, shielding her against that strange magic.
Touching him again, now with the cards in front of her hands, she started the process again.

"It might take a while, but hang on there. It will be over soon."
@Ellion

*Gasp*

H-hey, there is no need to resort to violence. You wint burn poor shai, will you?

I'll have a post done by today.
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