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Recent Statuses

3 mos ago
Everybody wants that fire IC but nobody wants to GM it.
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12 mos ago
If you're roleplaying with your only friends, you're roleplaying with your best friends.
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2 yrs ago
I think to sell someone on an interest check, it's really important to seem enthusiastic about your own idea. That means writing more than a single sentence to attract potential players.
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3 yrs ago
The virgin "My post was so bad it killed the RP!" VS the chad "My post was so good it concluded the RP."
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Bio


W I T H R I G H T E O U S H A N D S





Did you know that Dante's inferno is called a divine comedy because things work out for the protagonist? Back in the day, the only two genres were comedy and drama. The only difference was that in a comedy, the protagonist is better off at the end, and a drama is the opposite. So that's why a story about going through hell can still be considered a comedy, even if it's not funny.

Name:
Broken Promise, BP, Boss

Age:
Old enough to know better, too young to care. (that is to say 30's)

Preferred RPs:
I Prefer to make my own, but will occasionally join something if it looks interesting. I'll join just about anything so long as it isn’t overly edgy/sweet, though it's rare for me to do. I don't do 1x1s too often either.

Preferred Roles:
I tend to play adorable characters everyone wants to befriend or proper assholes everyone wants to stay away from. I try not to play moral paragons or prime evils.

RP Conquests:
I've completed quite a few RP's off site, but most of them are on private forums or have simply been lost to the ravages of server crashes. As for stuff here, I'm sure everyone who sees me post in the off topic sections has seen me find an excuse to talk about Danganronpa: Tower of Carnage. It's a project that took over 4 years to complete and I feel pride not only for myself but all the wonderful people who helped make it enjoyable during its run. Re: Zero: The High Council Is technically my first, but it was just something I kind of took over and ended up ending the story after just six months. It finished, but eh...

Last RP I finished was Symphony of Espers which turned out pretty good.

RP's in progress:
For some reason I can't seem to stay away from Ari's magical girl RP, even if I'm not sure why I'm still in it.

As for my own projects, I'm doing Symphony on High to continue the gigachad adventures of the espers in Pax Septimus.

RP Graveyard:
I've been pretty fortunate on this forum. I think I joined one when I first came on the site that didn't really do anything, and there are a few 1x1 things that didn't go anywhere. It's disappointing when an RP ends before it can be finished, but I've come to look at them as learning experiences.

And then there's that london magical girl RP, and that dark magical girl RP. I think I'm done joining magical girl RPs for a while.

Other interests:
Videos
I watch a lot of educational videos on youtube. Usually as research for something I’m writing or purely because a topic interests me. I like channels like Tier Zoo and Daryl Talks Games, and I’ll also watch things like Critical Drinker or Literature Devil to deepen my understanding of story telling. Though I also like memes and jokes, to which I’ll find myself watching stuff like Sseth, but usually find myself surfing through meme videos. I gotta work on that.

Games
I have a rather long history of playing virtually every platformer to come into existence during the indie boom, as well as quite a few other indie games. I’ve played Meatboy, Binding of Issac, Gunvolt, Cuphead, Princess Remedy in a World of Hurt, Classic Metroid, Warcraft 3, Final Fantasy 7,8, and 14, Left 4 Dead, Shantae, Celeste, Danganronpa, God Eater, the list goes on. What I’ve played is kind of all over the place. I don’t play many games these days, I tend to pick things that look interesting and go on a decent steam sale.

Painting Minis
I do this in moderation. Otherwise, it's a pretty expensive hobby to start...

Music
I listen to everything, save most country/rap songs. I have too many favorites to name.

Personality:
Not one to take life or the internet too seriously. Is only serious about writing well and having a good time.

People to Insult:
Dalton is a Dingus.

Most Recent Posts

@FamishedPants

You're still mad I dissed your waifu while being your other, hotter waifu.

Also did u no I added a section for you on my bio page a few months ago?
@Aewin

RP isn't quite over yet, but I feel like I can post this now:

It was just an idea. It's pretty hard to sell an original RP idea on this forum, as it's more geared towards fandom and anime. That's not to say anything else is doomed, because that ain't true. Joining other RPs isn't essential, but it is an easy way to start making a network of players you enjoy playing with.

Tenacity is an important trait for any GM, so just keep at it.
@FamishedPants @Mateotis @Majoras End

Kept ya waiting huh?

And Dalton, you know the big digital Junko in Super Dangonronpa 2 Called Alter Ego Junko? She's a corrupted version of Alter Ego that acts like Junko. Hence why she's referred to as Alter Ego Junko. If that doesn't count, you do meet Alter ego in SDR2 and she/he/it tells you that they are basically the master program who keeps the neo world project running, but Alter Ego Junko was "toot stronk" for them.

Sorry, your waifu Chiaki plays no role in this whatsoever. Ever since the Danganronpa 3 anime she's dropped down to D tier. It amazes me how one anime can make so many beloved characters less interesting. But yea, sucks to suck nerd.

@TheMerlin I was offline, and then another thread pushed this down and I didn't see you post.

It's late so I didn't read the whole thing, but I did skim it. Without reading it proper, it looks like a pretty good check. If there was something extra I would want, it would be a cut-and-dry paragraph towards the begining of the check that told me what it is I'm suppose to be doing here and summarized the plot. you also have a blocked youtube link in your check, which makes the whole sheet look defunct. might wanna replace/remove that.

Another thing to note is that you're fairly new. Not even two months in and you're starting an RP. If you don't have any luck with your new RP, you might just want to join a few and get the forum familiar with you. Not only will this make your renown grow, but it'll introduce you to potential players.
It should be noted that like anything, you can only absorb so much from reading. You do have to learn from your mistakes and get a feel for being a good GM. I've been doing this for a very long time and I'm still learning how to do things better.

To answer the second question, the most successful GMs have perseverance. Anyone can have a one hit wonder, but it's the ability to pull yourself together after a disastrous flop that lets you go on to make more RPs, hopefully even better than the last.
@TheMerlin if you'd like, I can take a look at the interest check and give you some pointers. anyone could, really.

Wanna put a link here?
A E S T H E T I C S
You can also bump threads with a post, which is probably preferable to making a new one anyway.


”Then again, maybe I won’t.”

— Tonya “Mac” Murphy



Justine's forces outside the mansion would notice a lot more firepower coming their way than was actually available. That was largely due to Mac, who was also able to make the extra projectiles somewhat realalistic thanks to the use of gravity magic and having illusion magic spec'd for it.

You know, her exact same trick every single time she appears? That was what she did.






”Toodles poodles!”

— Viridian


Viridian nodded along to Mariette’s words. ”Well, if she ain’t botherin’ you, she ain’t botherin’ me.” Viridian‘s true goal in all of this was just to make Lily aware of what she had gotten herself into. Of course she knew who her patron was, but clearly Lily didn’t. ”I’ll be off then. Y’all take care now!” And with that, Viridian vanished from sight.

@PlatinumSkink@Ariamis@Card Captor@FamishedPants



“Man, we waste so much time making new combo banners.”

”If only we could settle for something smaller and less obtrusive…”

— Su Fang N’ Trixy





As soon as Justine initiated her attack, Su sprung into action.

“I’m going outside.” She looked to Samantha. “Last time we fought against her, I threw you at Justine.” She shook her head. “I will not do that again. There are no traps outside, so there is no reason for you to come with me if you wish to defend Mariette.”

”I’ll keep an eye on her, Sam!” Trixy loaded her gun. ”But you have a sniper rifle too! So…”

Su was already walking towards the portal. “Let’s move! I will protect us from the wind. We just need a way to keep Justine’s lances off of us.”

”On it!”

The eyepatch girl which was not Mariette threw a hand full of acorns into the could wind. The side of the roof facing the intruders sprouted a half wall made out of solid oak. Anyone following after Su would have a bit of cover and wouldn’t be directly visible to those hiding

”Alright girls, let’s split up!” And without waiting, Trixy split into several other operatives. Dusty and her two sisters soon joined the fray.

As soon as Su stepped out onto the roof, she looked up at the sky. “So this is what passes for a storm around here?” With a shrug of her shoulders, she extended her arm into the heavens. The blood vessels on her white skin turned black and raced down her arm. “I’ll teach them the meaning of that word…” Her hand was turning black from the sheer force of her magic.

Overhead, the overcast skies were turning. Was this an erratic air current, or Su’s focused assault manifesting?

“Trixy, you seem to be able to grow plants.” She didn’t look away from the sky. She remained on the other side of the tower where she (hopefully) couldn’t be hit directly. “Do you have any dandelions? I would like a few.”

”Let me see what I got.”

Dusty and crew continued their assault. They made good use of their cover, popping up for single shots before ducking behind the barrier again. They never came up in the same spot more than once.








”Remember me, baby?”

— VK


@DarkwolfX37

”Are you done hiding, Shion?”

Vermin Killer tipped his hat folward and spun his cane around his hand. To his back were an assortment of animals, from wolverines to jaguar. Almost all of them had to be the African variety. It was hard to tell exactly what the number was, as so many of them hid in the shadows. But before him was the building where Shion resided.

”I actually have a use for you, so I would prefer it if you could just surrender. Otherwise, I can’t promise I’ll leave you alone like last time.” The corners of his lips curled into a smile.






“So soon?”

— Aighorost


It seems we are on borrowed time, Oros. Let’s see how much havock you can cause before the next time skip starts.






“Got it!”

— Oros


“I SMELL THE SPARK UPON YOU!”

Oros dove out of frickin’ nowhere and landed in front of Summer. The tip of her nose was vibrating, sniffing nearly a hundred times a second.

“Oh! You’re that one.” She spun her katana before stuffing it into her sheathe. “Okay, so I’m kind of bored to shit with everything going on right now, and I think I can make things more interesting if I can get in tough with the Jays. You know? The Beacon twins?” She folded her arms. “You want more context? I want to make a super weapon to wipe out the Mint. I’ve got an idea for one, and they are just the people to make it. If you don’t trust me, just read back a few Patron Observable Session Transcripts. Just ignore the bit where I mention ruining Beacon by flooding its ranks with monster girls. I’m sure that was a typo.”

@DarkwolfX37
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