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@Jbcool I'd say, at a guess, better than you might think, but worse than you'd hope. At a guess.
@Rithy

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@Lady Selune Didn't do a real close read of other characters, so any potential similarities in character was unintentional. I did notice the little flavor text thing you had done first, and thought it was a clever idea, so did something similar to that.

I do see a couple of things that do seem close to each other, upon closer inspection, but I personally wouldn't call them really similar.
@Ollumhammersong Concerns are good, it means things needed to be fixed even if I didn't realize it. I'll list off changes in order of noted concerns.

My apologies for missing the mark on the date, altered it so the fall of his planet (Which is now a mining world, to better fit other changes) occurred ninety years after Cadia fell, so its only a ten year gap between the current events and his lost homeworld. Does that work better for you?

In regards to equipment, the stub revolver had any mention of specialty rounds dropped, blind was replaced with frags (Noting he only ever has, at most, one or two depending on scavanging or supply luck), and the chainsword dropped completely. Instead, it was noted that mining picks were altered for battle and carried instead, though they are two handed affairs typically. Is that still considered too far, I can certainly go the knife/shortsword route if it is. Which means the only weapon of any unusual quality is the custom lasgun pattern, assuming the mining pick isn't considered unreasonable.
Alright. finally got this guy sorted out. Decided to not go the Krieger route, after all. @Ollumhammersong

Jerod Staudinger





Jerod smirked as he withdrew the rapier from the dead bandit's torso, cutting some of the dead man's clothing away to use as a rag, cleaning the blood off his blade before returning it to its sheath. The newcomer swordsman was a deft hand with his blade of choice, he had to acknowledge that much, but with the bandits routing, that pretty much solved this whole problem. The one that the one playing at being a hero caused in the first place by trying to take on an entire bandit group on her own. Shaking his head at the thought, he had nothing else to say for now, regrouping with the others in the meantime. It seemed they would be making a detour to this woman's home, lovely, perhaps she could explain herself there then.




Jerod had found himself a spot to sit that wasn't just a dirty patch while he went about cleaning his sword properly, when Keerin decided to approach both him and this Sordan fellow about the work they did on the bandit group. Raising an eyebrow, he waited for her to say her piece, sighing audibly when she went on about him being a Lord of House Staudinger. No, no, damn it, he would not have her just prancing about, dead panning about him being related to a noble house. "No, none of that Lord nonsense. I'm a sellsword, remember? Jerod, that is it. No Lord Jerod, no of House Staudinger. Just bloody Jerod, got it, dear?"

Besides the throw back to his earlier sarcastic remark towards her when she mouthed off about his rather infamous exploits prior to leaving his family for what he thought was for good, he kept his focus on his blade. Once he held it up to the sunlight and, satisfied with its state for now, pricked his finger on the blade, drawing blood with the weapon before resheathing it. His tone was rather hard to read, but given what he said, his opinion of the swordswoman was fairly low at the moment, any inherent skill aside. "Stopping a war while helping some damn fool playing at hero stop bandits, strictly on the side of course. Hope you lot are quicker on the draw for plans, though, I'm not getting paid to be a tactician yet."
@POOHEAD189

Or is he?
Might as well spare you the wait on the inevitable question, then, eh?
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