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World Warriors: The Nomadic Fist (Quirky Fighting Game Influenced Roleplay)

Somebody is impatient.

@Gowi

shut up, Gowi

World Warriors: The Nomadic Fist (Quirky Anime-Fighters Roleplay)

The OOC is here!

@Mr Allen J

Still open, the IC will open on Friday.

World Warriors: The Nomadic Fist (Quirky Anime-Fighters Roleplay)

The OOC is here!

@Mr Allen J

Still open, the IC will open on Friday.

World Warriors: The Nomadic Fist (Quirky Fighting Game Influenced Roleplay)

I plan on starting the IC on Friday, but don't worry if you haven't finished your sheet yet; it'll be open enough for anyone to just jump in.

Spring Break - A Survival Horror RP

Interested.

World Warriors: The Nomadic Fist (Quirky Fighting Game Influenced Roleplay)

@Mr Allen J So I think the major issue here is that I'm not very familiar with design philosophy for fighting game characters. As a result, I designed Fenrir more like he was a MOBA or MMO character. That is to say, his special abilities are all meant to provide utility to him as a character rather than just be "an attack, but fancier," and are balanced by strict cooldowns. I did try to research some fighting game characters to base him off of (specifically Glacius and Sabrewulf from Killer Instinct, and Wolfgang from Blazblue) but I didn't come away with much useful information. Anyway, as a result, his specials may need to be reworked from the ground up, but I'll try my hand at working with your criticisms here.

@Dead Cruiser

You should probably explain these "cooldowns" a bit more in detail, then. I had no idea about the cooldowns until you brought it up. Then again, the problem might lie in the fact that I am a bit inconsistent with the fighting game theme. lol

6) Do you need me to rewrite it?

@Dead Cruiser

It doesn't need to be reworked from the ground up as some of the attacks need to be cut, and the supers need to be changed a bit. That said, I'll address your points.

3) This was probably the most direct result of "MOBA Design Philosophy," as this ability was inspired by one of the most annoying Overwatch characters (Mei). As I just mentioned, it only works within Fenrir's melee range, and is meant to punish more mobile characters for getting into his range.

@Dead Cruiser

At the same time, it is really strong against anyone with a melee attack (Which is an awful lot of characters). Just getting within Fenrir's melee range is where a good amount of the characters deal their damage.

4) (You have 3 twice and it screwed your numbering) Again, a design philosophy issue, with abilities meant to swing a group battle into his team's favor. Fimbulvetr can be tweaked to be a large AOE version of Gelgja, which has a chance of insta-killing trapped enemies. Ragnarök could be better explained: essentially a super mode that increases his attack power and speed, and gives all of his ice abilities a lingering damage effect.

@Dead Cruiser

My problem with Fimbulvetr is the same I have with Gelgja, except on a larger scale. Unless there is some way of other characters escaping it, I don't think I can allow someone that freezes everyone instantly. You can maybe change it into a barrage of ice shards or whatever if you want to keep up with the ice theme. Ragnarök probably just needs to be explained a bit more in detail, and maybe a limit or two as to how long it lasts. Because it does sound like the second form of a boss. lol

World Warriors: The Nomadic Fist (Quirky Fighting Game Influenced Roleplay)

So who is the loli yandere?

@Gowi

this post gave me cancer

The Surtr Archives

Noelle Delacroix

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Name:
Noelle Delacroix

Age:
19

Gifted?:
Yes.

Powers:
Bird-Manipulation.
Noelle's gift manifested in the manner that she developed a mental connection to avians. It gave her the ability to sense their presence no matter where they are, and more importantly, the ability to dominate their minds. That might be a rough way of putting it, but it's the best way to describe it. Using her ability to dominate their minds, Noelle can practically command birds to do whatever she pleases, even on a large scale (She can manipulate birds three miles from herself). From commanding them to collect specific objects, to attack people. With her ability to manipulate birds comes with the ability to see through their eyes - to make a lame pun, she practically has a bird's eye view. Noelle naturally attracts birds (and other animals) to herself. It's not unnatural to see birds perched on the buildings, and powerlines, around her. If she stays in a single place too long, the birds will actually land on her. Which is a good sign that something's up with her.

Bird-Mimicry.
What's more is that Noelle has the ability to morph parts of her body into birds. It is a painful, and meticulous transformation, but it grants her a variety of abilities. She can grow wings out her back, or turn her hands into brutal-looking talons, for example. There are many more examples of her ability. This comes with some permanent changes to her body, of course. She has much, much, lighter bones, as her skeleton is hollow. Which might sound like a detriment, but bird bones aren't fragile because they are denser to make up for it. So, Noelle can fall a little slower, and she can fly with her giant wings! In addition, she's a bit stronger, and her senses are much more keen - particularly her eyesight, since she has a bit of a Falcon-sight. Now, Noelle doesn't realize it yet, but she can transform into a giant half-bird hybrid capable of incredible strength and feats of speed. Or she can turn into a monstrously large bird with a fourteen foot wingspan. These are future feats.

Skills:
French.
Noelle is a native of France, so, naturally, she is fairly good at the French language. It's not uncommon for Noelle to break off into tangents in her native language.

Photography.
Noelle, above all else, is committed to her love of photography. She takes the most artistic photography pieces as practice for her classes.

College Studies:
Major:
Photography.

Minor:
Art.

Appearance:
Noelle always had a rather stand out aura around her. She dresses, and walks, like a supermodel, and has a rather haughty demeanor. This is because of her inherent arrogance over her artistic talent, and her desire to become a model. She feels as if her soft, and rounded, facial features, are perfect for the runways and magazines. While her face is good, her body isn't. Noelle has a bit of a gut due to inactivity, nothing that'd make her obese, but she is definitely ashamed of it, and goes to any lengths to hide it while she loses this extra weight. She hides this underneath her clothing. She also isn't that tall to begin with, standing at five-three. Noelle's eyes are a light-blue color, and her hair is naturally black, but dyed an even darker color to stand out. It's very curly, but she keeps it long, nearly back length.

Backstory:
Noelle was born in Lyon, France, to a pair of French Diplomats that would regularly go out to different countries, and do business. Help Paris become more integrated with the rest of the world. However, after a publicized affair breaking out, the Delacroix family chose to move to America. They settled down in Aria Bay, around the time Noelle was thirteen years old. Throughout the years, she developed many friendships, and whatnot, but always had that artistic touch. An imagination that allowed her to connect with art, and develop her own ideas based off that form. With the help of a few photography classes, Noelle became an amateur photographer.

It wasn't long before she finally graduated from highschool, and applied to Beacon University, Majoring in Photography, minoring in Art.

Friends:
N/A.

Noelle's only friend is success!

Enemies:
There's a lot of people in Beacon University that don't quite care for her attitude.

Aria Bay

Unfortunately, I've lost all interest in this RP, and have no plans on participation.

I'll be clearing my character sheets.

World Warriors: The Nomadic Fist (Quirky Fighting Game Influenced Roleplay)

@The book of bad juju Ah, I get it now. Just note in his weaknesses section that his melee specials are weak or something and he's accepted.

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@Dead Cruiser Fenrir is a tough one. He's alright as a base character... but, his moveset is more like a boss character in a fighting game than a regular character. He can do a lot with his special moves as you loaded him with everything possible, instead of having him excel in some areas, but having weaknesses in others. Let's start.

1). Svartálfar, Ván and Helhammar are more like super moves than regular moves. I don't know, but having a guard breaker, second wind, and a move that punishes blocking as an attack he can do at any given time rubs me the wrong way. I'm not going to allow any of them due to them being broken.

2). You say that he's weak at a range, but you gave him several ranged attacks. Making the area cold (which I'll get to in a second), his roar, and pushing enemies away, sound like ranged attacks to me.

3). Gelgja kind of rubs me the wrong way since that move alone would be a headache to deal with. He'd practically be able to give him free reign to do any of his other attacks, and wallop away at opponents. I would accept freezing... if it was the focus of his kit rather than one of his many powerful moves.

3). Both of his super moves are practically instant win buttons. He can pretty much just render everyone helpless by freezing them with one move, and turn into an invincible super wolf with the other ones. Neither of these abilities are fair or fun (same with the rest of his kit). I don't feel comfortable accepting either to be honest.

4). You need to focus his strengths in one area, and give him actual weaknesses - or go the route I did with Justin and give him a bunch of techniques, but don't make him overwhelmingly strong in any of the categories. Is he going to be good at up close fights like you said? Then remove his many ranged attacks, his bullshit moves, and perhaps give him some more solid weaknesses.

5). Also, this is a small one, but you were supposed to give a list of personality traits, not describe his entire personality.