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World Warriors: The Nomadic Fist (Quirky Fighting Game Influenced Roleplay)

@Hellis Both of them are accepted.

World Warriors: The Nomadic Fist (Quirky Fighting Game Influenced Roleplay)

@Oddsbod The changes are fine by me, she's accepted.

Palladium Academy (Another Superpowered Highschool)

_{You stole the tagline from World Warriors you cuck.}

Palladium Academy (Another Superpowered Highschool)

@KaiserElectric Give him back the magical red fisting hand, and he's gud to me.

World Warriors: The Nomadic Fist (Quirky Fighting Game Influenced Roleplay)

@Hellis Okay, let me review your characters!

Ben

■ I think Ben is pretty good overall, but I only have a small problem with the whole Vampire angle he's got going on feels... tacked. Like the whole "father was a monster" was poorly explored, and only briefly touched upon before moving to the next thing. I honestly forgot that he was a vampire until your weaknesses mentioned it. lol

■ Could you fix the coding errors in the sheet? It just looks a little jarring.

■ I think you need to expand a bit more on his fighting style section. It only explains how he functions as a fighter, not how his moves look, how he fights, etc.

■ Otherwise, I think his moveset is good.

Takio

■ Again, can you fix the coding errors in his sheet?

■ Again (x2) you need to expand a bit more on the fighting style section... look at what some of other characters have written for their fighting style.

■ Nationality is for telling the reader which nation they came from, not their ethnicity. That's for the appearance section.

Unless Sweden-Japan is a fictional nation you're pushing.

■ You left something for Ben in his OTHER section. lol

■ I think he's good if you correct a few problems.

World Warriors: The Nomadic Fist (Quirky Fighting Game Influenced Roleplay)

■ Singularity pulls them in quick, but she can't move while it's active and she can't use her OP ki attacks. That said, she can always cancel the move if she sees something coming and jump out of the way, or use the Gravity Lens. Hm. I don't want it to be super duper easy to counter, just like a solid ranged grapple effect. Maybe if it wasn't as hard to dodge?

@Oddsbod

When you say you don't want it easy to be countered, you also have to consider that it's a move that basically teleports the opposing person to her. My understanding was that it's a high-risk, high-reward, kind of move. Which was fine with me, but you're basically saying that she can effectively negate the move's weaknesses...

I was hoping that the one-shot limit on it would make it less like a regular attack, but yeah. Would it be more permissible if I dropped the time to like, four seconds? Savo also suggested that it slows down Verga as well. Other option is making it a once per day shot instead of once per hour.

@Oddsbod

Even if it has a limit, I still think the ability to slow everything down around her is ridiculous. In a fighting game context, that'd be a super. I'd allow more shots if it was a projectile move that could be dodged.

■ I was again sorta hoping the shot limit would make that less troublesome, since she can only use it three times, where Jaden doesn't have that kind of limit. I could drop the shot limit down to two, and drop the range down.

@Oddsbod

But Jaden also can't use it instantly, and it doesn't come with an explosion effect. My problem isn't really the range, or how many times she can use it, but how fast she can, and the explosion. Savo suggested that it comes with a "charge" that allows her to do a quicker, short-ranged, teleport, without the explosion that leaves her disoriented.

■ I'd started off trying to slot her into some specific role or archetype, but I was having trouble with it, and the general consensus in the chat was just go for a character and see how she landed once personality and backstory were finished. I ended up with an emotionally stunted person who, after going through an emotional, messy, and unhappy time in her life, decided to escape all that and devote the rest of her life to tracking down power wherever she could find it. And I thought a moveset that was less a cohesive set of interlocking skills, like Justin's or Jaden's, and more a collection of specific high-powered ki-moves was what would fit best for the character. I'd hoped that them all being vaguely astrophysics and light/energy/gravity themed might be enough to tie them together a bit more, but if you guys still have issues I could tweak them up a bit more. sorry have to leave literally right now but I'll be back soon can answer other question in discor

@Oddsbod

My problem is that she can do a bit too much, a bit too well. Again, let's take a look at some of the other characters. Jonas fights using trickery, Inanna is a portal-based zoner, Brenda is focused on brute force rushdown. I can get a good idea of their archetype by reading their movelists, I can't really with Verga. Personally, going off of her backstory/characterization, I get the idea that she's all about a relentless offense, but a weak defense. But, that's just me.

World Warriors: The Nomadic Fist (Quirky Fighting Game Influenced Roleplay)

@Oddsbod I went over her moveset, aaaaaaaaaand I have some comments on her kit.

■ Black Hole needs to be reworked or removed into something different. The ability to slow down everything around herself with no chance of dodging is pretty much a super... that she has as a regular attack. Perhaps rework it into a projectile?

■ Paradox also raises a few alarms for me. She has a better teleport move than Jaden, as an instant teleport that damages people when she finishes. This doesn't seem all that fair to me, so I suggest that she also has to concentrate like Jaden does. Or, she gets momentarily stunned after teleporting.

■ Singularity does leave her open, right? I'm okay with it being a instant/hard to dodge, move long as she is left open during it as it seems incredibly easy to counter.

■ My other problem is that her moveset seems a bit... schizophrenic to me. Like, it doesn't really fit a archtype to me, and she can do pretty much everything with movement abilities, several projectiles, defensive moves, and a few melee moves. Is she supposed to be an all-rounder or?

Weird Roleplay Ideas You're Afraid To Pitch?

I want to start a horror-esque, Silent Hill-type, RP set in a strange world where a group of random people are dropped into it, and are hunted by monsters. I want to use it to explore themes such as loneliness, isolation, and what it means to be human.

World Warriors: The Nomadic Fist (Quirky Fighting Game Influenced Roleplay)

@Hellis nice

Baybridge: Halcyon Days [Superpowers/Semi-Sandbox]

Also, ahead I want to focus on some interactions and character moments for a bit instead of action.