Fallenreaper

Create-A-Hero: A Superhero RPG (Closed)

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HEHEHEHE.. I got things planned see. Crazy things planned. Mostly. A lot of my ideas are loose and I kinda just wing most of my plots. Sure I get ideas set before hand, but I throw in plot ideas all the time. And yes you'll see more tentacles soon.

@VATROU

... Do I need to get a belt Mr. Loose?

Create-A-Hero: A Superhero RPG (Closed)

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I had to look back a couple posts because I couldn't remember what I was responding to.

@Dedonus

Shhh, it's more fun if you just had to think. The smoke would signal others!

Create-A-Hero: A Superhero RPG (Closed)

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And this, my friends, is how you all scare everyone away.

@Dedonus

Promise? If they are scared off this easily, they might not survive the arcs or the humor!

Black Mountain Tournament: Nicoli D'Angelo vs Trixi Hex

@ShidenBlades

Alright, as decided in a pm, the changes were made. It was a little hard to picture this round as I wasn't sure how pull back well and tried to make as little changes to the post as possible so I hope it works. If something a miss or off, let me know. When Nicoli dodges the attack, Trixi will be more upright likely then she was when she was attacking and retreating back.

The Black Mountain (open tournament)

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Sorry to hear that :(

Thanks for participating so far. Shame we didn't get to see Shen fight... ah well. Maybe some other time.

@Drifting Pollen

Poor @Vordak.

@Scarifar: See you around the arena some time, and pity I didn't get to fight you.

Blood Act I~ Ghosts of the Past

Lyn's Hunt

Group 4: Paich

While the female wiggled and squirmed, trying to get upright quickly. Her feet touched the side and started ever slowly to pull her to one side. It wasn’t fast enough while Leith’s water swirled and hovered above her. Meanwhile the male was hard at work. His paws shoving harder and faster, trying to edge to his mate. A small mound of dirt appeared just when Leith's water shot down. Abruptly there was a blur of movement, the dark grey mingled and streaked at the water causing it to scatter in all directed before impact. The water had missed the female as the male shot out of a hidden hole then sprang in between it and the female, his shell suffering a minor crack from the drill before attacking it. As originally intended, the Paich managed to smack the female’s side allowing her to roll onto her belly and vanish into the nearest ground.

Despite what seemed like a failed attack, Leith’s attack had managed to injury the male leaving a small smear of blood behind.

As Summer aided Leith out of the makeshift trap, Meirin channeled her aeromancy right into the hole. Wind whipped and howled through the various paths moving through the area they were in. Several tunnels collapse as they left behind several inch deep gutters riddling their battle grounds and revealing each single hole that was carefully hidden by blowing out the loose dirt blocking the entrance. Deep within these pathways, the male and female both cling tightly to roots and buried their claws into the soft dirt. It wasn’t a firm hold so when the others left Meirin alone, two Paich promptly were shot out of their holes.

One came out from behind where Meirin had leapt and within striking range. When she came down, her spear skirted the side and pinned the creature to the ground. However, one thing she might notice was the creature’s back stopped her weapon from escaping out the other side. Like an armored beetle, its hide was too tough for normal weapons to penetrate and she had gotten lucky in her attack. If she had hit directly on its back, her blade would’ve had no effect save pinning it down and making it tighten into a half ball for protection. It would’ve been like trying to kill a turtle curled up in his shell.

If she was fast enough, she could easily send it into a local tree where the creature would be stun enough for her to finish the job. Meanwhile, the female was directly across from Meirin’s location and would quickly vanish when the girl spotted her spell.

Keri vs Ellys

Ellys didn’t hesitate or reply, she reacted. Her tail smacked the vampire about the knees, coiling about and twisting her until she was within striking distance. Immediately the Naga’s tail constricted. Pressure was applied as Keri’s bones started to crack and break, the right leg the first to buckle under her strength. The snake like tail slithered about and gained height, reaching her waist and soon her torso and arms if Ellys wasn’t stopped. The Naga’s head tilted back then opened her mouth, revealing two pointed fangs. She intended to use her venom to paralyze the woman while she went after the child, making Keri helpless.

Catacombs

Lyamis spotted a few ridge hounds that had been darting down the corridors their claws clicked and body bouncing closer in a rush. Immediately the male naga lifted his spear and angled it into a downward jab when the vermin came charging in.

Lyamis and several Naga reared, their weapons at the ready, when the wall a few meters away crashed apart. A man, tall and thick, trampled through the dust and brick foundation. His boots brought him quickly out into the most of battle. The jittery female Ssarak had encountered had shifted and almost whipped out her tail, reacting in her extreme beer Lyamis snapped out an order. It was a mere warning glare, his body raised an additional foot over the average Yarsomere human as he let out a soft warning hiss.

Young naga were over emotional, their mind still trying to adjust, and so they were given leeway. However older Naga behaving in such a way were frowned upon and seen to be childish. Lyamis’ eyes narrowed on Ssarak, silently asking him where he learned the information and deep inside he knew. Marya. The fact she was sharing things about their inner structure unsettled the male as he made a fast pace jab upon an nearby ridge hound. The thing crumbled easily.

Lyamis wasn't fond to learn this Tyrael had become vicious and unreliable. If he had known it was the Karnage he had met from long ago, the very fallen Orc who was a deep friend to his sister and her sole responsibility and one who's judgement they trusted in taking Marya to the college then Lyamis would've been wondering if it was the right decision after all. He loved his sister as much as a Naga was able, but her failure in duties and relaxed tongue concerned him greatly.

He kept his thoughts to himself when he sliced another ridge hound at the leg, sending its fellows to viciously rip into it.

Coruscant Sacked: Aftermath

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I posted, you happeh? :P

@Sep

On to do list:

Blood- Group 3, and Naga in catacombs
SW Aftermath- Jayda and Navi (When Melloch and Vebra are up with their locations, I'll move the rescuers along. Elite's the only one that posted...)

Side stuff: CS, 2-3 Arena threads for the future, writing for my Startrek site, research over anatomy, and a few others.

Coruscant Sacked: Aftermath

Going to work on Jayda soonish, have her up tonight or tomorrow. *writing in mass*

Black Mountain Tournament: Nicoli D'Angelo vs Trixi Hex

@Drifting Pollen: I wasn’t concerned about the hit chance as much as I was about what was considered reasonable aftermath. I knew from the get go she won’t come out unscratched if I had her continue with that hit so I tried to limit the damage best I could as a friend explained that even a few cm is a pretty nasty slice since 3 cm make up an in. (this why you practice your math kids…even when you get out of school)

My issue was the amount of damage and if the arm was able to still perform after being stabbed, granted at about less speed than before. Seeing as I’ve never gotten stabbed or been in a knife fight before, it’s rather hard to determine that even with research. In addition there’s the axillary artery in the arm, which I’m still researching since my logic in anatomy is more attuned to basics, not details, and pretty sure hitting an artery isn’t a good thing. Not sure exactly the bleed out time but I know she would be feeling weak at some point, dizzy, and even can cause her to black out within a set time. Some times depth of a wound, at least I would imagine, would influence this. If you want to correct, I would welcome from either of you as ShidenBlade didn’t have to explain how quickly Trixi charged and instead, merely took advantage of it which I appreciate.

*painfully aware her ignorance is showing rather badly*

Now for the changes:

Both attacks hit, which I assume I don’t need to mention it as ShidenBlade will cover Trixi's hit in his post.

Nicoli's jab would hit, naturally, as the drop to the knee (while slower) wouldn’t hit where Nicoli intended which was through the bicep. Not sure if that was higher or lower now that I think about it, because there’s a bone in there so hitting the center wouldn’t literally put it through the arm but it might hit the artery there. Unless he’s got much greater strength than I first assumed, bone isn’t easily to slice or break despite the movies.

Side effects of the jab are lot of bleeding, pain and difficulty in movement. The only question I have now is how to define a lot of bleeding because there's various definitions of a lots of bleeding (some people consider 2 pints a lot of blood for good reason) which means he could've hit an artery. That artery pretty much, from what I can tell from the images on google, starts at the arm pit and and goes down the inside which is exposed in this case with her strike to his leg. And mostly what I was trying to avoid was a direct hit after I read his post. This means it would've been slightly twisted when he struck with the highest end being nearest the elbow and lowest near the arm pit, her move down making him miss it if he was hitting from a slightly higher angle to the inside and going for that artery spot. A fact he would since she's lower than him at this point with her positioning. The missing of the artery (which I think it would) would still be a lot of blood, but she would be bleeding out slow rather than fast.

I hope this made sense and not just muddied up things more, which took me a few hours to phrase clearly. I'm not even sure I did that well. In TLDR Terms: I'm trying to define your term of a lot of blood without crippling myself due to misunderstanding and give Trixi the best possible and reasonable outcome. So when I edit, I don't have to do it more than once.

The pain part about disabling her is correct, since Trixi is a bit of a masochist so she can at least focus but her arm's mobility will still be affected. Part of the reason Salem (the incubus) was actually attracted, still is btw, to her and went farther with her than anyone else. So...yeah, it won’t likely put her in shock as much as excite her I would imagine. (in this situation, not in a sexual way, humorously)

@Fallenreaper No rush. Take your time!

Also, if you ever want to throw down in a more relaxed setting outside the tourney let me know. I really dig your writing style and enjoy Trixie as a character.

@ShidenBlades

I would be honored and I'm rather happy to hear that you're enjoying the read and the fight. I was starting to worry my inexperience was making it rather dull.

Add on

It will likely happen after this tourney as I have a match with Skallagrim as well, so can set those two up at the same time.

The fun part with Trixi, every single fight is cannon, win or lose, thanks to that dimension Rune in her history though it doesn't have any other effect. So she can take opponents all over the place, in any scene, and still create a nicely fleshed out story over all. Even take PCs on again that she's killed because her last fight erase her presence and cancels out the fight. However, it feels a bit like meta play so I might create a side effect that her presence left faint echos of their fight in the combant's memory that rise only after she's fought them already. This would allow both of us to be on even grounds. Sorry for the ramble, added effect of the excitement.

Black Mountain Tournament: Nicoli D'Angelo vs Trixi Hex

@Drifting Pollen@Fallenreaper

Alrighty, if that's that verdict than I'll await for Fallen to adjust her post accordingly and then prepare my own post.

@ShidenBlades

Alright, give me a night and I will.. I need to sleep.