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@Nanashi Ninanai: I mean, it felt kinda weird having the whole bait-and-switch with Blackbeard and co. at the start, but to be fair Otakubeard is hard to paint as a threat so it makes sense.
Though Orion was kinda weird when he (they?) popped up. I really liked the Asterios/Euryale subplot, though.
Maybe it's just bias because the Jason demon was such an ass to fight with my squad lol. It took too long to release Okeanos after Rome, so I guess the spike in difficulty was kinda warranted, but still. That's just my little qualm about it.
And using the Ark to delete Herc was kinda weird, no lie.

So yeah. Nerofest 2016 challenge missions. :D
@LancerOfBlue: Other than making sure that you're aware of Kintoki being a Servant in the RP and his feelings towards meeting Shuten again? I think you're good to go.
Okay, stuff... Handled. Time to evaluate more forms!

@chukklehed: Accepted.

@VitaVitaAR: Accepted.

@Rin: Accepted.

@LancerOfBlue: Too many skills. That's 7 personal there; cut off two and it should be accepted.

@Nanashi Ninanai: Accepted.

Also, random two things.
One: FUCK YES I PULLED A CASKO WITH A TICKET FROM THE EXTELLA GACHA THANK YOU A RANK LUCK.
Two: Let me just say that Okeanos was also thoroughly weird. Camelot was great, though, but the event dialogue silliness is amazing.
I should ask for no particular reason, btw: how were the Nerofest challenge missions for ya?

(Oh right, my own Master.)
I come back from classes to see people cracking jokes about /GO. Yeah, seems about right.

Having actually read the story, the America arc is pretty stupid but involves more Irishmen and Indians than you think. London tho. Tesla makes zero sense anyways why is he painted us as the villain after Lancer Arturia Alter WHY IS THAT EVEN A THING.

Anyways... Right! Forms.

@AtomicNut: Master okay'd. Time to look for a Servant.

@Cojemo: Rider version OK'd from me. Good to go.

@KoL: Actually kinda have a few worries here just become of how... "Perfect" the character is and how weird everything attempts to connect together.
For starters...
-Fire/Ether element plus a version of Volumen Hydrargyrum (whose original master Kayneth was Water/Wind) feels quite out of place. I don't see how making a chain of silver act like that (with its giant active range of motion for offensive and defensive purposes) should work. Definitely seems more like Water/Wind to me.
-There is nothing wrong with a spoiled brat or a character who is coddled from birth, but it doesn't make sense for a character to have motivation without sufficient reason. In the situation you've described, I would've thought that the resultant character would be forced to work themselves to the goddamn BONE because of how all of their family's hopes and dreams now rest on their shoulders. Magi are generally very shitty parents, after all. Fairly certain they wouldn't be pushing her around and would instead probably stake their lives on getting back on track.
-Leading off from that, I'm fairly certain magic circuits don't just up and disappear when scientific discoveries pop up. Most Magi are eugenics maniacs on par with competitive Pokemon players to try and keep the number of Magic Circuits alive, anyhow, so if you achieve a result like that over the course of a few centuries then in theory EVERY clan should be swimming in circuits now.
-Mystic Eyes of Charm have the potential to baaasically remove a plot point from existence if you just so happen to target an NPC who may not be a magus or Servant or anything with any resistance. No good.
-Backstory implies that the development of thermodynamics caused a general death of fire circuits in turn, which is like... What?

So, uh... Yeah. There are quite a few things there, I'd say. You can make a counterargument if you wish, but I've made a case for now.

Edit: GAAAH TIRED. Forgot I accepted Himiko already.
@Nanashi Ninanai: Don't be Shinji. Don't be Zouken. Don't be Ryuunosuke. Et cetera.

Just don't be a giant prick or a homicidal maniac, basically. Arrogance is fine, but if over half the cast actually wants to gut you like a fish, then it might be time to rethink your life choices. More or less.
@Cojemo: Those NPs don't look very... I dunno 'Assassin-esque'. She looks more Rider-y than Assassin-y. Which is weird, because as an Assassin, she's not supposed to, like...
Well, draw attention to herself. Pretty sure that stealing mounts and becoming a projectile magnet are pretty flashy.

@Nanashi Ninanai: Much better. Accepted.
@Flamelord: Make it scale reasonably with age, then worry about Circuits and all that jazz is pretty much it.

Also, keep personalities semi-reasonable, because Zelretch is the one picking them out of the batch.
@Flamelord: Accepted, though maybe be careful about that first NP and how often he drops it on the field.

@ADamnFiddle: Yeah, no, it's just something to note for the future. No more.

@Raineh Daze: Accepted, but note that anything summoned from the Grail itself has the ability to not be affected by Rule Breaker.
Yes, Grails can summon stuff, too.

@GreenGoat: Accepted on both fronts.
@ADamnFiddle: In what world is the dog no good?
Accepted, though it might behoove you in the future to not just copypaste off the wiki.

@Nanashi Ninanai: Hm... Where to begin...
First: An image of Gwyndolin for a being related to the sun is ironic. Also, trap. And too Western. So swap that.
Next: The kit is overloaded on an entirely different level. When we started talking about Double Summon, I assumed she would have something like Semiramis' skillset... Except, y'know, minus the whole Hanging Gardens thing. In terms of Servant basis, I thought I mentioned Vlad here, since he's the embodiment of his legend after being twisted by Stoker's Dracula. I was expecting something similar, with one persona as the base and the rest influencing it, not form changing on a dime.
To that end, the NP has to be changed. That's an effective 3 classes and a new NP for each class. Would it not he possible to refine the idea a bit more and not just try to do everything at once?
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