HylianRose

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@Driving Park Mira looks good to me. :P

My favorite character happens to be Rain Jewlitt because he is PRETTY and uh.. sweet.

Though Tsukasa from Tokyo Crazy Paradise is also good... And uh... Basara, and uhh... all those other badass females.

P.S. The reason we're saying this has to do with the rules. I'd recommend everyone read them closely. :P

@chukklehed Ah, alright. Thanks for letting me know. :D (I just needed a reminder, really.)

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Would be alright if my character was a ratman?

@Weird Tales

Ahh... That depends? xD

I'm not sure what you mean by ratman other than... a man that is a rat which sounds strange in that of itself. I think I might need some prior knowledge on that to give it a thumbs up or down.

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It's finalized. I can't edit them right now, it was all I could manage to copypaste them

@chukklehed

No I mean... What did we decide? That Maria married him off to her for good relations?

Oh, and those of you that haven't already, go to the Etherpad, the link is 'Bananas' up there. It'll be taken down tonight so try to get the link tonight while you can. It's important that you come as a good deal of chatting happens on the OOC and one can quickly get left out. Those that don't get the link tonight can always PM me for it. :)

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@Raijinslayer Sounds like loads of fun! He's going to drive Maria crazy until she figures it out. :P (The thing Maria hates the most is not knowing. So ye.)

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@chukklehed Other than the missing Personalities and backgrounds, they're fine. Also, you and I need to finalize the whole Britnia + Criston thing, just so I can incorporate it into his background.

@Nytem4re Ye.

@Raijinslayer His mother could definitely be the 'never talked about' older sister. I'm cool with it. :)

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_{"It sort of funny how war will change a person, you know?"}

Criston Carter Cross

Basics

Gender || Male
Race/Species || Human Warlock/Witch
Age || 26

Height || 6 feet
Weight || 150 lbs
Hair Color || White Hair
Eye Color || Yellow Eyes
Skin Tone || Pale (ish)
Figure || Slim but Muscular
Occupation || N/A (Currently in charge of leading the Resistance against Marcus with his mother.)

Powers

Electricity Manipulation - Criston has the ability to manipulation electricity at his will. He can store it in his body and release it into other things. Using this ability, he can gain control over most electronic items and power them. He can also summon a powerful electric storm, though it drains a lot of his powers.

Weaknesses

Water - Criston, bless his heart, can't swim and is deathly afraid of large, or what he deems large, bodies of water. Getting over to Osari was no small task.

Pretty ladies - Criston has a soft spot for pretty ladies. Being a lady's man, he will always come to the aid of a female in need. He also finds it very hard to resist female's sexual advances. (Apologizes to his wife...)

His own arrogance - A well known problem with Criston is his arrogance. He is well known for thinking he knows more than he does and thinking that he can do more than he can actually do. He is getting better however, as he takes on his leadership role.

Personality

Criston is kind yet arrogant. He believes in his own strength and experience and will often boast about it. If confronted with an enemy, he will be the first to jump in without a plan and get hurt because of it. He is spoiled and has everything he could ever want and this can make him seem a bit condescending to other students.

With the recent events, however, he has begun to change as an individual and is beginning to mature, taking on more responsibility. In this, he has already surpassed Brako. ["Take that, old man!" - Criston]

Background

Criston is the Principal's son, which you can guess as to what sort of things he can get away with. He inherited his powers from his mother and everyone on campus knows about it. He's always been on campus, even as a child. He knows all of the professors and he knows all of the students.

(Background is severely lacking. Will be updated... eventually.)

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@Raijinslayer It looks much better. He's accepted. :)

Also, on the Cross'...

It's completely possible that Grimm is related to the Cross', though it could just be a strange coincidence. Maria won't like not knowing, though.

Right now, the three most important Cross' are Maria Cross, Marcus Cross, and Jonathan Cross, all siblings, with Marcus being the eldest and Jonathan being the baby.

When Maria was young, she ran away from home after being told she was to be married to a distant cousin. She met Alfred [Alexander] (I can't remember if that's actually his last name so just pretend for now.) and had a child. It wasn't long after that that her brother, Marcus found her and reported back to their father. Their father, after seeing Criston decided to let him live but killed Alfred before the two's very own eyes. Maria went into shock and wouldn't utter a word as her son was ushered to her father control. It wasn't until she was told of the horrid things they were doing to Criston that she snapped out of it and went on well... full on Mommy rampage mode, harming Marcus in the process, leaving him with a rather nasty scar on his face.

Running away with Criston, Maria stumbled upon an Academy under the direction of it's previous principal, the unnamed man, mostly because Maria won't tell anyone (And lazy GM is lazy.).

Now, Marcus Cross and his wife, Lauren Cross are aiming to take control of all of Lavanya, using Jonathan and their children and nieces and nephews and any others they can get their hands on. The Cross Family line is long and old and majorly powerful.

@Nytem4re I actually really like him but his backstory presents some loose ends that need tying. With his background, there comes the possibility of a new nation for Lavanya which, if it is true, needs to be given to DP so he can put it onto the map for ya. I know the background mentioned an island, so one of the small islands?

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@Raijinslayer Lol. I think it's funny. I'm also completely okay with you having a Cross. You'd just have to have a run down of the history from me. :P

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@TheHangedMan It doesn't say closed anywhere yet, so yep. Still open. :)

@Raijinslayer The mind reading ability still needs to be changed. Also... He's a Cross? O-O; I mean, he's got the hair to BE a Cross but I'd still need to see what sort of relation he would have to the rest of the Cross family as it could affect that entire dynamic. I still need to make a clear list of who is in the Cross family. I know who they are, I just have to solidify it and write it down so people can see it better.

Oh, and with the amount of powers you've given him, I'd like to see some more weaknesses possibly a greater limit on those powers. Most of them are fairly high level and give him a bit too much power. If you need an example of a well balanced power, I'd look at some of the other CSs the veterans have posted.

I hope I'm not being too nitpick-y here. o-o; I'm not doing this to be mean or anything. I've just been walked over in the past. So if it seems like I'm being... strict? I guess I sort of am.

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@Animelover_princess Oliver looks good. I'd recommend trying to clean it up a bit as the CS is a bit messy, but other than that, it's good! (Same with Andro. :P)

@Raijinslayer I'll have a greater look at this one when it's done, but I'll go ahead and say that being able to read people's thoughts will be touchy. It always is. I might have to say no just to avoid future complications, sorry. Being able to see auras, and what kind of being the person is are fine. I'm going to also put a limit on his ability to see characters' abilities. The player of that character will tell you what abilities your character can see. He may not be able to see all of the powers/abilites a character has. If you don't like this, then I'd recommend swiping that one as well. However, as I said, seeing auras and species or rough powers is okay. Like, he could totally see that Lily is angel and that she is currently very sad or upset, etc. But not much more than that.

Also, sorry for the double post. :D