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Franz had left the other boy behind while he went to go grab his jacket. Did he expect his call to action to work? In truth, probably not. Most of the students seemed terrified to take the stage before he danced, and now after his performance, the pressure was probably too much. Franz slung his jacket back over his shoulders then wrapped the tie around his neck. While he was adjusting the tie back into his previously formal look, he turned around with a smug smile on his face. He was expecting an empty floor but was pleasantly surprised.

The boy was actually doing it, he had taken to the stage. All things considered, he was not bad either. Franz felt the need to stick around and watch. After all, he had been caught off guard by the boy's bravery. It's not as if Franz showed it though. This had only caused him to raise his eyebrows a bit in surprise. Franz had an image to uphold and he was not about to look outwardly baffled just because of one incorrect assumption.

Who was this boy that he would do what no one else in the hall was willing to? Certainly, everyone here was worthy of name recognition. But the name of this boy had never reached Franz. It was an unfortunate reality that news, rumours, and tales are not held equal in the Occident. Franz could probably name every person from the Occident here, the Konigsmahne's fall from grace, the fire include du Bordeaux, and the Oriental defector are all tales he has heard multiple times. But when it comes to the New World, the stories are few and far between. Franz wanted to inquire about this New World boy, but he would not ask the people around him. The best first impressions were made face to face after all.

The boy's dancing was humble and clearly improvised. He could see some sort of style and form coming through, but the music certainly didn't fit it. In truth though, it was an enjoyable performance. When Inti was taken outside of his comfort zone, improvisation was used to the flow of the music. It reminded Franz of dancing in his home town. Before rules and strict conduct was a demand for something as natural as dancing.

Franz clapped at the end of Inti's dance and caught his attention as he was exiting the floor.

”Well done, very well done. I assume you haven't learnt much in the way of Occidental dance, but the confidence was there. Certainly, I don't see anyone else willing to take to the centre.” This was probably the first thing Franz had said all night that was entirely genuine. ”My name is Franz Steiner, but I have not quite caught your name.” He held out his hand as if expecting a hand shake.


I'll chuck my interest in


It was about time the music picked up, Franz thought as he approached the dance floor. It was finally sounding like something people actually dance to. Whereas a waltz is just some weak excuse for a meek noble boy to court a lady. There was time for all that to be sure, but that came after the real dancing. Real dancing, in Franz’s mind, is a spectacle. It was something to draw heads and entertain. Nobles were often too caught up in imitations of civility to ever try it. This would be thoroughly entertaining.

"You want to dance?" Inti said, then paused while he processed the question he'd just asked. Laughing lightly at himself he spoke up again quickly. "I meant you look like you want to dance. Are you good at it? I think long limbs are supposed to help with that kind of thing, right?"

Franz turned to look at who was addressing him only to see… nothing again. He would have to get used to that at some point if all of his colleagues were going to be around his age. Looking down he saw a shorter boy from the Americas with peculiar white hair. ”Haha, good at it? I am the best at it. Certainly, I am a better showing than what is on display right now.” Franz gestured toward the borderline empty dance hall with an open hand. He exclaimed it in a comical manner, but anyone could hear the confidence and pride behind his voice.

Franz called out to the music constructs in the hopes that it would reach their operator. “A high tempo, if you will please!” He then waited for the change in song to begin before addressing the Americas boy again. ”I will catch your name later. But for now, I will show you a true display of Occidental dance.” Somewhat unexpected, he then walked off toward a nearby table.

Franz took off his suit jacket and tie, placing them over a chair and tucking it in. He then reached his hands up to check his hair was properly tied back in the small tail of hair he usually had. Finally, he unbuttoned the top two buttons of his shirt. The first was the one that is used when putting on a tie, it was only logical that it would be undone. The second was for show.



On his way back, Franz began rhythmically clapping to the beat of the song for other students to pick up on. He waited for more and more to pick up, to usher him in to take the stage.

Franz began with a whirlwind of leaps around the floor, focusing on gaining height and emphasizing the spectacle of his ability while keeping his form composed and graceful. However, the primary purpose was to create a ring in which he would use as a stage.

The middle section of his performance was somewhat less notable in terms of physical capability. The moves used were grounded and more showed graceful but precise moves. Eventually, this lead him into the centre of the stage where he would perform his finale.

Franz couldn’t wipe the smile from his face. He couldn’t lie, he enjoyed displaying a complete lack of humility. For his final move, he wound up for a big spin. He continued into pirouette a la seconde. One turn, two turns, three turns, he wasn’t stopping. Seemingly for as long as the music continued and as long as students kept clapping, he would continue to spin.

Finally, as the music began to close, Franz ended with a normal triple pirouette into a final pose. His arms out to his sides with palms pointed toward the ceiling. Only then would he try to catch his breath. The piece he danced to was not very long, but the energy he had used during it was immense. Franz held for a few seconds after the piece had ended.

As Franz stood up out of the pose a spot of dizziness hit him, nothing that wasn’t manageable though. Headspotting during turns helped with all that immensely. He began walking back toward his jacket and tie to put them back on but not before passing the Americas boy. “I believe its your turn.” He called while patting him on the shoulder, then continued on.


Salim Basha
Jeanne de Bordeaux
Franz Steiner

@Dog @GreenGoat @Jumbus



“And who you might be?” Salim asks, directing his question to Jeanne. The voice of the boy was quite an anxious one. Intimidation, bullying, and all sorts of aggressive mannerisms were a common item in Salim’s life. There was no escape from it, forcing Salim to more or less grow a thicker skin to simply absorb all the verbal abuse thrown at him. And so, when Jeanne throws some shade at Salim - all the boy can do is simply just listen and not think too hard about the insults. Salim continues to eat with struggle, slowly calming down as he ever so slowly gets more situated to the current climate.

“Haah?” Annoyance showed clearly on Jeanne’s face. “Who the hell are you? Rude of you to ask my name without giving yours.”

“Ah, I swear these people have no manners.” She swept her hair from her face, sighing. Her sandwich half eaten, she laid it down to sip at her drink.

“Salim. Yours?” the boy asks once again, that is, asking for a name. There was not much else to ask from her - yet. For now, Salim awaits for some kind of answer, if the French gal would give away her name.

Merde, he’s not shutting up.

“Jeanne.” She put the glass down, putting her hands on the table. It was only now that she looked at Salim square in the eyes. “What do you want?”

As Franz approached, he felt as though he could cut the tension with a knife. What had happened that had made these two so confrontational so early on in the party? Certainly neither was drunk, or at least made their best attempts at hiding it.

“And my name is Franz. Nice to meet you both, you two seem to be making fast friends.” He walked past them both and pulled up a chair on the other side of Salim.

“Oh, hi Franz!” Salim speaks with a more friendly tone than with Jeanne. Salim quickly follows up, “Jeanne is mean to me.” Salim says plainly. Quite direct but Salim is still very much a child and basic in social skills, even if he is a genius in his own field of study.

Franz had a short chuckle to himself. This was going to be quite an easy mission with how quickly the boy was willing to throw his thoughts out there. “Well how dare she! And I thought you two were getting along swimmingly.” Franz was having fun with the conversation at hand. He peers over to the bully in question and raises his eyebrows a bit in surprise. How the hell did this kid gain the ire of the famous Jeanne de Bordeaux? It was a very unfortunate situation to be in to be sure.

“Fuh~” Jeanne smirked at that. “Ah, so I was right. The boy does wield pity like a weapon.”

She remained tense however, and had abandoned her food and drink, leaving it in front of her. “I’d have bid you to beware, Monsieur Franz, but I have no doubt you are familiar with snakes in the grass.”

Salim understood half of what it was said. He never really was exposed to anyform of higher reading or forms of speech. All he knew was more “simpler” sentences and wording. Afterall, he spent most of his life in a village. “I don’t understand,” Salim said in a confused tone, revealing a bit of his lack of complex social skills.

Franz had another small laugh. “Madame Bordeaux, it's a pleasure to put a name to the legend. I will be sure to keep my wits about me. Though I’m sure you mistake a snake for a common hedgehog.” Franz leaned over to Salim and talked directly to him. “A piece of advice, watch out for this one. She has claimed many burnt eyebrows in her studies. Sometimes her own, most times someone else's. Only a fool wants to be on her bad side.” He said it all in a friendly tone. He was trying to befriend Salim, but he knew better than to make an enemy out of Frau Bordeaux.

“Bah, do not bother with the child. It will continue to be coddled, and expect to be coddled. It won’t cross paths with me any time soon.” Jeanne glared at Salim’s maid before turning back to Franz. “Pity him with your bleeding heart and soon you will be shining his shoes too.”

With a slight bow to Franz and only Franz, Jeanne excused herself. She had better things to do than suffer the presence of the boy.

Franz gave a bow of his head back to Jeanne. What an interesting woman, Franz thought. There was a certain boldness and lack of restraint that he could really respect. It is a side of him that Franz would like to use more often, if duty didn’t necessitate facades. Nevertheless, he would hope to gain an ally like her in future.

Franz returned his attention back to Salim. “Kindness is a lesson some of our fellow academics need to learn, wouldn’t you agree. I will reintroduce myself, I am Franz Steiner of Austrian fame. I am aware of the long disputes between the nations we come from. However, I would like to assure you that such conflicts will not be carried over to here. I hope we can see each other as just fellow academics. That would be nice, no?” Franz held out his hand for a handshake.

Salim nods, agreeing to Franz. The boy gets a napkin and wipes off a bit of grease from his hands and palms before making contact with Franz’s hands. As always, this takes time and a good deal of struggle from Salim’s side, but he manages on his own luckily. “It's good to meet you, Franz. I see a good friend in you,” Salim smiles as he shakes Franz’s hands.

Franz had already noticed the boy's condition but had seen it on display with the handshake. "Thank you, I can see a good friendship as well." He took a pause before continuing. "By the way, I have noticed your condition. I imagine it would be quite difficult to create Formulizations in such a state. I hope you don't mind my curiosity, but what is your academic specialty? It must be quite impressive to be at a disadvantage like this and make it into Bermuda nonetheless."

“I’m an industrial engineer. I do not use formulations all too often. Heavy-industrial machines are my tools instead - I can show you an example later!” Salim tells Franz, shortly letting go of the handshake.

Franz gave out a laugh. “I certainly hope you are not operating heavy-industrial machines. Somehow I find that less believable than Formulization. Though I’m sure you meant that you have other people under you to operate them. You strike me as the planning sort.”

“Factory workers, yes. Human labor is very important to my work. Someone has to use the machines,” Salim notes.The boy cannot operate any form of machines or else he will find himself likely dead in a workplace accident.

Mission completed. Franz began to rise from his chair seeing a conclusion to the exchange. “As much as I would love to chat longer, I was hoping to have a few dances before the night is done. You must excuse me. However, before I leave I would like to let you know that there are ways around your condition with current Technologism. I am sure you can find someone to help you out if you so desire.” Franz took a quick pause to think before a devious smile crossed his face.

“In fact, I know just the person. She is short, very short with silver hair and green eyes. I am sure she would love to help you out. You will just need to address her by the proper and polite German greeting, ‘good evening fraulein Konigsmahne’. But you must not let her know I told you this, to disclose the name of a friend who kindly gives advice is very impolite in German society.”

Salim simply nods to the fact, keeping such information in his brain.

Franz finally took his leave as he began approaching the dance floor. He has had far more lessons in music and dance, than in the art of combat. It was about time he showed those talents.








-Arrival-


Franz took in the sheer spectacle of Bermuda. The sense of awe he felt in the presence of such displays had only been matched one time before. It was much like his first trip to Vienna. Growing up in some gloomy farm town and arriving in the grand centre of the nation. Now, he stood in the grand centre of the world. His eyes were filled with wonder, while his mouth had a slight bitter taste of the wealth taken to construct it. It was a strange, conflicting set of emotions to be sure.

The guided tour was an educational one. Franz never missed the opportunity to ask about landmarks and gain a greater understanding of the entire city. He made a particular mental note about the curfew. 10pm was a reasonable time and he would have no problem following it. But could he gain some advantage from staying past it? Certainly if it were only a fog that stops navigation, himself or most Egoists could still easily navigate it. Even then, most students of Bermuda’s caliber wouldn’t be held back by a simple fog. There was probably more to it, and he was not about to be the lab rat to find out.

The final stop was in front of some daunting, oversized doors. Franz was glad he had asked about opening ceremonies before getting off the air ship. Freya and Thor would have become stressed to no end if they had to endure whatever was on the other side. Another bonus was that he was dressed to the nines from the get go. In all regards, he was ready for this party.



-A Social Butterfly-


The first thing that stood out to Franz was the music. The technological constructs played competently, flawlessly in fact. It was an incredible feat of science that was playing before him. But he couldn’t ignore the fact that it was a disservice to the arts. Ask any musician in Vienna and they will tell you that technical excellence is only a fraction of playing compelling music. The ‘flaws’ are small additions of personality each musician brings to their performance. Although the untrained ear cannot consciously pin point the difference, it is subconsciously noticed by all. Unfortunately, technical excellence is all these constructs could bring to the table. Music was music though, and there was no point in having a sour mood over nothing.

Franz knew who he had to enquire about for his mission, but in his mind there was plenty of time. The night was still young after all and he deemed it far more important that he make a good name for himself. There were 2000 students starting attendance, but Franz doubted he would need to learn the names of more than 100 of them. Still, he needed to wade through just about all of them to find out who those 100 people were.

Franz approached a waiter carrying a plate of wine glasses, but didn’t grab one. “Waiter, this is a place of wonder and mystery to me. Therefore, it would be fitting that I try a wine I have never had before.” The waiter paused for a bit before handing him a small glass containing a pink wine. The waiter was correct, Franz had only heard about pink wine through conversation and rumors back home. “Thank you” he replied before dismissing the waiter and giving it a curious sip. It was quite sweet and very palatable compared to the few wines he had tried previously. Franz would have to remind himself of moderation, not that he has struggled with it in the past.

The wonder of Bermuda and the excitement of new horizons had made sparking conversation very easy. Franz had found himself occupied with three other students making casual conversation and cracking the occasional joke. One even laughed at his mention of studying Mesmerology, thinking it to be a joke. Franz took no offense of course, the reputation of the profession was well known and he had met plenty of ignorant people before.

Franz had his back turned so he didn’t see Lucy making a beeline toward him. "Guten Abend, Herr Steiner" Franz spun around to see… nothing. It was only until he tilted his head down that he saw who was addressing him. Lucrieta von Konigsmahne, any German would recognize that family name and that fame would also extend to their Austrian neighbours. Franz was well aware of who she was even before she introduced herself. “Ah, Guten Abend.”

"I am Lucretia von Konigsmahne, a pleasure to meet you. Would you honor me with a moment of your time?" How curious that a girl of such family prestige would seek out someone like him, Franz thought. Still, he would reply politely and continue the conversation in German. “The pleasure is all mine, frau Konigsmahne.” He would take her hand and gently shake it while giving a small bow. “You must forgive me, I am not too well versed in the German etiquette nor that of higher nobility. I do, however, always have time to give to one who speaks the native tongue.”



Mentions: @Izurich


Heroes always leave a crime scene too early. The younger ones are particularly bad in this regard. They just conclude their business and say ‘well, the cops will be along soon enough to clean things up’. Maybe they think that the cops will be just waiting around the corner to start putting up police tape. How long could they take to respond? You may ask. Half an hour, give or take 5 minutes. But still, a half hour with the scene of the crime just sitting there. Of course, some heroes do stick behind for the police to come and clean up their mess. But they are few and far between.

The setting sun was just about over the horizon, shedding its last rays on the remnants of the train. Whatever the heroes did here, they did a number on just about everything around the place. Night Owl didn’t dawdle on the spectacle for too long, she had 20 minutes to get in and out.

Carefully crossing from a nearby tree line, Night Owl entered the first train car and almost immediately gagged. Sure, heroes were no ideal force in the world. But she didn’t expect the slaughter house that was left inside, and it was starting to smell like one too. She didn’t want to be longer than she had to.

The benefit of the strong smell was that her power was working on overdrive. Almost immediately the trails of everyone in the train started visualising before her.

An omnipresent white trail needlessly scattered itself around the train. It then shooting off in a thin trail outside of it, taking another trail with it. She knew the smell well enough to know it was her idiot brother. The white outline image of him gradually manifested, making it easier to tell what was what. ‘Did he know what had happened in here?’ Night Owl thought. ‘He must have. Maybe he isn’t what the selfless idiot hero chalks himself up to be? There would be no reason for all this if he wasn’t though.’ It was a curious point to be sure, but she had to move on.

There was another familiar smell, this one manifested in an orange trail that continuously splattered out into blood stains around the train. The curious thing is that there was no body to connect it. They just up and left, like the beating they had received was nothing. Another hero most likely, but it was off that she recognized the trail. She hadn’t stalked any heroes with powers like that, not yet anyway. Night Owl found it a point of concern that she couldn’t place it. But she had to move on. Time was short and there was a lot to cover.

The splatterings of ice were starting to melt now, leaving small puddles of water around them. Judging by the icy blue trail, the user had left as well. An ice wielding hero was not once she had seen before. But much like the others, none of these people were responsible for the carnage.

It was time to look closer at the bodies, as much as it disgusted her. In each body's wound, she could see a new part of the figure that had done it. A hole in the chest, that was an arm. *snap*. A crumpled head, that was a fist. *snap*. The trampled body that looked like a hopscotch mat, that was the feet and legs. *snap*. The snake looking guy that was torn apart, a chainsaw. Not the same guy but it hardly mattered. *snap*. As she began going through each corpse, she found that the mutilated ones all came from the same two people. One was the chainsaw maniac in the middle of the train car, and the other got away. Was the second one a hero? They must be. How interesting. She looked upon the now formed outline of a massive crimson figure. Night Owl couldn’t put a face on it, but how many people that size could really be at HERO. The figure of crimson could be a big help in this all.

Amelia cracked a smile, before quickly keeping it back under control. She was proud of her accomplishment here and had plenty of directions to go. First thing was first though, she double checked her camera to see if those pictures went through.

The first stage was to throw some mud at HERO and she had the ammunition she needed for that. To see all this be covered up and swept under the rug like nothing happened, that would be a mighty shame.




In the early hours of the Brookside and Watervale morning, well before the sun rises, a figure could be seen hanging up posters. From the silhouette, one might mistake this as a girl hanging up missing pet posters if it wasn’t for the absurd time. Then, before the majority of people woke up, she had been out of sight for at least an hour.

On the main streets of Brookside and Watervale, posters were placed everywhere.

“This is how your heroes protect you.”
“Trust in the Night Owl.”

Followed by pictures of the N-Train massacre.








After everything that had happened, Lucas had a lot to think about. It had been a matter of days since the N-Train mission and his arm had been fully healed. But the effect it had on him had still remained. He was glad to have a therapist he could talk to. When he heard about what happened on the train, he felt overwhelming guilt for not being able to stop it. Particularly the gas weapon that was used when he left, he could have saved them. Who ‘them’ was, he wasn’t so sure. But he could have.

Lucas thought about home and the Vandermon manor. What was his sister up to? He hoped that his parents hadn’t had too much influence over her while he was away.

Whenever Lucas thought about his father, he always remembered the image of his bust statue. For generations, each head of the Vandermon family had a bust statue made of them. As a kid, he looked up to the image of it and his father. But as he grew into his teens he started to realise that his father always looked like that. The expression on the bust was how his father always looked. His mother also had the same expression on her face. No matter what day of the year, they always had that cold, lifeless look on them. In his mind, he would have a statue in that main hall one day and he too would gradually have his face mirror its expression.

Lucas knew he had no choice but to stay at the Foundation. He just couldn’t go back and become like his parents. Whenever he thinks about his sister, he dreads the thought that he will come back home one day and she will have a face of stone, just like them. But what could he do about that? He couldn’t just march back to the manor and tell her to desert her aspirations just because he was bothered by it.

But maybe he wasn’t remembering them right. Maybe with him being more grown up he could understand and relate to his parents more. The self doubt had certainly crossed his mind. Maybe he was being stupid, maybe he should have just stayed home.

This was Lucas’ first real taste of action and he didn’t know how to feel about it. Maybe this whole thing wasn’t for him. The Foundation would have put so much time and effort into him, just for him to give it up. He at least owed them a couple of weeks to think it out.




In the end, he knew he had to stick it out. This couldn’t be every mission, just some really bad luck. Plus it only showed that he had room to improve. He needed to keep his chin up and push through it. But that still didn’t stop him from feeling bad about it. Dawnbreaker was supposed to be an unbeatable paragon and yet a single bullet had stopped any notion of that. He wasn’t naive enough to think the costume would actually make him immune to bullets, but to have the illusion shatter so abruptly was demoralizing. Lucas just hoped no one other than the villain lady saw it.








Mentions (briefly): Gateway @Zoey Boey

Starbright hadn’t come into the Foundation building too much within the last month. Things had been going smoothly, so he thought he would give himself a small vacation. He learned to appreciate those in his later years, as opposed to his younger self.

The trip to the Foundation building was a smooth one. His personal driver was expensive, so that much was certainly an expectation. This left him to read over some final documents before his meeting.

Today’s meeting was a personal one with Dawnbreaker. Reading the mission debrief and then the therapists report, this did not go very well. Certainly HERO main missions were always a gamble on whether they actually went well or not. Looks like the kid rolled snake eyes for his debut.

It was certainly a bummer. Starbright wanted to come back with the good news. Dawnbreaker had locked in a big sponsorship and a movie deal which starts filming at the end of the year. While he was at it, he could say hi to that new Irish import. What was her name again? It was slipping his mind but she had sponsors lining up the wood works already too... None of that seemed tasteful given the circumstances.

Starbright needed to cheer his main star up and there was only one way he knew how to do that. With something expensive.




“How is my favourite star?” Starbright announced with gusto as he entered the room. The doors swung open with immense force as Starbright posed in the entryway. Yep, he still had it.

Dawnbreaker was initially just eating a sandwich with a slight hunch in his shoulders. Upon the Starbright entry, he jumped and rushed to bring his shoulders back for better posture. “Hey, I’m just eating up a sandwich. Got to keep my strength up for the hero stuff today.” Lucas tried to get his ‘hero smile’ up but his heart wasn’t in it.

Starbright could tell. Plus Dawnbreaker had no ‘hero stuff’ scheduled for the rest of the week. The therapist had recommended a hero leave, which Dawnbreaker protested as expected. But in the end, Starbright had final say. After reading the report, he took the side of the therapist.

“You don’t have to keep that act up. I bought you a present.”

Starbright handed Dawnbreaker the present, it was clearly a sword of some kind. But it had been wrapped in tacky wrapping paper.

“What is it?”

“Well after reading up on your therapists report. I thought this could be of use to you.”

Dawnbreaker furrowed his brow sceptically. “Hang on, are you allowed to d-”

“Just open it up already.” Starbright interrupted cheerfully. “Besides, it was more just a recounting of events, not personal details.”

Dawnbreaker starts unwrapping. “Alright I guess, but couldn’t you get that from the mission debrief.”

“The mission debrief and what you personally saw are two different things. I am more interested in the latter.”

Dawnbreaker finished unwrapping to reveal a katana in an expensive looking sheath. It looked really cool, but how was this supposed to help him? “You know I don’t know the first thing about sword fighting right.” He swung it around a little in its sheath.

Starbright remained silent.

Dawnbreaker finally went to unsheath it. But as he did so, some sparks came flying out. Thinking back to the N-Train mission, the implication is clear.

“Reading up on the events, I was impressed with your oxygen trick. However, you should never leave the choice to a villain. Take this as a very... ornamental lighter, and you can swing that thing around some if you feel the need.”

“Thank you.”

“But! There’s one more thing I want to address.”

Dawnbreaker looked up in curiosity.

“The whole appeal to justice and truth. Look, it's a great thing for the cameras. Fantastic really, a good look. You can really say that sort of thing like you believe it-”

“I do believe i-”

“Yes, exactly, that's good too. But that sort of thing is not going to work on a villain, is it? Hell, it won’t even work on half of the heroes with the moral standards HERO has.”

“...”

“Either way, my point is there are other ways to appeal to people. You don’t need to fight someone to make them see reason, but ‘truth and justice’ isn’t going to cut it either.”

“I think you are ready to learn my ultimate technique.”

“Your ultimate technique?”

“That’s what I said. This weekend, I’m teaching it to you. Afterward, you’ll be ready for your actual debut.” Starbright then left without another word leaving Dawnbreaker alone in the room.

What could that ultimate technique be? Something cool, Dawnbreaker hoped.






I’ll say that he’ll find his best successes with hive-minded insects like bees or ants right now, just in terms of being able to perceive the Formulae of their minds. As a Polymath, he’ll also have the potential/ability to perform fairly well in all other Majors, because that’s essentially the prerequisite you need in order to pursue Mesmerology as more than a meme. With no encounters with Edenic Beasts, he’ll also be a natural born Dynamicist, which is also pretty rare to begin with. Basically, the dude’s fame would easily stretch beyond Vienna, and he’ll only be held back by his choice of Major.

He’ll definitely be able to modify his own memories with ease, because that can easily just be a pure-Egoism feat. He won’t be able to transfer at all though. I’d say he can direct hive-minded insects to go places if he has their queen with him, and he can vaguely affect how aggressive vermin are.

I established Mesmerology as part of the world building and as a meme option. Those who can pursue it with any modicum of success will be extremely capable individuals though, while those who can’t actually succeed in that field are funny little trolls.


All good made some touch up edits. I imagine while his ability has gain national interest, he is kept as a pretty closely guarded national secret. So his fame hasn't stretch out farther than nation government.

With that said, let me know if he is good to send over to the characters
@JumbusTragically, the implication behind Mesmerology in the OOC is that there’s not a single Mesmerologist in the world that can actually do what they claim to be able to do, as the very nature of this particular Major works against the most difficult parts of Formulization in general, due to requiring you to essentially alter the properties of the intangibles (memories/thoughts) of a living being (which is difficult enough to do when it’s yourself). The hurdle to Mesmerology is high enough that everything about it is theoretical and there’s no systematized method of actually attaining it. So a school that can produce Mesmerologists (that aren’t just scam artists) is out of the question. Either find another Major, accept that Franz is lying through his teeth, or make him a real genius of geniuses.

Otherwise, the backstory is good enough. You’ll want to talk to Dog about how Austira-Hungary exists when the Ottoman Empire also does. Qualia isn't anything relevant to the world though.


Hi yeah fully understand. I was going for a 'some countries might have secretly developed it more' but I get that isn't the direction you want for Mesmerology. I do find it curious that Mesmerology is an option when it is hamstrung this significantly. However, my original concept for this character was to have no power at all so I'm certainly not complaining. I quite like under powered characters who use their brain over their power. I have reworked multiple parts of his backstory to fit the advice:

-The Vienna Academy is now just a Young Polymath academy that happens to have an interest in developing Mesmerology past the theoretical phase.

-Franz's powers got reworked to be his experimental progress in the Mesmerology field. Hopefully thats a good power level for it. If it isn't, I would appreciate some clearer guidelines with it. As its a bit rough to gauge it at the moment haha

-I would say Franz is a mix between genius of geniuses and scam artist

-I mistook Qualia for being a shorthand name for the academy sorry

Edit: The first edit was not saved so I have only just got those changes up

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Sam


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Sam laughed, jubilant. “Want a bullet in your mouth this time, air boy? Huh?” She was evidently taking glee from this, her face lighting up as she saw Dawnbreaker in pain. “Fucking soft-ass idiot. You can’t kill me with oxygen. I breathe oxygen!” Sam took a deep breath as if to demonstrate that she did indeed breathe oxygen, before yanking hard on the controls of the plane.

The jet went into a violent and fast barrel roll as Sam tried to literally throw him off the plane. She, however, seemed to be having a grand old time as the plane careened, nose down, towards the ground. If Dawnbreaker wasn’t in control the sheer force of the wind would send him flying off.

Dawnbreaker hit the deck hard as the plane spun. His whole body hurt at the impact onto the ship. He scrapped as much energy he could in the hopes he would stick to the plane. The cape was now pulling at his neck, near strangling him. He couldn’t spare the energy to keep it in place like before. It was a really cool cape, but it had to go. Dawnbreaker struggled an arm up and unclipped it. Sparing no time to watch it fly off into more peaceful skies. Sure he felt exhausted from the gunshot, but you can muster all sorts of energy when your life is at risk.

‘Why did I think she would play fair?’ Was the main question running in his head over and over. ‘Why am I playing fair? He said everything would be alright as long as I played the part. But every time I’ve done something heroic, it just blows up in my face. With all that advice, I’m facing certain death if I don’t do something right now.’ Could he get her to surrender? Off the cards. Give an awe inspiring speech? That doesn’t work on nose diving planes. So what could he realistically do here?

The wings. Wings in planes require a keen balance of air pressure above and below them to maintain a desired altitude. With the amount of energy he had left, this was the best bet. Trusting more in speeding up wind than slowing it, Dawnbreaker increased the speed above the wings. He made sure to balance the wings to avoid further rolling. Hopefully this was a good temporary solution, it had to work.

One thing didn’t go unnoticed though, there was no winning this. All his efforts continuously drained his own energy while she went unharmed. When the plane becomes balanced again, he would have to retreat. Dawnbreaker’s expression no longer kept his heroic smile, he looked at Sam with a cold anger. She had done harm to him, his friends, and countless innocents. Yet he would have to just let her go.

The wings of the plane came to a sudden standstill. Dawnbreaker’s wind was forcing them to remain straight, so now they were in a straight nose-dive. “Shit!” Sam slammed upwards to avoid a total crash. She very much disliked the lack of control. The G-forces were enough to turn anyone’s stomach, and even she was turning a bit green. But, to her satisfaction, Dawnbreaker wasn’t looking awesome either. He was barely clinging onto the plane, his arm bloodied. He looked terrible, and that’s what made her smile.

Now she just needed to shake him off. Despite posturing, Sam had no intent of actually crashing the plane and fighting Blitz. She didn’t know who the other bitch was, but she had no desire to get impaled by a giant, muscled fist. Instead, she simply flew off into the sky, still trying her best to disengage her clinger.

With the plane now steady, Dawnbreaker took the opportunity to disengage off the plane. Letting the criminal get away. He didn’t want to, it felt wrong to. But he could fight much longer. As he leapt off behind the plane, Dawnbreaker turned around to watch it fly away. His cocky smile was long gone and replaced with a mix of disappointment and tiredness.




After the plane was out of sight he slowly descended to the ground. Seeing his cape lying on top of a nearby tree, he picked it up on his way down. Reaching the ground, he took in the silence and the opportunity to catch his breath. It wouldn’t be long before one of the other heroes came to check on him. But he couldn’t show himself in this state. Dawnbreaker was unbeatable, even if Lucas wasn’t.

‘God this thing hurts’ thought Lucas as he slowly draped the cape back over his shoulders. It was a slow and arduous process but he got it back on. He made sure to keep the cape on a right tilt so that his injured arm was concealed by it, then stumbled his way back toward the mean hero lady. Maybe she had some success...

On second thought, he was just going to head home to the Starbright Foundation.


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