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GurkenkraterSkills: White Flame Magic- That's acceptable
Master Martial Artist- Might makes right in Hell- This doesn't explain why he would become a master. Strength doesn't necessarily have anything to do with fighting skills. Demand generally don't respect human skills.
The Deadly Sin of Wrath-Yes I've heard of the hulk.
I can accept that.
The Flames of Wrath- I get that this isn't a separate skill. But it sounds like this might be different from the white flames so I need to know if it is.
Personality: I don't expect him to be confident in everything. I do need an idea of where his confidence is. His laziness could be a problem.
Name: Sora Grimoire
Weapon: both scythes are actually long-barreled magnum revolvers- You can't invent a weapon like this without a reason.
Skills:"The Reaper's Touch"- if you cant tell me what it does then you can't use it..
Gonna need specifics on Weakness/Limits:-the only weakness I see for this character is someone being stronger than him. That isn't enough.
Weapon:- Pick a weapon. You can't be vague. There is a reason for everything.while killers might not 'need' a certain type of weapon they usually have a reason for the weapon they use.
Weakness/limits: The downsides of Cellular Manipulation- I don't understand this doesn't seem like a weakness.
Appearance: You need an appearance. They would have a description of him. You can't look for a person if you don't know what they look like.
Name: Blackade Scotus/Codename: "Shadow King"
Age: Because it's a requirement. It's part of the characters history.
Last time he turned himself in. Next time he might not.
There is no such thing as an airtight container. Every container would require an opening which would create a crack. Unless it was magic and none of the agents can create something like that.
Master Martial Artist- Might makes right in Hell- This doesn't explain why he would become a master. Strength doesn't necessarily have anything to do with fighting skills. Demand generally don't respect human skills.
The Deadly Sin of Wrath-Yes I've heard of the hulk.
I can accept that.
The Flames of Wrath- I get that this isn't a separate skill. But it sounds like this might be different from the white flames so I need to know if it is.
Personality: I don't expect him to be confident in everything. I do need an idea of where his confidence is. His laziness could be a problem.
Name: Sora Grimoire
Weapon: both scythes are actually long-barreled magnum revolvers- You can't invent a weapon like this without a reason.
Skills:"The Reaper's Touch"- if you cant tell me what it does then you can't use it..
Gonna need specifics on Weakness/Limits:-the only weakness I see for this character is someone being stronger than him. That isn't enough.
Weapon:- Pick a weapon. You can't be vague. There is a reason for everything.while killers might not 'need' a certain type of weapon they usually have a reason for the weapon they use.
Weakness/limits: The downsides of Cellular Manipulation- I don't understand this doesn't seem like a weakness.
Appearance: You need an appearance. They would have a description of him. You can't look for a person if you don't know what they look like.
Name: Blackade Scotus/Codename: "Shadow King"
Age: Because it's a requirement. It's part of the characters history.
Last time he turned himself in. Next time he might not.
There is no such thing as an airtight container. Every container would require an opening which would create a crack. Unless it was magic and none of the agents can create something like that.
