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@RoflsMazoy

Indeed, it's ok now. At least, I think so.
@RoflsMazoy

I say that leveling up is alright, but that Cloak of Starlight ability is too powerful. It's at the same time, a strong defense, a nearly impossible to avoid automatic attack, a debuff, and a utility spell. On top of that, when he gets over level 06, he'll be able to maintain it indefinitely. That really needs a revision.

The one for the cat is ok, though.
@Awesomoman64

Your character seems very good to me. By the way, you know that he and Emma are auto rivals now, right? He's Scottish, she's Irish, both are loud redheads, he's a warrior, she's a mage, he fights with cold and she with fire.

That's something really interesting for the future as well. I think things are getting around quite nicely these days.
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Here they are for review and revision.


Gotta read this later, to know how to better stalk this character.
<Snipped quote by Jedly>

YES

I NEED SKMETHING TO DO


Oh, Itsuko is right there at the Mall, Cassandra should be able to see the commotion. That's why I tagged you on my last post. Also, I'm sorry for taking so long, but I was waiting for Windel's reply first.

EDIT: Of course Shiro can come in if he wants as well, just remember that he's at the school and they are at the Mall, right now.
I'm going to keep an eye on this if that's fine.


Grabs Windel-sama. "Of course it's fine, Windel-sama. I may be only a lowly peon here, but I won't let you go, now~"

On another note, @liferusher and @ADamnFiddle, after beginning to watch the anime and falling in instant with Felt-chan, I may be doing a thief character in the future. I may PM you if do so, since I'm not yet completely sure about magic and blessings.

Eris

"G-gunpowder? And bad quality one, by the smell." Eris thought as the pungent smell of sulfur she had felt so many times before while at home, hit her nose. The presence of it meant that this world had some measure os scientific advancement as well, even if through alchemy. Though Eris would have to verify it later, right now her mind wasn't in a state were she could think anything coherent, the spell that the wolfman casted hit Eris like a hammer blow to the temples, disorienting her gravely as was expected of what ultimately was a high school girl used to a life of quite steep luxury. Despite being fit and that, this kind of thing still hurt. As a matter of fact, even a flashbang grenade can gravely injure, or even kill people if handled in the wrong way, which is why it's called a less-than-lethal armament, instead of non-lethal armament.


Anyway, as soon as Eris' senses got back to her --at a snail's pace-- she couldn't avoid throwing up a good portion of her dinner, bending down to all fours, gasping for air. Eris couldn't ever bear to speak, just coughing hard. Sure, Eris wasn't going to die, but she wasn't forgetting this first encounter with magic anytime soon,or so she thought, just before almost passing out.


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