GM reviews:
@SailorsadieEven with the borked code, I'm cool with your sheet. It doesn't particularly conflict with anything or anyone else, and honestly I like the simplicity of just a nurse practitioner and her dog. Consider it approved.
@Force and FuryWith the Sparlings, I'm kind of mixed on the sheet.
It's a big family, which I'm fine with, large families do exist. But for the sake of the RP, I do have to ask if you're going to be okay with managing six characters in total. I presume you are since you made the sheet, but I wanted to ask before the RP started as some people think they're cool with essentially a lot of work but then keel under pressure/the workload later.
I've also had people mention to me that the Sparlings seem sort of "metagamey". And to be honest, I do see some of their concerns, particularly with Jason. He fits nearly every aspect of characters I feel hesitant to accept: sword swinging, zombie/survivalist "know-it-all" type, etc. I can ignore the sword collection in this particular case, but the whole "playing zombie games and building traps" is what I'm worried about. Granted, I can see that you're planning on him getting a reality check and that realizing life isn't a video game, but I'm just concerned about it being a "get-out-of-jail" free card to triumph over every situation him and/or others are in.
Once you address these concerns, consider the Sparlings accepted.
@StarlanceI'm a fan of the Valeros. Not too many people willingly play old characters in zombie apocalypse roleplays. My only question is that you mention that that you mention their daughter, Amanda, being a regular visitor... but she isn't listed in the sheet? Do you intend on bringing her into the RP, or will she be a background character at most?
The sheet is accepted, I just want to know what's the haps with that particular character.
@TGMI like the sheet, but I do have a few concerns with Lorraine. Her information feels sparse(-ling, heh, anyhow) compared to the other characters mentioned within the sheet. I know she's struggling to support the family alone and is dealing with the loss of her husband, but what else? Did she have some kind of big job, was she a stay-at-home mom or something? Small details like that to give her more depth as a character.
Once you've done that, feel free to post the sheet in the CS tab.
@TheyraI like the newbie idea (at least for the family, not so much Tegan). My main concern is that the game dev arc slightly steps on
@Force and Fury's toes, since both are going for the game studio angle, albeit with different positions of course. Maybe you two could work something out; perhaps Devon and Kyle know each other? Of course you don't have to do anything, I just figured to note the potential for overlap between the two of you.
Whenever you get a chance, you can go ahead and post it with the other accepted sheets.
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