@Lord Wraith
Still writing my first post, doing a flashback to the events earlier in the day. Btw if you have any tips on how I could improve my writing, please do not hesitate to share them with me.
Looking forward to it! Just about to post myself.
Lord Wraith
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Reluctantly retired roleplayer.
Except when I'm not.
Why are you here when you should be writing posts?
You can edit a bad draft, but you cannot edit a blank page.
Except when I'm not.
Why are you here when you should be writing posts?
You can edit a bad draft, but you cannot edit a blank page.
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Looking forward to it! Just about to post myself.
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He said hard work.
Also, if you want to, I'm fine with both of us doing the same concept, just approaching it differently, provided it's cool with Wraith.
It's good with me, I'd hate to see someone's hard work go down the drain over a technicality.
Oof, I felt that.
@Lord Wraith Alright, I've read through it and know what's going on. I assume I start at Alexander's house, transition to him going to the class, finding out about the search for the missing student, and then have him become part of the search itself correct?
Yep, up to you if you want to write all of that out though. You could write him as though he was in class the entire time and then go from there. Up to you! Just wanted to ensure you were up to speed.
hey now no take-backsies
What can I say? My love is conditional.
have you tried getting gud
Did I say accepted on your sheet? I meant rejected, I don't know where my head is today :P
@Lord Wraith
Finished the edits. Still feel that the end of the backstory could be improved upon and maybe the weaknesses as well, but I'd rather have your opinion on it before making any more changes.
Alright, looks good. Please read the IC before posting and if you need any clarification on events just ask!
@The Bork Lazer & @Hillan both of your characters are accepted.
I threw my CS in the Character Tab as well, going to add supporting cast after I write my first IC post. Might also tweak my bio some as I'm not quite happy with it but I'm probably over thinking it right now.
I threw my CS in the Character Tab as well, going to add supporting cast after I write my first IC post. Might also tweak my bio some as I'm not quite happy with it but I'm probably over thinking it right now.
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