@Solaris - Okay, read it over again... for one, the personality section sounds more like a brief, brief history of the character. It doesn't describe his personality at all. And like I said in Discord, I don't like the idea of mental instability (besides depression or bipolar). This is
mostly because the summoner (the one who summons everyone) would never want someone who's unstable for the current quest.
As for the abilities... I don't know. I still get a strong feeling you're trying to make him powered for the sake of being powerful vs having anything interesting. Maybe this is because I haven't seen his personality or history, but it's making me hesitant. Not to mention I do not like Relapse, for the same reason the summoner wouldn't summon him. I'd suggest you taking a look at
@Lucian's Valter. I was very hesitate about allowing a vampire as well, but he was so well written and balanced that I only had one minor issue with the whole character which was easily fixed.
I'm going to be out this afternoon, but please ask the other players what they think and what they have to offer. A lot of players here have a lot of experience in writing nice, balanced, but still legendary heroes for this setting.
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