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@PlatinumSkink

Thank ya! And yea, for once weight is actually a factor. I was surprised to see Snorunt to weigh 37 pounds and will have to keep an eye out for other ones.
❄Erika Olson❄






Erika had to admit, it was a little surprising that Joshua took Erika up on her joking offer to carry Sno, but judging from the impression Erika had of him, it wasn't that surprising. "Oh! Okay... just be careful, she is a bit heavier than I-..." Erika stopped short as she saw Sno turn around with a squinted challenging glare. "Sorry..." Erika muttered to her Pokemon as she once again lifted and put her Pokemon in Joshua's hands.

The strain in Joshua's expression was a bit clear as Erika looked on hesitantly. Sno, in the meantime, snuggled into Joshua's arms and found it easy to relax. Leaning against his chest, it looked as if she was casually lounging. "Well... don't strain yourself too much." Erika offered.

Erika was glad that the other two were willing to investigate with her as those ladder-carrying trio definitely seemed up to something. Erika lead her own group, following the ladder carriers through the cave until the split, taking the left with the ladder trio. This eventually lead to a beautiful part of the cave that appeared, at least to Erika, to have a sort of mystery. Thus, Erika couldn't help but get more excited whatever it was they were getting into.

"Wow... I get the feeling something amazing is up there..." Erika said over her shoulder, taking a glance back at Joshua and Ewan and Sno who was still getting a lift from Joshua. "Oh! Here let me..." Erika fiddled with Sno's Pokeball before pointing it at her and returning the Snorunt back to its ball. "That should make it easier. Now shall we climb up?" Erika asked the two, turning around and approaching the ladder. It wasn't long before she began heading up, with or without her friends though she would prefer with.
@Pirouette

Alright, so... personally, I was hoping to keep the information over who discovered the stuff about genetics being the reason confined to the scientists of Palladium Academy... but eh, I can stretch the lore a bit, so no need to alter that. However, I am curious about a few things.

For starters, why did her powers only manifest after death? It should of manifested from the ages of 5 - 10. If it doesn't manifest during this time, then the child won't have powers, period. If it has to do with the mutagen, then it doesn't make any sense, considering the age when it usually pops up... which meant there was no way. That's the main problem I have with her backstory. If the mutagen changed the gene to the on phase, I prefer if we hold off on technology that allows the gene to go from off to on for now.

Anyways, the other two covered my thoughts on you (but I am glad you actually covered the part where you had her be interviewed due to her bloodlust... also, four years to master her powers? That seems a little strange.), so I'm going to move on for now.


Fair enough.

Her powers manifested after death because that is her power. Kind of tough to convey what I'm trying to say but my thought was that her specific gene and power is to be a zombie and since she can't be a zombie until she dies, it didn't manifest until after death. The mutagen has nothing to do with it.

Yea. The age is flexible. Margaret is supposed to be scientific so four years of 'research' and her understanding of anatomy already will make that process move fast. I can add ten years if you want, the age doesn't matter too much to a zombie, and thinking about it, bloodlust doesn't fit so I'll nix it.

To the three GMs, I submitted Margaret to play an unconventional teacher type. She's supposed to be odd, scary, or whatever to shake things up and for me to play through the interest interactions that such an oddball creep would be like. I can answer your questions all night but I'm waaaay better at accurately presenting a character like this in game. But if you don't want to bother than let me know and I'll move on. I have a student in mind since the beginning but saw staff spots were available and wanted to try Margaret out again.

@Rune_Alchemist@Surtr
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I don't think she's a bad character (well, I think she's a little edgy, but hey), I just don't think being a teacher would be natural for her. I see her as a student brought here to control her bloodlust or weird ghoul powers (which I think are cool, but some of the others have concerns).


@Pirouette

Oh boy a character that's going to be Meredith's best friend~

Alright...so teacher. That's cool, and I expect them to be a biiit more powerful since well. @Surtr already mentioned her personality, so I'm not going to say anything about it.

What I take a bit of an issue with is her ability to create what is essentially zombies. All the other abilities are A-okay to me, but that seems a little...jarring to me. Her ability to basically be a zombie, take hits, and modify her body is already a fairly powerful ability in and of itself, I think. You're basically spawning tough-to-kill bullet sponges that in my opinion could classify as a somewhat powerful entity in its own right.

I don't mind the ability in and of itself, but teachers are just supposed to be above average in power. What exactly are the limitations on this ability of hers? A number amount she could control at a time? I think it might just be a bit much to start out with honestly, but if neither of the others have too much of a problem with it I'm not going to say too much else.


To be fair, she was originally purposed a long time ago to be be a main bad in another RP (and heavily inspired by Tokyo Ghoul and a friend's character). I actually dumped a lot of the physical enhancements to better fit the universe. I could dump more but she is essentially supposed to be this zombie necromancer. I feel I haven't accurately portrayed the personality but she's supposed to be more childish than demented. I mean, it is the side effect of being dead and buried for four years, but the neurosurgeon Margaret is still there and she can at least appear in control with only slight mad ravings. I mean, yea, she's unconventional for a teaching position, I know that. But sometimes media has those mad brilliant teachers.

If it is that much of a stretch, I thought about dumping the bloodlust thing anyway as it doesn't fit much in this universe. That would leave Margaret in control at all times and her character is supposed to a bit manipulative and crafty. If she were tested before applying to Palladium Academy, she would put on the act of being pleasant and maintain that act throughout her tenure. If you still disapprove, I'll nix the rotted mind in exchange for OG Margaret who is more hardworking, studious, and serious.

As for the zombies, again, an artifact of being a main bad. I kept it for a little flair but not wholly attached to the idea. To explain it a bit better, though, Margaret has to transplant a bit of her brain to a corpse's brain in order to maintain control. Obviously this takes time and preparation as Margaret pretty much has to do brain surgery on herself.

And if Margaret still does not meet approval, I'll forget it and return to working on the student I had planned.
@Pirouette Okay, I gave your sheet a thorough read (I'm a very fast reader), and there's a few things that come to mind. I'm gonna let Savo and Rune tackle some of the other things they brought up, but I have one big problem with her sheet:

To put it simply; it makes little sense for Margaret to be a teacher. Like, personally-wise, she is literally the last option I'd choose for a teaching role. She is described as demented, childish (but also intelligent, but idk), while also having a bloodlust. I just can't buy her as a teacher.


I figured that'd be the snag.

I understand this staff member may be a bit unconventional and maybe not what you have in mind, but I figured the fun will be worth the chance. Also seeing as there are two regenerative types, it makes sense for a bodily power teacher.

@FiroIV
Hi! Quick question. Is there anyway you could give us an idea of what's already been taken as far as Devil fruits go like which cannon DFs have been taken, or what's the ratio between the devil fruit types?


I'm making a chara with a Paramecia type Devil Fruit. OC, though
@PlatinumSkink

Oooh I see
@PlatinumSkink

Darn. I missed a potential update.
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