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@Apollosarcher Yupp. With the new notes, this sheet's all fine. I do imagine that there were political events and meetings and such between the royals of the nations to discuss things and the young princes and princesses may have met during those, I'd mention outside of character sheets. Anyway. Marwood is approved.

@Lmpkio I don't intend on letting people play more than one character, I'm afraid. It is quite similar to letting more people in. As he is, Servus is accepted, but you're free to reconsider if you want to play someone else. That said, all of you will have your classes doubled by NPCs sooner or later.

Edit: Oh, wait. You're mentioning the Storm Guild at a place where I am pretty sure you meant the Sky Guild, considering Aderyn has been mentioned. In the "Nation" part.
@Eisenhorn I'd like to add a little there to my lines on strength. I use both weapon mastery and level to determine strength. I didn't comment as much on Marwood's C-class swords because he's level 4. I didn't comment on Servus' Level 6 because he has D-rank weapon mastery. Voss had both high level and high weapon skill, which made me comment. Yeah. Still acceptable, but I voiced it.

Edit response to last post: Yupp, I understood so about the family. I'll keep it in mind.

Level 5 is more acceptable. Still high, but acceptably high. About as high as I'll allow it, hah. I'm okay with either of the equipment options you provided, I'll let you pick one of them. Yupp, this will do.
Okay. So turns out Eisenhorn was the one remaining friend that could join right now. With Pirouette, Rune_Alchemist, Apollosarcher, Eklispe and Eisenhorn, that's five players...

@Lmpkio@Crimson Raven I decide I'm okay with seven. Come on in. With that, this roleplay is now full.

So, Lmpkio, is Servus as he is the character you'd like to play?
@Eisenhorn Alright. Welcome. Magic prowess could indeed be useful. Let's see what we got.

I will comment that the different colour made it slightly difficult to read. Not so much that I stopped reading, but it was an extra bit of effort.

Curious, to see a family of so dedicated Mages in a nation of Shamans. Can't be too many of them, but yeah, that's acceptable. I will say Voss here is a bit strong for what I imagined the player characters to be at the start of the game. Like, you're only, like, three levels off from the joining levels of those extremely late-game joiners like this. I realize I didn't exactly write my preferred levels of starting characters anywhere, but hah. Luna tome is also a powerful tome to start with, but that said it makes sense that the dark-magic nation would have one to provide for a promising shaman.

So, no problems. He seems interesting. Just me a little concerned he'll completely overshadow others. Look at Pirouette playing official accurate Fire Emblem beginning-Lord with level 1 and E weapon skill. XD Though, yeah, there's Marwood that is roughly the same and three levels behind. Things to consider. Anyways. Voss is accepted.
NOTE: Same as above.
@Lmpkio ... So, to stick with the theme of his childhood being poor I was imagining specifically a petty criminal with only meager success that couldn't properly provide, but apparently this soft-spoken lady is also an ingenious thief who infiltrates the highly guarded mansions of rich people, making off with what I imagine to be tons of gold and has made a name for herself, before returning to her poor and toxic family. I find this hilarious and am okay with this.

Also, no, you won't be calling your griffern -san or -kun, Japanese is not a thing in Magvel or anywhere beyond it. We have the wrong language settings. I am sorry. Also, you're calling yourself Severus at one point.

Other than that, it looks fine. This has been PlatinumSkink's GM-instincts of critiquing character sheets placed before him even if the individual isn't necessarily even cleared to join the roleplay yet. Have a good day.
@Rune_Alchemist Oh, and Wind-magic weakness is only relevant in later games, there isn't actually any wind-magic you need to worry about in this particular Fire Emblem world. But nice to see you've been reading~

@Lmpkio There are "griffons" in at least one game, but it isn't Sacred Stones. We're going with that it's a breed of Wyvern. And yes, please, do change her occupation, if only for my Nintendo-rated comfort. Heh.

@Crimson Raven Alright, I'm happy to see your interest. I'll keep it in mind when I tally the final sum of interested people. We'll see what happens~
@Lmpkio Whelp, good thing I don't need to judge you right now, then, because I'm currently unsure if I want to let you call forth griffins into existence in a world that don't seem to have any. There's no real harm in letting them exist, really, so I could allow it, but, heh. The principles.

Edit: I considered it for a while, and I came to the conclusion that... Sure. Rare breed of Wyvern? Sure. Wyverns are native to Grado, but Jehanna's right alongside them and who's to say they can't travel a bit. Also, there has to be different breeds of Wyverns like there are different breeds of any animal, we're just not keeping track of them. That is totally fine.
What I actually have more problem with is his mother's occupation. Sure, gritty realism and all that, but it's something that would never actually come up in a Fire Emblem game and I kind of want to hold true to that. I'd rather she was a petty criminal or something. Hah.

@Eklispe Ooh. Happy to have you. Heh.
For everyone else's information, Eklispe along with Apollosarcher were players first time I tried this that are still around, and as such get free invites. Also, I like them, and that's a plus.

Edit: And yes, I was making a reference to that exact scene, thank you for noticing. XD
@Pirouette I was about to comment about skirt in a combat-situation, but I can't really do that when the main character of the game I'm basing this all on wears a skirt, now, can I? Combat-skirts, I guess. Yeah. XD

It is most certainly tradition AND Rioga's opinion that his daughter would be trained, heh. And… yeah, I can picture Rioga being the kind that would be fine with his daughter not talking to him for six months because he has a nation to take care of. That said, looks like she’s in for an abrupt awakening.

Yeah. As typical a Lord as one could ever imagine. Certainly acceptable. I’d like you to consider the other characters and imagine what interactions they might have had, while I consider what to do with them. Reina as she is is accepted.

@Rune_Alchemist I’ll note “Halberd” is its own weapon-type among axes, material notwithstanding, but geesh, special weapons need to be made of a material, too! XD

Heh. Formerly bandit mother, huh. I’m amused. But, yupp. Pretty typical Wyvern Rider of Grado with a parent she’s following in the footsteps of, and most certainly potentially trusted enough to be entrusted with guarding the young Lord in a time of crisis, unless you had something else in mind. Anyways. Isolde is accepted. I’d like you to consider what relation you might have to other existing characters at some point and maybe imagine where you’d be at the start of the game. We can take a bit with that, though.

@Apollosarcher Heh, don’t know if they wear clothes like that in the Fire Emblem universe. XD … But yeah, that body-type, but dressed up in a cavalier’s armor and wielding sword or lance, I’ll imagine.

Mmm, yeah. I’ll imagine he puts himself in way more risk than what his mother’s comfortable with or is appropriate in tactics, but he does it for the sake of ensuring the safety of the people. That is most certainly more reckless than her by-the-book tactics would like. And, yeah. With Marwood existing that basically calls Rafaela and Rylan out of “optional character” sections, heh. Unless someone else would like to argue, but yeah.

I’m a little confused by this visit to Jehanna you’re describing. He came there and had tea, but then he had to run seeing their strength? Did Nethanel attack him for talking to Sion for too long and too personally, or what? And yeah, there’s that discussed arranged marriage to Rafaela we came up with, was that already a thing then or did that appear after? I’d like a bit more clarity there. It’s mentioned, but not actually introduced as to how it came to be or anything, heh. Could you do that?

@Lmpkio Why, don’t you seem enthusiastic. Very well, then. Yeah, you’re free to announce your interest, and I’ll keep you in mind when the situation comes to it. Anyone else with such interest reading this is also free to give me a note saying they’re interested. I will note I want to try to avoid doing first-come first-serve, so if I need more I may pick those that simply appear to be the most promising if I get more players than I desire. That said, the friends of my players that they mentioned before have potential first-pick if they wish. This is due to the high number of leavers first time I tried this. Yeah.

Edit: Whelp, interesting timing. XD
@Rune_Alchemist Alright. Nicely posted. Yeah, so, being allowed to train to a certain level may have assumed there's a healing spot nearby, but I'm going to just roll with it because convenient. Trainers are going to take a post to beat, though, so I'm just going to whip some up for you.

@Eklispe Alright, nicely posted. If Amelia is fine with Dawkin taking Tyrunt, then yeah. That'll do nicely. With that over, with Joshua's confirmation we could potentially move on. Heh.
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