Sep

Star Wars - Edge of Rebellion

<Snipped quote by agentmanatee>

She wouldn't tell him who was coming but, she would tell him that more important business came up then a silly parade. Given that it is an ISB agent and they're usually hush hush she would not really tell anyone that didn't need to know. Conversely, since Tucker is a captain she would be leaving him in charge of the perimeter defenses with the other lieutenants to lord over. Remember that only extrenious circumstances will outside guards be allowed into the palace so Vale will expect Tucker to do a bang up job making sure that dosen't happen.

@cqbexpt

So Tucker will have known to the extent of letting the shuttle land and not shooting Loretta, basically @agentmanatee :P

Coruscant Sacked: Aftermath

Tsk. Be nice Sep. Koren can be sarcastic and Nazca can be bitchy, and Khan can have the funny bit.

@Rtron

What is...

I don't have this subroutine.

What is nice?

All-Star Marvel: Audax Mundus Novus - Season 1 (Completed)

@DrewVonAwesome, uhhh. If you're going with a prefix for Fury the one that is usually used is Director, maybe Colonel.

Also I'll have Wilson return and speak to Tony before Fury gets involved as technically he should be the one to do it.

I should get my posts up later, got a day off!

So I can go to college and do maths :/

When I get back from Dumfries I'll get them done.

Star Wars - Edge of Rebellion

Loretta

"He knows nothing a little... pain, won't shake loose. Though I suppose, a lot of pain would be more entertaining. For me."

---

"One minute till touchdown Sir." Loretta straightened her ISB cap and nodded at the Trooper. He wouldn't have dared to address her as Ma'am. She had worked hard for her position, she had earned it. It was her right and she would wear the title until the day she died, which would not be for a very long time. Especially if her excursion to Boonta was successful. Though, her projections as of yet were inconclusive. There were far too many variables to account for and her experiment was not her only objective here. There were others especially when regarding a planet of such significant importance, the fact that when trying to arrange her laboratory that she had only had contact with the Colonel of the Imperial garrison was somewhat suspicious. Though from her digging she had learned that the Governor liked to, over indulge.

That wasn't her concern, if the governor could perform his duty to the Empire then who was she to judge in personal habits. Yes it was the ISBs job to monitor everyone at all times, but only those who could pose a possible threat to the Empire. At either corrupting it or trying to break it. A Governor who liked to overindulge in private certainly wasn't her concern. It was upto the Moffs to ensure the Governors played ball, there were no loyalty officers to deal with high ranking officials. Loyalty was expected, dedication was expected, perfection was non-optional. She wouldn't touch him but if his habits endangered her objective, things would need to change. Suddenly, and it would not end well for the poor Governor that was for certain.

The ship shook slightly as the repulsors cut off letting the landing gear take the load of the ship. Moving to the rear of the ship she waited with her hands clasped behind her back as the door opened. There was a hiss of air as the humidity and heat of the planet rushed to assault her senses. She was somewhat jealous of the fully body armour worn by Stormtroopers, fully air conditioned and regulated. Not that she would ever show her discomfort. She walked down the ramp and cast her gaze off in the horizon as she heard the applause, and the sound of the AT-ATs. Obviously the Governor put on a good show, though she rolled her eyes at the sight of AT-ATs. Such wasteful machines, they were strong. They were intimidating, and yet... they were massive targets. Far less efficient than their predecessors.

She'd show them that. The hum of her ship grew as her shuttle took off again, turning on her heel she watched as it departed as another shuttlecraft came into range. No doubt the Governor. As it flew overhead to enter the landing pattern a gust of air buffeted her, a lesser officer would have almost lost their hat. She was no lesser officer as she stood her ground, she had no time for this dilly dally or this party. She would meet the Governor, and find our where her lab was.

That was the end of story.

---

Rael

"What the Empire doesn't realize, is it's built on a foundation of lies, pain and death. When this comes to light, when people accept. They will rise up, and shake it down from below and then we have a Galaxy truly worthy of life."

---

"Long live order, long live the Emperor, long live this great Empire!" Rael rolled his eyes as music, applause and the words from one of the largest humans he had ever seen (And it wasn't muscle that made him so large) assaulted his ears. He had to admit he was pretty stood back and appreciated the size of the AT-ATs. They were truly vehicles to marvel, their raw power and strength was just so... He'd swoon if only for the thought that he knew without a second of hesitation they'd fire on him if they knew who he was, what he had done and... yes. What he was about to do.

He began moving through the crowd, he could easily part it with his four arms though instead decided to just move with the flow of the crowd. So far in one direction before turning and letting it carry him in another direction. Like floating in a stream and letting it chose a path for him. Though he knew his destination, he just didn't want to stand out. Today was one of the few national holidays throughout the Empire and of course everyone was just... living. It was ironic really. People got to be as free as possible on the anniversary of the Empires formation.

That was something he wouldn't let them get away with.

Star Wars - Edge of Rebellion

Thats fine.

@End Here

I am sorry if I seem harsh, it's just due to the nature of a Jedi in this kind of RP I'm being very picky. I'd be hesitant to take the role up myself.

Star Wars - Edge of Rebellion

Name: Caalgen
Age: 36
Species: Human
Appearance: Caalgan isn’t overly tall, he stands at 5’10 and weighs around 175 pounds. He has black hair with streaks gray peppered throughout. His hair is kept long and unruly, he's often seen with a beard. He has dark brown eyes, and usually wears gray jedi robes. At a glance he looks like he’s homeless and has been living on the streets.
Abilities/Skills:

• Lightsaber: An excellent wielder of the single lightsaber
• Pilot: Can pilot fighters on an adept level.
• Force: Weak in the control of the force. Comparable to that of an average padawan.

Equipment:

• Green lightsaber
• WESTAR-34 blaster pistol
• Communicator

Personality/Motivation: Caalgen is a broken man, who constantly lives on the run. He views himself as prideless and weak. He often only stays on a planet for a week at most two. He seeks to join the Rebellion so that he can regain some of his honor and atone for past mistakes.

Biography:
Caalgen was first picked up by the jedi order when he was just eight. He trained under Jedi Knight Qutoro,where he learned the basics of force use and lightsaber combat. Qutoro was a difficult teacher often pushing Caalgen way past his limits. While accompanying Qutoro on a mission
he had suffered a serious injury. Qutoro was verbally reprimanded by the jedi council. After the reprimand Qutoro began to interact with Caalgan less and less. Qutoro’s actions stunted Caalgan’s ability to wield the force. Even at a young age he knew that it would hinder his chances of becoming a knight. He often sought out other Jedi for training, but couldn’t find any of the help he needed or was punished by his master for doing so. Qutoro grew to hate Caalgen, and often saw him as a nuisance. Due to the lack of training in the ways of the force he practiced his saber techniques to make up for his weakness.

He often found help from Sora Bulq when ever he had time to teach him about the lightsaber. Later Qutoro was removed as his master and exiled for other more dubios activities and he then studied under Jedi Knight Tihiln. Tihiln attempted to retrain Caalgen but by this time, he had become “stuck” in his ways. Often Tihiln threatened to have him become a chronicler. They often fought with each other, causing Caalgen’s training to suffer more. He fought in the clone wars, and had fought in battles on many occasions. The council refused to see any of his feats worthy of the moniker jedi knight, insisting that his lack of ability in the force would stunt him as a jedi. This blow to his ego was devastating. He was often envious of other padawans, because of their bond with their masters and the rate at which they made knight. The Jedi council was on the fence with Caalgen in the end getting ready to exile him from the order. He began to beg and pleaded to just be allowed to take the trail just once. At this time he was twenty eight one of the oldest padawans. The masters debated for sometime, and eventually agreed to allow him to go to the trials.

The Trials took him three times as long as most other padawans, but he had successfully completed them. He was knighted and soon sent on his first mission, to help eliminate any pockets of separatist resistance. . Order 66 was given before he could start his mission, his troopers fired upon him wounding him severely. He managed to force leap and escape into a river below. He stowed onto a civilian frigate and escaped. He fled the system and now lives traveling in the outer rim. Constantly being hounded by imperials he lives his life a broken man. Many times he left those in need, to save his own life. He became a Jedi only in name. He often does favors for people in exchange for food or passage to another planet.

Secrets: Caalgen sees himself as a coward due fleeing the jedi order, and leaving friends and family to die. He’s watched as countless civilians were killed trying to flush him out. Every time he closes his eyes, he can see each of their faces. Every day that drags on it wears his soul down a little.

Relations:
N/A

@End Here

1) Jedi were most often younger than eight when picked up by the Jedi Order.
2) Incorrect, Younglings were only trained in one on one scenarios in exceptional circumstances such as a Jedi Knight finding a Force Sensitive child on a planet where they were unable to leave.
3) Younglings do not leave the temple to go on missions, other than the Gathering, until they are older and have passed the Initiate Trials to become a fully fledged Padawan learner.
4) If this was one on one training, how could he have been trained with little interaction? Contradiction.
5) How did this halt his progress, or damage it?
6) Why was he punished for looking for help? Why did he need to seek out Jedi? The temple is full of Jedi all of whom are willing to help Padawans and Younglings.
7) Qutoro would not hate, he was a Jedi Knight who had not fallen to the Dark Side.
8) Only one Jedi Knight could help him?
9) So, is he a padawan by the time Quotoro is removed?
10) Jedi making threats to other Jed?
11) Jedi fighting within another, master against apprentice.

I am stopping here. I am sorry to be so blunt, but it's kinda who I am but this sheet is not getting accepted and any potential Jedi I am giving one shot, and that was said shot. Which is why in the PM I asked if you were ready for review. You seem to not fully understand what it is to be a Jedi or their inner workings either that or you want to make a unique character which is kind of pointless when in this RP he truly is unique.

You are more than welcome to apply for another role.

All-Star Marvel: Audax Mundus Novus - Season 1 (Completed)

<Snipped quote by Sep>

I dont know he hasnt said anything to me about it.

If he wants to give Wolvy a break then fine. I can pick up Jean later.

@Angel Vicky

If I'm not too busy I'll try to get a Hyperion post up for you @Sep. I might bench Wolverine for a little bit, considering I've finished his first arc. It wasn't all I had hoped for but I enjoy the direction his story has taken.

@FacePunch

Coruscant Sacked: Aftermath

<Snipped quote by Sep>

Ooh? And since when do you own humour™?

@Zoldyck

Since forever.

Star Wars - Jedi Exile - Knights of the Last Republic

Hello!

I'll have more time to write today, certainly. :3 You'll see something from me by this afternoon. I am, however, in GMT-6, so that's likely going to be the evening for...at least a significant part of the cast at the moment!

@Naril

That's fine.

I'm just fidgety, always am at this part of the temple escape.

Also something I also want you all to think about, you can PM me or I'll ask you all at a later date. What do you feel, is your characters major weakness (In terms of personality)? Impatient, headstrong, fearful etc.

Star Wars - Jedi Exile - Knights of the Last Republic

Fix'd

@MachineSoul

Thankee sir.

Have a thanks.