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Or, I can't remember from the sheet but if that's the route went just have Lois be already older. Or some McBluffin that Kryptonians mature faster when exposed to element plot.

On an unrelated note I'd like to announce my interest in another character before posting a sheet:



Holy hell. That's like the first character I thought of. lol. Wraith can attest to that. Asked him bout a connection.
@Taka I will say, if you're having trouble with a second character, maybe immediately jumping into a second character isn't the best idea. I have several idea's for a second character (At this point, i think Red Tornado is probably going to be my second, most likely because i don't think anyone else has any idea's for her) but I think it's best to get a few posts in before actually seriously attempting to take on a second. I find that, after a number of posts and once you have the idea of how the character thinks, feels and reacts, eventually, interactions just write themselves.

I just think you'll have an easier time of it by getting the ball rolling on one, then using that inertia to get the second one going, rather than trying to launch 2 at the same time. Who knows, in getting Ghost Rider moving, you may find a story that actually fits a lot better.


Its not that I can't write for two characters. I have before. Its that I couldn't create logical pathways for the ideas I wanted with Black Panther. Trying to create stories that fit the mold like Static Shock, Luke Cage, and to an extent the X-Men is a feat smarter than I. Lol. Before presenting something lackluster, I chose to just bow out of the character for someone else to give it a run. With Winter Soldier, I have ideas and I know how I want to do them. I think I have better basis than with T'Challa. I will be taking my time with Winter Soldier before I publish him. Definitely won't be this weekend.
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No apologies necessary, I’ve done the same before! Feel free to submit another application for Winter Soldier when you’ve got a solid foundation for it.


Thank you. I will work on ideas in the meantime.
@Bounce @Half Pint My apologies but, I think I'm going to drop Black Panther. I just realize that I don't have anything long term to present for him. I had ideas but, I can't fully flesh them out and I'm not comfortable attempting to run T'Challa without putting my best foot forward. Though I have spoken to Hound about making a sheet for the Winter Soldier. Bucky is my favorite character in comics period and I have so many ideas that I can present for him. He's been a character I've always wanted to play for one of these games. I'd feel comfortable playing Bucky and can bring my A game.
@mickilennial@Lord Wraith my apologies. Ill edit it once im home.

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Yeah, purple is a bit hard to read, but I'm honestly used to it. Besides that I liked your first post @Taka and the contract between Ralph and Robbie with the later prioritizing others over revenge. Shows his inner strength and why he's the one behind the wheel.


Thank you. I hope conveyed that Ralph is definitely struggling. He has majority control over them as the rider but Robbie is the heart. Im excited to eventually show the other riders and what their bonds look like.
Glad to finally post. Tad bit nervous on the quality. I do not mind any constructive criticism. Thank you in advance.

SPIRIT OF VENGEANCE #1




Location: New York City/Brooklyn



"Robbie, are you sure this is the right choice?"

"You ask this after we drove across country, ese?"

The sound of the 1969 Charger roared throughout the streets of Brooklyn, sheer power from the engine turning quite a few heads. A classic like the 1969 Charger was rare, and Robbie would normally soak in the attention, playing up for the crowd. His car was one of the crowning achievements and yet for once he wasn't focused on the people around him, his mind occupied with sheer anxiety.

"Try breathing. Inhala. Exhala."

"Ralph, I know how to breath. I like you Ralph but, I wish you weren't in my head all the time."

The Charger pulled into a parking lot connected to Brooklyn Bridge Park, its namesake sitting stunningly within the water, overlooking the park for all to stand at awe at. Robbie had never seen it before, a sight that drew his awe despite the reasoning for why he was here. He only wished he could be visiting under better terms, but for now he needed to focus on the situation at hand. Parking and stepping out of the Charger, he could hear Ralph rambling in his head, having to tone out the man to even hear his own thoughts. Every step into the park was heavy, the laughter of children playing, and adults talking echoed through his ears before his eyes finally connected with those of the man who brought him here....Eli Morrow.

"ELI!", Ralph screamed from inside Robbie's head, turning the boy's black, the temperature of his body beginning to rise, taking every bit of Robbie's control to keep Ralph from turning them into the Rider.

"Stop, Ralph. There are kids here."

Eli's gave his nephew a grin that exuded malice, his own eyes giving way the same blackness that permeated Robbie's own eyes.

"Oh little Roberto, its so nice that you came."

"Tío, why?" Robbie's voice broke as he asked, as he loved Eli as a kid, having a bond that seemed so easily broken by his uncle, but now he could see so malevolent behind those eyes, and feel what he felt in himself when he first became a Rider.

"Roberto, I needed to see you. I heard so much about the rider in Los Angelos but, you know what really caught my eye? The charger. A one of a kind. Did you know that I'm the one who convinced your father to add those rims? Oh my brother was so stupid."

"What do you mean 'was'? What is going on?"

"Oh my poor little Robbie, you missing your parents? My my where is Gabe? Are his legs still garbage?" Eli let out a maniacal laugh as he spoke about Gabe.

Robbie's face would scrunch up into a scowl and his words would burst from his lips in rage, "DON'T MENTION HIS NAME, BASTARD!"

"Or what? You'll punish me for my sins?"

"How do you know abou--"

"Because boy, I am like you. You can tell. And that's why I called you here. I wanted to see just how badly you wanted to see me. How badly you wanted the answers that you would travel all this way and leave your baby brother behind. See my little nephew, I'm going to do terrible things and I want you to know it was me. I want every waking moment to be agony for you because you'll know that you could've stopped me."

Robbie and Ralph both were in awe of everything that Eli spoke upon, and yet they knew he was right. With Eli being a rider, if he was not lying, would mean a fight that would endanger everyone in the general area. Two riders locking in combat would spell doom for the general vicinity, and Robbie could not take that chance no matter how much Ralph wanted to tear Eli apart. Every muscle tense, blood vessels ready to burst, and steam pouring from the pores on his face.

Screams erupted from the civilians within the park, pointing and gasping at the sight lurching from the East River, fire trolls ascending from the water. In a matter of moments fire were raging across the borough, the trolls attacking anything and everything in sight.

"Well champ. Aren't you gonna help these people?"

"Robbie, we punish Eli NOW!"

"Please Ralph. We do this to protect people and right now people need our help. You're a hero, remember?"

Robbie gave a glance to Eli, his twisted smile making his stomach churn, but now was not the time. They'd find him again, his sin acting as a beacon, and crimes that will weight heavy on both souls of the rider. He hated it despite knowing that right now saving people from the fire trolls was the immediate danger and he needed Ralph to feel the same way.

"Let's ride."

Robbie turned from Eli, dashing straight for the charger, his body beginning under go the process of becoming a rider. The skin on Robbie's face began to melt away, giving way to the skeleton underneath, flames bursting forth, and his mouth opened wide to let a demonic roar that filled the park. The moment he touched the charger, flames engulfed it from bumper to bumper, the wheels covered in flames and as he jumped into the rev the engine, flames erupted from the engine.

He pulled from the lot, the engine screaming, racing through the street to the first fire troll he could see. The troll was attempting to burn a building filled with people, and Robbie acted quickly. The Hell Charger drifted around the debris, chains covered in hellfire shooting forth from the vehicle and wrapping around the troll's head. Revving the engine, he used the supernatural horsepower to give the needed force to pull the creature to ground, slamming its head and crackling the earth underneath. The hellfire continued to burn upon the troll, giving the beast a level of discomfort and pain but, it did not completely stop its rampage. The troll would now be facing punishment at hands of the Ghost Rider.
So next time make King T'Chaka and have a 50 year old Black Panther running around.


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Finally done with my Robin sheet. If I get approved I'm hoping to eventually start the Teen Titans with his character if anyone wants to start making members. Marvel characters included.



FUCCKKKK!! If I didn't have Black Panther or Robbie, Id make a teen iron man for the team. We will have a big ass T for a house.
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