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STATUS: I think watching fight scenes can help in general terms with writing combat, since it can give you an idea of flow and choreography. 3 yrs ago
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I think watching fight scenes can help in general terms with writing combat, since it can give you an idea of flow and choreography.
3 yrs ago
At least if you're writing something you know, with knights.
3 yrs ago
I mean, depends on what you're writing, and the tone and theme of what you're writing. Trained armored knights were legitimately monstrous on the battlefield, so looking up how they fought helps.
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As much as there's a lot of reasons twitter sucks, I genuinely don't want to see it die for the sake of all the artists who now rely on it. Hoping the shithead stops trying to directly administrate.
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roleplayerguild.com/posts/5… If anyone's up for fighting some kaiju, why not try out my new RP, Godzilla: YATAGARUSU?
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By the way, the plan is to start this coming week!
"... Hmph, Archetype or whatever they are, it's creepy and wrong," Hikari concluded, arms folded firmly across her chest as she spoke. If it was another magical girl using their Archetype to spy, wasn't that really creepy? What Archetype would even be a creepy person in a bunny mask? Weren't they all supposed to be from mythology and history or something? Tokiko had mentioned it could also be something that inspired human imagination, or something like that, but Hikari couldn't think of anything that would be a creepy person in a bunny mask. If she'd seen someone like that spying on her last night, she wouldn't have hesitated to take her hammer right to them!
"I might be new, but a magical girl is a magical girl," asserted Hikari, with a firm nod, "There's no way I'd just let someone creepy like that run around, even if they are a magical girl's Archetype. That just makes the magical girl creepy too!"
@LuckyBlackCat
"I might be new, but a magical girl is a magical girl," asserted Hikari, with a firm nod, "There's no way I'd just let someone creepy like that run around, even if they are a magical girl's Archetype. That just makes the magical girl creepy too!"
@LuckyBlackCat
For a few moments, Youmu was a little mind-boggled by the information she had received. She'd never heard of anything called the Time and Space Administration Bureau. It certainly sounded impressive, but beyond that the half-phantom samurai gardener hadn't the faintest clue just what it actually could be. Well, it sounded like it was some kind of official organization related to law enforcement, but time and space? That sounded like the domain of a certain antagonistic maid more than anything. Still, it gave Youmu the information she needed to know. Not only was Takamachi Nanoha not native here, but she certainly didn't seem to be a native of Gensokyo either. Had she come from the outside world? Did such things as the 'Time and Space Administration Bureau' exist there?
For the moment, Nanoha was the only person she had met so far in this desolate landscape, so there was no reason not to answer her questions. She seemed like a polite and friendly girl, and so Youmu was going to answer in kind.
"It's strange, really, Takamachi-san," she began, "A new door just appeared in the kitchen, out of no-where. I couldn't figure out if it was the doing of a youkai or a mage or anything like that, so I told my Mistress that I was going to investigate it. After I went through the door, I was here. The door back to Hakugyokurou still exists, too..."
Youmu paused for a moment. Presumably, there was nothing preventing her from returning to Hakugyokurou, and to Yuyuko's side, but...
"For Yuyuko-sama's sake, I have to figure out just what's going on here!"
As she spoke, her phantom half drifted about behind her, becoming more animated in reflection of the silver-haired girl's determined declaration.
@KoL
For the moment, Nanoha was the only person she had met so far in this desolate landscape, so there was no reason not to answer her questions. She seemed like a polite and friendly girl, and so Youmu was going to answer in kind.
"It's strange, really, Takamachi-san," she began, "A new door just appeared in the kitchen, out of no-where. I couldn't figure out if it was the doing of a youkai or a mage or anything like that, so I told my Mistress that I was going to investigate it. After I went through the door, I was here. The door back to Hakugyokurou still exists, too..."
Youmu paused for a moment. Presumably, there was nothing preventing her from returning to Hakugyokurou, and to Yuyuko's side, but...
"For Yuyuko-sama's sake, I have to figure out just what's going on here!"
As she spoke, her phantom half drifted about behind her, becoming more animated in reflection of the silver-haired girl's determined declaration.
@KoL
For a considerable amount of time, Youmu wandered without seeing much of anything. There were buildings, some with unusual advertisements on them in the same vein as the one displaying Yuyuko-sama, herself, and Hakugyokurou. She didn't recognize any of them(though one looked strangely familiar, not that Youmu could place it off the top of her head). Thus far, her bid to discover just what was happening was going poorly. Why exactly was there some strange ruined city suddenly linked to the kitchen?
The diminutive silver-haired girl sighed heavily, her shoulders sagging. This had to be some sort of incident, but she didn't know of any youkai with an ability like this. There was a youkai who could make doors, that evil hermit who could create holes... but linking it to some place like this? That was nothing she had ever heard of before. It was unusual. No... it was completely ridiculous! Why was this happening!? It was total nonsense!
"Aaah, this doesn't make any sense!" complained Youmu, placing one hand to her head as she did. Regardless of all of this, there was one move that made sense above anything else.
She could send her phantom into the air as a scout, while she explored the ground. Surely, the samurai gardener could find something like that, right?!
Just as she was about to do so, however, she caught sight of a figure in the air. There was pink light drifting off of her heels, and she appeared to be holding some kind of staff... Almost immediately, Youmu lifted into the air herself!
She ascended with great speed, clearing the distance between herself and the figure almost immediately. When she arrived, it was clear that the figure appeared to be a child. Youmu had seen plenty of people who appeared to be children but were far older. To put it simply, appearance hardly indicated age.
"Hello?" she began, "My name is Konpaku Youmu, do you perhaps live in this... strange place?"
@KoL
The diminutive silver-haired girl sighed heavily, her shoulders sagging. This had to be some sort of incident, but she didn't know of any youkai with an ability like this. There was a youkai who could make doors, that evil hermit who could create holes... but linking it to some place like this? That was nothing she had ever heard of before. It was unusual. No... it was completely ridiculous! Why was this happening!? It was total nonsense!
"Aaah, this doesn't make any sense!" complained Youmu, placing one hand to her head as she did. Regardless of all of this, there was one move that made sense above anything else.
She could send her phantom into the air as a scout, while she explored the ground. Surely, the samurai gardener could find something like that, right?!
Just as she was about to do so, however, she caught sight of a figure in the air. There was pink light drifting off of her heels, and she appeared to be holding some kind of staff... Almost immediately, Youmu lifted into the air herself!
She ascended with great speed, clearing the distance between herself and the figure almost immediately. When she arrived, it was clear that the figure appeared to be a child. Youmu had seen plenty of people who appeared to be children but were far older. To put it simply, appearance hardly indicated age.
"Hello?" she began, "My name is Konpaku Youmu, do you perhaps live in this... strange place?"
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@UndeadSpartan: Looks mostly good, but I'd like a little more detail when it comes to her abilities.
@TheFake: Accepted.
@Phonic: Not yet, at least.
@Raineh Daze: Since we discussed this ahead of time, accepted.
@OliveYou: Rabbit youkai are perfectly useable!
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