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The opening post, at the bottom. Or using the raw sheet of anyone else's and deleting their stuff.
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The opening post, at the bottom. Or using the raw sheet of anyone else's and deleting their stuff.

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Next sequence of reviews will be due sometime this morning or later on in the night.

Edit: Discussing the characters with Piro and Dru now.
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@Savo @liferusher @TBKrunk

I am privy to accept these three characters, but there is some concerns I have that I’d like to be amended or addressed.

For Kunze Adrianne, I don’t really think the American gaijin origin is central to the character and I feel like them being a Japanese native would be a revision that is much needed. I don’t mind the personality, quirk (even though we did and might need to talk about it more at length), and general conceptualization. Basically pick Germany or Japan and solidify why they chose Ishin Academy above all other German, International, and Japanese hero schools to apply to. Once this is done you may drop them in the characters tab.

For Kishimoto Rin I like it well enough even though I think the quirk development will be challenging, my only issue is the part where The illegal vigilante trains Rin and directs her toward his cum laude, Ishin Academy. If they are a vigilante it is likely they were expelled from the academy and I find it unlikely they would suggest such an institution in such a case; alternatively, if they are a graduate they would likely not be a vigilante but rather a pro-hero which contradicts this concept. I think this instance is a little messy and contrived personally and some clarity and/or revisions seem to be necessary here for it to move into acceptance territory. To sum it up, explain to me about this one-note backstory character and their motives. When this is done and reviewed I doubt I will have any issues about accepting them.

For Ishida Mizuki the only issues I have are speculating why the IA review board would think they are a good fit for the pro-hero course. But that's something we can discuss. You may move them over to the characters tab at your own leisure.

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Alright then, I'll try to have a rework of their backstory, possibly where they lived, as well as minor abilities outside of their quirk reworked over the next few days.

Considering the little idea of picking either Germany or Japan, this could make things bit interesting. A foreigner to a large portion of her family and country, or forced to attend Ishin with little to no choice in the matter by her mother's side of the family? Hmm, hmm...
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We'll be delegating on the last two shortly and planning out the opening posts soon-ish™.
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Hi peeps!



Edit: And I just noticed the Full tag. Damnit. Well, I'll just leave it here as proof of effort...
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I'll put you on the short list if anyone drops out, my dude.
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For everyone else, I should be getting the first IC post up in the next few days. I understand waiting 1-2 weeks is kind of shit, but I appreciate anyone who has the patience to stick with me and their characters by extension.
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Despite my neck issues, I should be able to move us along shortly. I'll keep everyone posted.
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Heh, took you a while, didn't it :P
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Heh, took you a while, didn't it :P

You try posting with sharp neck pains and adult responsibilities.
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I'm a lot better and trying to power through my backload. I need everyone in this RP to give me a head's up if they're still with me.
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So, not only am I still in it to win it all the way to Flavor Town (only cool kids get the reference), I have cemented my still-invested interest with a post~
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Sorry for the month of hectic inactivity, but I need a headcount. I believe some schedules should be clearing up.
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Still here. Technically due for a post, but I just kept putting it off.
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Ah, sure. I'm still up for it even though I haven't posted in a real long while.
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