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@TheFake You think? I personally thought it’s troubled development cycle bled through too clearly in the story. Still enjoyed it and found the game a return to form, but it felt way too raw off the cutting board for me, as well as five missions or so too short.
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Has anyone signed up for the Mongolia team yet? If there is still room I'm nominating Paul
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@AwesomeZero5: I think that, aside from that paragraph re: human experimentation, the form is solid. If you snipped that out I think you'd ge in good shape for acceptance.
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May I ask, what's wrong with the human experimentation bit then? Since it virtually accomplished nothing and anything supernatural is hearsay therein?
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Feedback is appreciated. I hope it's decent.

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MONGOLIA B O I S

LET'S GO INVADE IT AND GET REVENGE FOR MULAN
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Invade Russia for the Mongols, let's see how sword fighting on motorcycles goes XD
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Something tells me that having the cyborg and the robot on the same team would probably make sense, whatever team that ends up being.

And yeah, I'm not against pairing up with Albrecht. You needed someone who it doesn't violate every ethical guideline to use for testing, Charlotte wanted to be able to go exploring in the rifts again... everybody wins!
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@AwesomeZero5: Sorry for taking so long; exhaustion finally caught up to me when I saw the question, so I couldn't respond yet.

Alright, so, basically, the character functions super well even without human experimentation to the point where I feel like you could push forward without it. Most of the form feels like something you could kinda see happening in a film, but that one bit feels... Well, tacked on? The fact that it really did nothing AND that he has enough emotional baggage as it is (which works well in establishing goals/motivations) makes me feel as if you could streamline the character a bit better without needed to resort to that.

Because seriously, I really do want to see how this character pans out otherwise.

(Also because dealing with more things that break the Geneva Convention, uh... Well, yeah, I dunno what else to say.)

You're free to debate me on this, though. I'm fairly open to letting it slide IF you can convince me.

Followup: can you give me a justification for the whole "He has to fight or put himself in dangerous situations since he can’t adjust to being without it." thing? Like, I get that he can't adjust to a civilian lifestyle, yes, but is there further justification for such a mindset?

Anyways...

@Anonawrimo: Accepted.
I might send Daichi off to LA because I'm not sure how well he fits (tonally) with the others.

Speaking of whom: last group, location. Gimme.
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I lied. Here's my real character.

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@TheWindel: Accepted (Again). Replace what you have thus and I'll edit accordingly.
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That's a flashy character sheet. I'm shocked at how well put together it is. It's really sparked my creativity, and made the air electric. I feel bad for being mostly static in this OOC.

Uh.

Pun.
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That's a flashy character sheet. I'm shocked at how well put together it is. It's really sparked my creativity, and made the air electric. I feel bad for being mostly static in this OOC.

Uh.

Pun.


I regret everything now.
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I was going to make some more puns about existing characters, but I seem to be in a sticky situation.
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>_>

Anyways, for the sake of speed, Discord server. Join at your own convenience; I'll still respond to things here if questions are asked, but this can be comparatively faster?
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Hmm

You got room for another here? Got some ideas for a character.
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Yeah, we have...
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Some room. Need to fill out squad 3 anyhow.
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Great, then

I'll see about gettin' something up tonight.
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I'm interested in this premise. Here is my submission.


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