Hidden 4 yrs ago 4 yrs ago Post by Sosuke
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PS: I'm making two servants, due to the first having 'unified language' and that can be polarizing if used unfairly. I've tried to give it enough wiggle room to be fair but I have provided a backup Servant just in case. I still would prefer to play the first, but understand.





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@Indra
I believe that Nobu might be a good fit for my Master idea. We can pair up if you want.
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Sure, once I get home.

Let's partner up then, the moment I read anti.magic.
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Well, i did kinda call Archer way back in the interest check, and noted i was making one, but i suppose this is how it is now. Alas.

We do have too many people here to split among 7 servants, however, so someone is going to be cut out in the end i think? Did we have someone join out of the blue, perhaps, that imbalanced the numbers? Trying to figure things out before i head to work in about an hour, because at work i won't be around to finish any apps today unfortunately. (@_@)
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If somebody else wants the Caster spot, I am always willing to give it up. Considering this RP is rather overfull at the moment.
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I won't be making a Master, as to allow more people access to this RP.

Also, are we going to be making a Discord for quick communication?
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@Parallel Hearts I mean, sure? Like if a servant ran in and stabbed one, that's like an obvious win for a servant. If they ran into a room where fifty of them are running about and had time to prep, that might be another thing altogether. They're a strengths in numbers kinda thing.

A C rank familiar cannot beat a servant in 1v1, but 1v50? Sure.


Well, if that's the case he's ok.

Well, i did kinda call Archer way back in the interest check, and noted i was making one, but i suppose this is how it is now. Alas.

We do have too many people here to split among 7 servants, however, so someone is going to be cut out in the end i think? Did we have someone join out of the blue, perhaps, that imbalanced the numbers? Trying to figure things out before i head to work in about an hour, because at work i won't be around to finish any apps today unfortunately. (@_@)


Apologies for that, but I really couldn't come to a better solution to deal with the number of players. Especially since calls on the Interest Check don't exactly equate to actual characters in the RP.

However, there are still possible positions, I guess.

I hope you can understand where I'm coming from. Furthermore, as said on the 1st post, you all will have the chance of swapping characters eventually.

I won't be making a Master, as to allow more people access to this RP.

Also, are we going to be making a Discord for quick communication?


I don't intend to do a Discord for this story, since I'm not particularly good with that and I prefer to make any important announcements here anywhere, where they'll logged and easily accessible.

Anyway, regarding your characters:

I cannot accept that 1st one for some reasons, other than just the Unified Language. That in itself wouldn't be a problem but other things, especially the Parameter stealing in his 1st skill are concerning. The extra damage against Kings is no problem, but stealing Parameters, especially END, with a single non-Noble Phantasm attack is.

For the second idea, she's pretty much ok, with a few points needing attention.

1st - Her 1st Noble Phantasm should work like all similar ones in canon and be deactivated when she needs to use her second one. You can summon the mount without giving away her identity, but when she uses the charge attack (which requires calling the Noble Phantasm's name), her identity must be given away like any other Servant using a Noble Phantasm.

2nd - Make it so that she and her mount lose much of the benefits of that Presence Concealment-like effect when they prepare to attack, not when they are about to hit with an attack so that it's in line with all other canon stealth effects.
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I don't intend to do a Discord for this story, since I'm not particularly good with that and I prefer to make any important announcements here anywhere, where they'll logged and easily accessible.

Anyway, regarding your characters:

I cannot accept that 1st one for some reasons, other than just the Unified Language. That in itself wouldn't be a problem but other things, especially the Parameter stealing in his 1st skill are concerning. The extra damage against Kings is no problem, but stealing Parameters, especially END, with a single non-Noble Phantasm attack is.

For the second idea, she's pretty much ok, with a few points needing attention.

1st - Her 1st Noble Phantasm should work like all similar ones in canon and be deactivated when she needs to use her second one. You can summon the mount without giving away her identity, but when she uses the charge attack (which requires calling the Noble Phantasm's name), her identity must be given away like any other Servant using a Noble Phantasm.

2nd - Make it so that she and her mount lose much of the benefits of that Presence Concealment-like effect when they prepare to attack, not when they are about to hit with an attack so that it's in line with all other canon stealth effects.


I'm surprised... If possible I can convert 'stolen parameters' to 'stolen magical energy', a very minor amount. As Od is the currency which the Master's wage war. I'd be willing to discuss if that was the only critique about the sheet.

As for Hatshepsut, there are only a handful of Female Pharaoh, so that is a big clue. I'd rather her disguise only burn away when using the charge attack for sake of fairness. As for the 'presence concealment', it does drop when the beast attacks... It can only be cloaked when out of combat or not moving to attack, that's my intention.
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My Lancer was almost complete too. Thanks college for holding me back :')
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Apologies for that, but I really couldn't come to a better solution to deal with the number of players. Especially since calls on the Interest Check don't exactly equate to actual characters in the RP.

However, there are still possible positions, I guess.

I hope you can understand where I'm coming from. Furthermore, as said on the 1st post, you all will have the chance of swapping characters eventually.


Eh, it can happen with RPs sometimes. So no worries, a solution is a solution! And yeah, dibs in the int check don't always equate to characters either in a general sense. XD

Though the swapping thing is indeed a very interesting option, and i believe i get where you are coming from!

But after some thought and consideration, after finally getting home from work tonight and taking a hot shower, i believe i will formally withdraw from this RP. I am not rather interested in just making a servant or just making a master myself. Not that a potential future swap couldn't happen later, as that is itself a very viable option as you noted. Yet with this place being at over-capacity, and not wanting to add to the stress or duress of bloated numbers when swapping time comes around, i admittedly feel it would be good to step back to give this place some space and room. ^^;

Best of fortunes to your RP, however, Parallel! Perhaps if you make another Fate RP later on, i can get on board and get something out faster! :P
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I'd wait for the sixth character place cuz Nobbu
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I wish this had come a week or two later, I would have more time for it. :(

I'm in the heart of exam season right now, so I wish everyone here the best.
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I'm surprised... If possible I can convert 'stolen parameters' to 'stolen magical energy', a very minor amount. As Od is the currency which the Master's wage war. I'd be willing to discuss if that was the only critique about the sheet.

As for Hatshepsut, there are only a handful of Female Pharaoh, so that is a big clue. I'd rather her disguise only burn away when using the charge attack for sake of fairness. As for the 'presence concealment', it does drop when the beast attacks... It can only be cloaked when out of combat or not moving to attack, that's my intention.


I could elaborate more on the reasons, why I prefer the 2nd idea over the second. But, on a second look, that Unified Language ability is most certainly going to cause disputes in the RP.

All of the other Servants applied so far would fall on the category of Early AD to Contemporary (except maybe Arthur and Altera since they are from the 5th Century) making them be affected endlessly by this ability. Which wouldn't be interesting to anyone, to say the least.

I'd prefer if you don't use the whole idea at all.

Regarding the second point, gender is not a reliable indicator of anyone's True Name in Fate. Also, you said the same thing as I; revealing her True Name when she calls her Noble Phantasm's name for the charge attack, so I guess there's no problem there.

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On second look through the roster, I think I am going to back out of this. If only there's only top tier servants and not a lot of... Innovation or new area that hasn't been tread already. The Rider slot can be given to someone else.
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Gonna drop this too. It seems unfair that slots were all just taken out of the blue when a lot of us in the original IC were working on sheets. I feel like the way slots were distributed made things a bit unfair, especially considering that now less than half of everyone from the original IC has had to drop due to their expressed slot being filled.

I get that this is an irregular war with slots opening up here and there, but "first come, first serve" only really works if there's multiple slots of the same class to begin with.
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Welp, seems like this one won't go anywhere at all.

It's sad to say, but there goes my chance to play with Arthur.
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On second look through the roster, I think I am going to back out of this. If only there's only top tier servants and not a lot of... Innovation or new area that hasn't been tread already. The Rider slot can be given to someone else.


Naturally, You are free to go however, and whenever, you like. However, you could have been a little more tactful when taking your leave.

Pointing your finger on others and saying that you are leaving because you don't like their choices is kind of rude when everyone else treated you with respect.

Anyway, thank you for your time.

I hope to see you again sometime.
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Putting that aside, it's clear that I didn't manage this as well as I thought I did, or as I should have.

I apologize to everyone that got disappointed by it.

That said, I'm still willing to continue this. I just don't think it's a very likely possibility at this point.

Anyone who still has interest in the story, just give me your thoughts, and we'll see what can be done.

Thanks again, anyway.
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I wouldn't mind joining, not sure which slots are able to be taken for servants, like i know rider is available if they were serious about leaving the roleplay, and assassin may be open (which i could either attempt to be katou danzo) or i'd make a master since i saw alot of servants posted and not too many masters (i could have missed em, i saw one or 2 but i was mainly going to see the end of the chat to see if it was still going or not).

Granted i'm still fairly new to roleplay so i wont be really amazing at it, and my nervousness and inability to rejoin an rp after being gone for a few hours, or even just joining one does hinder my performance somewhat, but i'm trying to improve on that and get better so i'm hoping by throwing my hat into the ring, that it'll force me to participate and, if i have fun roleplaying, it'll hopefully open the door for more of them in the future.
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