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No rush, just wanted to check in with everyone we haven't heard from in a bit. If anyone needs anything clarified or wants to discuss plot-stuff, please let me know or drop a PM!


Sorry for the silence; I've been trying to think of a good idea for a while and have only just had the chance to start writing it up. I've got a good chunk of it done so hopefully I can get a WIP up tomorrow.
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No rush, just wanted to check in with everyone we haven't heard from in a bit. If anyone needs anything clarified or wants to discuss plot-stuff, please let me know or drop a PM!


I can't really get a good character going after mulling over some ideas during this weekend, so I'll withdraw. I appreciate checking in though! Hope it goes well for everyone!
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@Olive FontaineOne more thing I missed the first time through; your backstory has him falling at Kaidysium, but for plot-purposes none of the PCs actually died until the final battle at Port Hadrum, shortly after the Demon King shows up. So that's one more minor change to add in.
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Alright, slapping this down as a possible parentage connection, just to get things outta the way. Zeroth, chime in if you want.

Since Sherry is half-sisters with Estelle, and since Estelle is currently born between 1st Wife and Patriarch, that would necessitate her being associated the Patriarch.

In the meanwhile, Rowan and Ferrucio are half-brothers. Ferrucio himself is born from a non-Kaides and a wife in House Kaides, so for half-brother status to be maintained, they'd have to share a mother.

Rowan is 2 years older than Ferrucio, so thankfully, there aren't any funny not-twins hijinks going on, but he IS the same age as Sherry, whom Ferrucio was basically let into the House to support/serve, so they'd have to be something wonky. On the plus side, Sherry and Rowan both have similar colored hair, so maybe they can pull off the fraternal twins look.

In any case then, my thought is...

The Third Wife is of a more willful stock than the 1st and the 2nd, her defiance made more so due to how the Patriarch certainly treats every one of his wives as disappointing breeding stock more than anything else. Despite having gone through a painful labor to give birth to twins (Rowan and Sherry), the man was too busy "rousing the troops" (read: fucking his secretary mistress) to pay attention to his actual wife. This fed the brewing discontent and discomfort that had dwelt ever since she married into House Kaides, an inferiority complex and a sense of alienation manifesting through the simple pressure of having to bear a potent heir.

After all, the Patriarch's pedigree was overpowering.

It would be the fault of the wives then, for introduction 'weaker' blood into the House.

Whereas the 1st Wife and 2nd Wife coped in their own ways, the 3rd Wife became disillusioned with her marriage instead. It was through her family's own pedigree and her talents as a swordswoman that she was able to seize the Patriach's hand in marriage, even if two ranks below the others. What had she even seen in him to begin with then, beyond his title?

Seeking comfort, she sought the attention of another, and from an night of uncommon vulnerability and hurt, Ferrucio was born.

It was a mark of her infidelity, one that would be held over her head forever.

The only way to make it right then, would be to ensure that this bastard-child was good for something. Rowan looked to be an unruly beast, but Sherry held promise. What did it matter that she was rotten to the core? Ferrucio could become her shield and her servant, raised as the obedient little mongrel to his cruel but supremely-talented older sister, and so long as this situation could cause an Aura-Knight to have come from her blood, then it was all worth it.

It was not worth it.

Sherry fell from grace, to such a degree that the 3rd Wife would have killed her herself for becoming a deserter.

Rowan's ferocity never amounted to anything, less a knight and more a sacrificial pawn who simply didn't die, yet never seized glory.

Ferrucio became a Royal Guard, but at a time when the Royal Guard were nothing more than glorified meatshields.

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When Kaidisyum was invaded, the 3rd Wife lead the initial charge against the Frozen Heart's forces, burning as brightly as the setting sun.

As if to remind the world, and perhaps herself, that she had once been something more than disappointment.

Now one of you give your mom a name.
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I like this.

I'll add that up intil Sherry was, like, 14, they probably thought "She's a little devil brat but she'll grow out of it and hone her innate talent"

Neither of those things happened but by then it was too late
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Besides the family tree, I feel like I might soon need a flowchart of who did what to whom lmao. Also, I know our sister trio's mom (who is btw the 2nd wife not the first) is a redhead, but looking at the other kids, either Martenos is one too (or his parents) and/or he has a thing for redheads lol.
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Alright, slapping this down as a possible parentage connection, just to get things outta the way. Zeroth, chime in if you want.

Since Sherry is half-sisters with Estelle, and since Estelle is currently born between 1st Wife and Patriarch, that would necessitate her being associated the Patriarch.


Estelle, Ophelia, and Isana are all confirmed at this point as being born of the 2nd Wife. My suggestion was that Sherry and Vincent and possibly others were born of the 1st wife, though @Silver Carrot hasn't confirmed.

In the meanwhile, Rowan and Ferrucio are half-brothers. Ferrucio himself is born from a non-Kaides and a wife in House Kaides, so for half-brother status to be maintained, they'd have to share a mother.

Rowan is 2 years older than Ferrucio, so thankfully, there aren't any funny not-twins hijinks going on, but he IS the same age as Sherry, whom Ferrucio was basically let into the House to support/serve, so they'd have to be something wonky. On the plus side, Sherry and Rowan both have similar colored hair, so maybe they can pull off the fraternal twins look.


Rowan and Sherry could work as fraternal twins, if both players are good with that, but I must've missed when you guys sorted out Ferrucio and Rowan being half-brothers. I thought you were going to have Ferrucio's mother be one of the adult children of Deividas who came back to the family without the father being in the picture? If that's the case, then like you say they'd need to share a mother, but that would make it impossible for Rowan and Sherry to be twins. (When making the suggestions I did in the timeline update, I never assumed twins cause nobody intentionally made their characters strongly resemble each other or anything.)

The Third Wife is of a more willful stock than the 1st and the 2nd, her defiance made more so due to how the Patriarch certainly treats every one of his wives as disappointing breeding stock more than anything else. Despite having gone through a painful labor to give birth to twins (Rowan and Sherry), the man was too busy "rousing the troops" (read: fucking his secretary mistress) to pay attention to his actual wife.

I'm not good with this part cause it ascribes a lot more villainous traits to the Patriarch than he's intended to have. An NPC profile of him is up in the 0th Post of the CHAR tab, but the short of it is that he's a man from a prestigious bloodline known solely for its military prowess, living in a world where battling monstrous creatures is a common occurrence, at a time where cultural standards are by and large medieval with the handful of anachronisms one could expect for "rule of cool" in these types of stories.

EDIT: Apparently that 0th Post being "hidden" is not the same as minimizing it. It should be visible now, that's mah B dawg

He would've been under to pressure to marry as soon as possible, to sire multiple heirs, and to expand the family's power and influence in any of a multitude of ways. The 2nd Wife has been established at this point as being a skilled commoner that became a knight and caught the Patriarch's eye---while it's not set in stone, I think the strongest option is that the other 2 wives, especially the 1st, are high-status noblewomen. They could've been from Branch families, to "keep the bloodline strong," or they could've been from other families that would've made good mutual alliances for the Kaides. The Mistress could just as easily be from a noble family herself, the term "mistress" doesn't have to imply that she's a camp follower, prostitute, etc that he just picked up somewhere.

The man's seemingly cold, overly stoic, may have a Spartan warrior's aesthetic thing going on, etc, but all this talk of "breeding stock" leans too far in my opinion. He's not meant to be the BBEG of the story, though he'll play a somewhat antagonistic role in some cases. He's also not meant to be the "Big Good," either, but he "is what he is," that being a figure who must uphold numerous titles---loyal knight of the crown, head of a clan, leader of soldiers, father, and so forth.

Now, if the PCs who end up confirming their parentage as the 3rd Wife are also cool with it, I'm cool with her being more ambitious and willful or whatever. Maybe HER family forced her into this arranged marriage for the sake of trying to move up in the world, or maybe if there was some romance between her and the Patriarch she feels the flame's gone cold, or any number of reasons. Feeling pressured, and anxious that outsiders blame her and the other wives for the "Failed Generation" is definitely something I could see. So if you wanna change Ferrucio's parentage based on that, it's all good. If she takes part in the war effort and dies against one of the Demon Generals that's cool too.

As far as name suggestions, lol, I pretty much gave everything I had for SilverPaw's character.

Besides the family tree, I feel like I might soon need a flowchart of who did what to whom lmao. Also, I know our sister trio's mom (who is btw the 2nd wife not the first) is a redhead, but looking at the other kids, either Martenos is one too (or his parents) and/or he has a thing for redheads lol.


Regarding redheads, for ease of things given how far across the web the genes are spread, we'll say that there are other redheads in the Kaides line and the Patriarch has a type, lol XD
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@Zeroth Okay that makes sense. I'll get that fixed too!~
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Ah, Estelle went 2nd Wife? I was basing it off of Teyao’s tree, but I guess that was out of date.
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This is still a WIP but I think this is mostly done. I might add some more details about his action during the war, and I'm not sure if he would have unlocked his aura before the end.

Also, I honestly haven't been able to keep up with the convoluted family tree up to this point, so if the details of his parentage are wrong let me know.


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So are these parentages right?

Patriarch's 1st Wife
Sherry. Rowan, Vincent

Patriarch's 2nd Wife:
Estelle, Ophelia, Isana

Patriarch's 3rd Wife
Lucas

Patriarch's Mistress
Kaesos

An unnamed son of Deividas Kaides
Rodin

A second unnamed son of Deividas Kaides
Lucille, Eryx

Deividas's Kaides Daughter
Ferrucio

Deividas Kaides's youngest daughter (a different one to above?)
Mateo
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Okay, here is the lastest one:



Color coded the most confusing ones
Edit: Color coded all PCs and simplified it

So are these parentages right?

Dude you are amazing
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@Zeroth
There was talk in the Int Chek where Teyao put forth the idea that Rowan and Ferrucio could've been half-brothers.

I personally hadn't really settled on a whole parentage thing before that point, only that I wanted Ferrucio to be associated with the Kaides via the mother. That being said, I don't see how Rowan and Sherry couldn't both be twins AND have Rowan and Ferrucio (and by association Sherry) be half-siblings. They just share parentage via the mother's half. What's your thought process here?

And yeah, I didn't really think of the Patriarch was particularly villainous. A lot of it was from the 3rd Wife's own perspective, seeing how he DID end up marrying multiple wives, then picking up a mistress anyways, and finally be hardly at home (thus not attending to any of his kids or wives) while his heart gradually froze over from the disappointment that basically all of his kids turned out to be. Dude makes for a war hero, not husband material, is basically what I'm pointing out. And House Kaides itself, considering the whole ass deal with flagrant assassination attempts and bullying popping up amongst them, clearly has the sort of power struggle for the 'next' Patriarch's lineage, so it's kinda a shitty situation to be in for wives who can't birth capable heirs.

In any case though...

I like this.

I'll add that up intil Sherry was, like, 14, they probably thought "She's a little devil brat but she'll grow out of it and hone her innate talent"

Neither of those things happened but by then it was too late


So wait, is Sherry with the Third Wife or the Second Wife? Is she half-siblings with Ferrucio or naw?
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Yo! Did a thing, or at least am in the process of doing a thing, I am not really an artist but I think the concept work is funny:



Wonder if all can be identified easily, if not here are the anwers and some of the thought process behind the descicions


I may work on it later, this was just inspiration of a couple hours.
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-snip-


Sherry on the cross before Good Friday is some crazy work.

More seriously, very nice.
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I don't think I even wrote anywhere that Sherry was tied to a cross/pole and hoisted up for all to see in the final battle but that's exactly how I imagined it.
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Looks like Sherry is from the first wife.
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@King Cosmos What you've got is great, no issues here! Since his Physical Strength and Aura both reached 1st Rate, he definitely could've Awakened his Aura after the age of 21. Whether or not he developed an Aura Type, I'll leave up to you---while 1st Rate physical strength is definitely a requirement to Awaken Aura for the "overall physical enhancement" techniques, further developing Aura into one of the five (known) types is less dependent on just raw strength or "grinding" of skills. Pre-approved!

@Thunder999999@Teyao You two are awesome, many thanks! That "scene that happens when the beat drops during the anime-OP" is fire! XD

Everyone, the opener is pretty much done, I just have to do a few background things. If your character has been pre-approved and you're comfortable with established relationships, shared plot elements, etc, you may add your sheet to the Character Tab!
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The only thing my CS really needs is that I can't think of a good skill
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@Zeroth I'll let you figure out the lore stuff and abilities. I may or may not add a few war related events (no idea if it's feasible, but had in mind her doing sth like augmenting a whole fortification of some place and just creating a bloodbath despite monsters and demons swarming her at some point).

@OwO, @Rune_Alchemist Feel free to add in to this. As far as I'm concerned, she's a NPC shared between the four of us.
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