Altered Tundra

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@Altered Tundra I left some notes in your CS as a 'review' :)

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Overall, I really like your character. He has an interesting back story and his personality will no doubt clash with others in the RP. I'm interested to see how you handle that as a writer, and how you can develop Kalthar throughout. There is great opportunity just from what you've written to make him pretty epic in the RP.

More than happy to provide notes and thoughts on any other CS too, just shout :)

@Stormflyx

Much obliged, friend! Glad to see someone other than me liked Kalthar. :)

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@Inkarnate

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@Inkarnate shoulda made her ugly, then.

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Eyes, even!

@Dervish

10/10 would smash

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I was indeed beholding

@Greenie

Talk like that around her and I'm sure she'll happily behold your severed rectum. :P

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@Greenie
Beauty's in the eye of the beholder. :P

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You know what they say about beauty... It's in the eyes of the beholder. ^_^

@Greenie

Then the "beholder" must be as blind as Arya was when she betrayed the Faceless Men.

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@Not Fishing But not pretty.

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@Hekazu Who needs a bow/arrow when you got a big, fucking sword? :D

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@Hekazu@Greenie Kalthar, originally, was going to be a thief/archer, but I decided against it because I didn't want to be in the running with the other better archer/thief types. Plus, I couldn't make the concept work hahaha.