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Back when dinosaurs ruled the Earth, I got started with writing online on the Spore forums. Man, those were the days. We're talking like 12 years ago!

I've been here on and off for almost as long, and have GM'd a bunch of different things to varying success.

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@Sophrus

Certainly. The OP actually alludes to such.

...there are ways to use foul magic to twist and corrupt life to make new breeds of monstrous creatures, ways to raise the dead, ways to conjure demons and monsters from other realms.
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@Forett

Dead Cruiser is correct.
Would a brutal and morally grey/neutral character be acceptable?


Certainly, especially in a rogue being. Scions would probably be more inherently malicious, but even they needn't be pure evil.
Does anybody have any intentions or plans to have a post that directly features Eagoth? I've been thinking about eventually having one where Faustus goes to speak with him (this would be a while down the line for sure, as Faustus is slated to stop by Comiriom on his way to Necron and get engaged in this gem plotline with Ghural first, and then that probably will embroil him in more posts between Rixis' minion and the elf rebels depending upon what happens to the gem).

But after this gem plotline is resolved, or maybe as a part of it, I think it might be neat for Faustus to see Eagoth. Unless group consensus is that we want to leave him as a more enigmatic figure that's never directly shown?
Glad to see some more new faces, and my old pal Vec! Welcome all.

I think I see enough interest to justify getting this started, so over the next few days I'll get a Discord server going and then put together an OOC with expanded information, some sort of map of Outremer, etc. I'll try to be quick about that so that we hopefully don't lose too much momentum.

Interested. Would also be open to playing an antagonist on the side of the Exalted One.


Oraculum and I did briefly discuss what we'd say if somebody wanted to be a 'good guy'. I don't think we came to a hard enough conclusion to specifically make a rule, but both of us did somewhat oppose the idea because we're aiming for a certain theme and because we don't want to turn this into a factional sort of RP where half of the participants are on Team Exalted One and the other half Team Chernobog. Still, it's something I'd be willing to at least discuss with you a little later down the line. For now though I'll just say that if this were to happen, my preference would be you start with a scion or rogue being and then maybe later on you could introduce another character as an 'antagonist' as you suggest.
Welcome and hello all! Thanks for stopping by and indicating interest, be it tentative or solid.

I think that I'll be watching this check until at least tomorrow before deciding whether to go forward with the OOC.


The Black Prophecy


In the dawn of days, there was a great war of godly scale that shook the whole of Outremer. On one side there fought the forces of the untamed wilds, of chaos and evil: wyrms and krakens, giants and demons, warlocks and beasts of the moon, unspeakable and forgotten things. All of these monsters, great and small, bowed at the feet of Chernobog, the Black God. He inhaled courage and breathed out despair, devoured hope and begat only strife and misery, for his wont was nothing less than the complete destruction of mankind and ruination of the world.

To oppose him there were men. Brave and strong men, with bronze in their hands and the White God ever at their head and in their hearts. Aye, in those days the Exalted walked amongst men, and so it was that good triumphed over evil -- but barely, and with great cost. The Chernobog’s evil was rooted too deep in the world for him to be truly killed, so his body was hacked into at least a dozen pieces that were strewn across Outremer in the darkest of hidest places. Even still, the Black God’s memory and his corruption persist.

The name Chernobog is now all but forgotten by all save the most insidious of heretics and witches, being so profane that its very utterance is forbidden, just as the Exalted’s own name is too sacred for any but the most devout of priests to know. But legends still remind men of what their ancient enemy was, of all his crimes: as the Chernobog was at last smote down, he vowed eternal vengeance and threw a profane curse upon the land. His last rancid breath brought rot into the air and cursed the land with blights and diseases forevermore, and the rivers of his black blood rolled across the land and poisoned the Earth just as his hundred claws sank into her and grievously her, the hatred and thrumming of his heart he cast into the seas that it might ever stir storms. And he finally promised that one day, his own spawn, his greatest and most monstrous servants, and those mortals that lusted for his power would rise; that they would come as maggots to rot, and so complete his foul legacy.

And you are one of those that intend to fulfill this Black Prophecy.




RP Purpose and Mechanics


This RP flouts the usual tradition of stories where we see from the point of view of the good guys. Here we have an RP where instead of the questing knight, the humble peasant turned hero, or the wizened wizard, you are some fell warlord, monstrous beast, or other dark power. Your characters might only aspire to have a small realm and bastion of their own or they might seek nothing less than the utter annihilation of mankind; they might be willing to tolerate or even ally with the other various scions and rogue beings, or they might want to cast down all their bastard siblings and reign uncontested as the second Chernobog. That’s all up to you.

As the introduction alludes to, there are two general roles that you might fulfill: that of a scion of the old Chernobog, or that of some sort of rogue being. You may have one character of each type if you’d like; however, if you do that then as a general rule your rogue being should not align with or serve your scion. The point of having one of each would be to allow you to interact with more people and more characters, and having both your rogue being and scion together all the time defeats the purpose of that.

Scions would be the most innately powerful of the two categories, their nature as the Chernobog’s spawn making them something like demigods. They would more like than not be remembered in some form in the legends of old, for they would have all served in the Chernobog’s armies and doubtless committed great crimes of their own, and for their part, they would have been slain or banished to some other plane or imprisoned by the Exalted One and his followers. Having only just now been resurrected or summoned or broken free as the case may be, a scion will be returning to a somewhat unfamiliar world where steel has replaced bronze and the men are much more numerous than they once were, even as the savage beings and monsters have diminished. Still, a scion should be able to use their dark powers to raise a new army easily enough. Perhaps the pitiful remnants of the Chernobog’s old horde could be rallied, or some of the weak-willed humans subjugated by sword or by poisoned word and manipulation. And failing that, there are ways to use foul magic to twist and corrupt life to make new breeds of monstrous creatures, ways to raise the dead, ways to conjure demons and monsters from other realms. A true heir of Chernobog would find a way.



The second category is more broad and flexible. Rogue beings could take many forms and vary quite greatly in power level -- anything from an ancient vampire to a dragon can fall under the realm of possibility. And while a rogue being could be some ancient monster that’s been around since the dawn of time and served under the Chernobog, it could also just be some humble orcish chieftain or some evil-hearted human sorcerer. While rogue beings can be powerful, their magical might is not so great as that of the scions. It would be harder for them to bring down the realms of men by themselves, to raise an army, or to carve out an empire of their own. For those reasons a rogue being might do well to align with a scion for protection and mutual benefit, but some might choose to stay rogue -- the path is yours to choose.

This would be a mostly sandbox-style RP where we give all participants a lot of leeway to worldbuild and fill in the empty spaces on the map, either by canonizing smaller settlements and such or expanding upon the nature of larger ones. We GMs do not need to control the human opposition along every inch of the way; you can have your character sack a village or slay some band of knights without involving us in the post, but if your intention is to topple a kingdom or conquer some major city then please do consult us. We reserve the right to throw a metaphorical monkey wrench into your operations, to keep things from getting complacent. You can't expect to rampage across the world with nothing ever going wrong, now can you?

Outremer


Though sailors speak of queer and exotic lands beyond the seas, the scope of this RP is limited to the land of Outremer. It is a quite isolated (both geographically and politically) island of a size comparable to that of Great Britain. In present times Outremer is politically fractured into many realms of petty-kings and dukes, but was once unified under a single kingdom for many centuries following the Chernobog’s defeat. In those times of unity, the last of the great monsters and wyrms were hunted down and either vanquished or driven into the deepest lairs and hiding places, and his more organized and numerous followers like the ogres and goblins were diminished and driven into hiding if not extinction. There was a ‘common tongue’ universally spoken across Outremer and it is the root of all modern languages, though the centuries have of course bastardized certain regional dialects to the point that they have grown very distinct, and are oft only barely intelligible by speakers of other heavily changed dialects.

Despite its small size, the island’s climate is quite varied. Though much of the coastline remains temperate, the placement of mountain ranges has created an arid region in the south and a cold highland in the north.

The land has been mostly tamed, with true wilderness being the exception rather than the norm throughout much of the island and most of the arable land being farmed. Only a few true wilds remain in some of the most rugged, inhospitable, and remote locations; in such places there might still be great beasts and maybe even some goblins or other wretched descendants of the forces that once served in the Chernobog’s vast hosts.

Credits and References


This would be a continuation of sorts of some old RPs based upon a computer game called Dungeon Keepers. Over 10 years ago the first of them started on the now-defunct Spore Forums, and afterward @Lugubrious@BBeast and myself brought them to the Oldguild and then here. This is the most recent of those old RPs, and this was a spinoff that I made later.

The cool picture at the very top was artwork commissioned by a friend of mine who is developing a new computer game with a theme very similar to this RP, or the old Dungeon Keeper games from the 90s. So thanks to him for letting me use his picture, and if you’d be interested in seeing his project and following its progress then you can check out his Discord server here.

Interested in Joining?


Invested enough to join an RP like this? Great! Let us (myself and @Oraculum will be the GMs) know by posting here. If this interest check can garner substantial interest, an OOC thread will follow and expand upon this; after that, we would be creating a Discord server for this and inviting those who want to apply, in order to discuss their early plans for characters and plots. This would be as much to hopefully see that everyone is ready to get active once the IC begins (rather than hitting the early block of not knowing what to start with and never posting) as it would be to ensure character ideas and the applicants’ writing skill/commitment level seem to be where we’d like them to be.
In the Shadow of the Kronburg

A post by Cyclone, Lauder, Oraculum


It’s the Bloodhammer.

The realization made Faustus stiffen, but of course he never displayed such emotion. ‘Masks beneath the masks,’ his mind reminded him. That was the only way of things. Still, even a strong will and a disciplined mind could struggle to overcome some terrors. For a few moments it felt as though the revenant’s heart was pounding, though of course it was not, and had not, for a long long time. That was just a sort of phantom sensation, probably akin to how maimed men had sometimes claimed to feel aches in their lost limbs.

As the pounding of hooves grew louder with the horsemens’ rapid approach, his own posse watched and answered with deafening silence. Faustus banished the idle and useless thoughts of cripples and lost limbs and other things, his mind now racing to recall all that he knew of this crazed revenant major. He ruled some bleak foothills and highlands from some fortress that he’d ruled in life, one of the last to have fallen. And his was a quiet and solitary nature, the revenant hardly ever leaving his keep save to go where Eagoth’s wars called. His realm produced little if anything, and yet somehow he’d retained his title, his lands, his head, and his sizable army (though it grew ever more ragged with the passage of time and his lack of income or attention to its upkeep, to hear the tales). All of those musings were of course overshadowed by the Whisperer’s recollection of all the countless ghouls, revenants minor, and even one or two revenants major that had gone missing in the country about his lands, or on visits to his keep. And even despite the open secret that this was a cruel, wasteful, and indulgent lord who cared little for the Pax Mortis and even less for his fellows in servitude of the Great Necromancer, again he retained his title, his lands, his head, and his army.

Perhaps it was the army and that formidable keep of his that enabled him to get away with such; smoking him out of his castle would certainly not be easy. But Faustus suspected that the Bloodhammer’s transgressions were suffered only because of the terror that he and his tale gave to the undead and the living alike. Every king or emperor needed his beasts of war, and this Bloodhammer had to be among the greatest of beasts.

And suddenly the pounding of hooves came to a stop, and the Bloodhammer and his outriders came to a halt just a few yards from Faustus, Razzak, and the entourage of caravan guards and porters. There was a pregnant pause as the giant lord revenant remained seated atop his mount, dead eyes peering through the slits of a greathelm to rest upon Faustus. The Merchant’s swollen body still looked small and childlike before the bulk of that giant, but he met the lord revenant’s gaze with no sign of fear.

“Lord Bjan,” he finally called out in greeting, “I had not expected to chance upon you on the road.”

In one motion, the Bloodhammer raised an arm, and for a moment it seemed as though he was about to strike. But then his hand grasped the crown of his helm and tore it away. The face underneath revealed why Bjan was so feared: even through his deathly grey countenance, a barely restrained fury shone through, a mad gleam that appeared to threaten to be always on the point of erupting into a storm of savage, gratuitous violence.

“No, you would not think of meeting me on my road, across my fields, in my domain, would you?” The towering brute attempted a mocking sneer, but his ragged lips, splintered yellow teeth and heavy jaw, still draped with the tattered, mouldy remains of what had once been a great beard, turned it into a beastly snarl. He lowered a hand from the reins of the creature he rode - a great, ghastly amalgamation of human and horse from the flesh-pits of Comiriom, for no ordinary steed, not even undead, could bear his swollen cadaverous bulk - and lifted a massive warhammer from a holster by his leg. The weapon looked old and weathered, scarred by a thousand blows, and rumour had it that it was ever the same one that had earned Bjan his name many decades ago. It certainly seemed venerable enough for that to be true, though no less menacing for its age.

“I know what you truly expected - to crawl by without giving me my due.” The horsemen behind him drew closer. They were ghouls clad in grimy, yet still robust armour that had clearly once come from a good forge, wielding spears and spiked maces. Their worm-eaten, unfeeling eyes dully stared at the hammer’s head, as if expecting a signal. “But you are not as wily as you think yourself. Speak, then, you flea - how do the living do battle these days? What do they wield in their puny blooded hands?”

A robber baron indeed, the Broker found himself musing to himself, and not very happily.

Faustus had always possessed a quick mind and plenty of wit, but before he could even speak his answer and try some clever way to defuse the confrontation, that strange unbound ghoul that he’d encountered just before the Bloodhammer’s arrival decided to step forth.

“I do not believe he owes you any dues,” came the hallowed voice of Razzak, having stood silent as the two greeted each other with displeasure. The ghoul stared down the Bloodhammer with mild contempt as it seemed that empty threats came about to intimidate Faustus for coming to the lands. No emotion could be conveyed as the skeleton watched the Bloodhammer and his entourage of brutes, noting their weapons and armor to not be as old as his own. Yet, Razzak stood his ground, unmoving from his spot on the road and very clearly lacking fear, as he spoke again, “I believe it is unbecoming of someone of your stature to coerce a merchant in this way. You are owed nothing upon this road.”

“Indeed!” Bjan’s semblance of a grin widened, baring most of his teeth in an outright wolfish grimace. His voice had dropped to a menacing growl. He gave a curt wave with his weapon, and the dead riders drew back again, with not a single superfluous motion. Faustus’ own guards remained eerily statuesque the entire time, the Broker observing with tacit interest. In a vault, the giant was off the back of his steed, landing on his feet with a heavy thud that stirred a small cloud of pale desiccated dirt from the ruined road.

“If I cared about the thoughts of every worm like you I would have rotted away in a ditch long ago,” he advanced towards the convoy, raising his hammer again - this time, it seemed, in earnest. “Pedlar, make way! I have missed the feeling of smashing skulls!”

Faustus had of course already stepped back and out of the way of the quarreling two; though not ingracious to Razzak’s protest, he certainly was not the type to stick his own neck out, and he had every expectation that this strange ghoul was about to meet a quick and grisly end. But he was wrong.

The skeleton began advancing towards the hulking mass of rotted flesh and armor, planning to give the Bjan the respect of meeting halfway. Razzak, however, kept silent as he approached and kept his blade ready for attack, raising his shield. Bits of bluish-green fell away from the decrepit bronze armor as the skeleton continued his stride, soon breaking into a jog and quickly a sprint, as Razzak surged towards Bjan. The old blade steadied itself against the raised shield, the sounds of Razzak’s boots against the ground and the shifting of armor as he moved filled the air. It was in the moment that the old, decayed corpse remembered how much he had longed to hear the sound again.

Facing him, the Bloodhammer hastened his own pace. In a single stride, he had gained speed, propelling himself ahead with no sound but the trample of his feet and the faint rattling of his armour. As he began to draw near to his opponent, he abruptly veered to the side, the length of his step bringing him beyond the paved road in a moment. In the same motion, he swung his immense hammer sideways, swiftly bringing it towards Razzak’s flank.

Razzak pivoted in the moment, quickly shifting out of range of the Bloodhammer’s attack, although just barely enough to avoid some of his bones crushed by the assault. Yet, the skeleton would not allow the potential blow to go without consequence as Razzak surged forward and thrust his sword forwards, aimed for a joint in the Bloodhammer’s armor, the point connecting the Revenant’s hammering arm to his body.

A flash of surprise passed across Bjan’s features as his adversary’s unexpectedly swift blade darted between his limbs and scraped upon the edge of his armour’s plates, biting into the dead flesh beneath. The wound would have been a debilitatingly painful one for a living body, but even in life the Breaker had never quailed under the sting of swords; in death, it was only the display of skill from what had seemed to be a nameless ghoul among thousands that gave him an instant’s pause. The already rigid muscle in his shoulder stiffened further, and the giant reached to grasp Razzak’s lunging arm with his free hand.

There was nowhere Razzak could retreat to without abandoning his sword within the arm of Bjan, however, that would leave the skeleton without a weapon and he was hardly as fast as he was in life. Still, the decrepit duelist pulled his sword back, attempting to make sure that the Bloodhammer could not grab his arm. Razzak, however, could not get free in time and Bjan’s cold grip went around the arm of the ghoul, although not without resistance as Razzak began to hammer away at Bjan’s forearm with the edge of his shield. To little avail, it seemed, for the brute’s armoured grip was implacable - until a fortuitous blow struck straight into the concavity of his elbow. Dead flesh twitched under laws it had not quite wholly left behind, and the grasp briefly loosened.

Bjan’s hammer-arm was now free of its rigour, however, and the great maul came swinging down towards Razzak’s skull as the huge warrior pressed ahead.

The sound of a metal clang ran through the air as Bjan’s hammer-arm collided with Razzak’s shield, and with the loosened grip the skeleton wretched his sword-arm free and backed up as quickly as he could. His shield had partially caved at the site of where the Bloodhammer had met the shield, surely meaning that Razzak would have met his end had he not blocked the blow. Yet, such thoughts were not present in the undead’s mind as he readied himself once more, taking up a defensive posture.

Bjan, however, did not push further. Lowering his hammer, he bared his teeth in another sneer, which seemed this time to be fraught with satisfaction rather than ire.

“It has been more years than I care to count since anyone gave me as much as a spit of a fight,” he rumbled, with a shade of joviality brushing past the frost of his voice, “Wherever this leech -” he motioned to Faustus “- dug you up from, he got a good bargain of it. A scar has always been a worthy tax under the Kronburg.”

He turned back, and in a few strides he had rejoined his steed, which he leapt astride with little regard for all his bulk must have weighted.

“Pass as you will,” he pointed his hammer further ahead down the road, “But I would yet hear of the arms of the living. Each of us should be ready to crush them when we march the next time.”

If Faustus had been taken aback by the turn of events, his posture betrayed nothing. Calm as a pond’s still waters, he flicked a finger toward one of his own servants to call it forth, then bid it, ”Bring forth one of the new weapons for the good lord revenant to witness.”

Though he’d never turned from Bloodhammer, only then did he deign to answer back to Bjan directly. ”A development has been made in the Most Serene Republic of Phasto: the workshop of some ingenious inventor designed a rapid-firing crossbow. I would know little of its implications, of course, but my suspicion is that it may promise to revolutionize sieges and mayhaps war altogether; it is easy to see knights in heavy armor becoming a thing of the past when they could be slain in scores by just a few unwashed peasants bearing such weapons. But my work was merely to obtain specimens to present to our most talented engineers in Necron that they can in turn replicate the technology for ourselves. Ah, here is an example of the device.”

One of the porters presented a crossbow that managed to look bulky and queer despite its ornate decorations and exquisitely fresh woodwork. True to the Whisperer’s word, it seemed to hold many a quarrel inside, and reloading was as fast and easy as flicking some lever between each pull of the trigger.

”I would daresay that the tactics and spirit of the mainlanders might be of more interest to your ears. The noose they’ve wrapped about Leria’s neck is loosening; with each passing year, some realms grow more dubious of the need for this blockade, or they wonder if they might spare some of their own coin by reducing their commitments and trusting in their supposed allies to pick up the slack. Indeed, old rivalries are starting to remerge with the lack of pressure that we have been putting forth, and the alliance of the living begins to slowly fracture. There’s already some infighting. If the Great Necromancer willed it, I’m sure that I could heap lard unto the fire and ensure that even more comes about.”

“If they start biting each other’s throats, we might finally have our chance to ride south, and the sooner that happens the better!” The Bloodhammer clenched a fist, as though the impatience to wade into combat with the southrons had been devouring him then and there - which might as well have been the case. “I tire of rotting in my halls like a maggot. If you can stoke those flames and sway the Necromancer to hasten our war, you will be well rewarded the moment I taste warm blood again.”

The skeleton stepped forwards, looking at the contraption with an unshifting look that would give the same look every skeletal face would bear, indifference. Yet, as Razzak stared at it, it was clear that he was interested in the device in some sort of capacity, whether it was greatly or a mild thought was something that could not be outwardly told. Then, the duelist looked between Faustus and Bjan in a gesture that was far clearer to tell, even without the necessary facial tissue.

“What is a crossbow?” Razzak inquired in a hallowed voice of genuine confusion.

It was easy to forget that some of these ghouls had been roused from graves dug hundreds or even thousands of years ago, or else forgotten much of what they had known in life. Razzak’s tarnished bronze arms of course said that it was the former, which made Faustus more inclined to answer. Trying to reteach a ghoul with a rotted mind all that it had once known was oft like trying to fill a cracked jug full of water again. ”You know what a simple bow is, I would presume? The crossbow has much the same purpose. It is a more complicated weapon to be sure, but with the added complexity comes some advantages.”

The revenant minor snatched the thing from the hands of the wretched porter that had brought it forward, then showed Razzak the trigger. ”It can fire with greater power than most bows, enabling it to pierce superior armor, and from a greater range at that. You can see that once the bolt is loaded, it can be indefinitely kept at the ready as well, whereas a bowman can hardly keep a strong longbow drawn for more than a few seconds. Having the weapon remain primed proves useful for keeping a steady aim. And this rapid-fire iteration can reload quickly from the bolts kept inside. A trained archer can of course maintain a similar rate of fire and perhaps even comparable accuracy, though this weapon nonetheless has all the advantages of crossbows without the normal drawback of a slow and cumbersome reloading process.”

Faustus demonstrated by shooting a quick three bolts off at some nearby hillside.

Razzak watched the bolts trail into the distance before turning back to Faustus, almost seeming to be in shock at the display, going so far as to take a step back. The ghoul looked at the contraption, drawing his sword once more as if the machine threatened his very fabric of existence. However, as the skeleton had just finished defending Faustus, he did not lash out immediately instead exclaiming, “That is an affront to all honor! Destroy it! Throw it the fires!”

“It’s a weapon for weaklings and cowards,” Bjan grunted dismissively from the top of his steed, baring his teeth in visible disgust, “But if the living would turn to this, let them! True men are only tempered by battle. The more they lean on these toys, the more watery will their blood become, and when we will come for them only a filthy rabble will be left to face us. The warriors among us remain as strong as the day we fell on the field. No effete trinket will save them from us.”

The poshly garbed caravaneer had little more than an ambivalent shrug in reaction to their disdain, but he did object to destroying his prized trinket. Obtaining the thing hadn’t been easy. ”A mere curiosity for the engineers to look over. Perhaps they or their masters will dismiss it as nothing and cast it into some fire, but it is not for you or I to do such a thing.”

“Have the living really gone so low as to resort to these… things?” Razzak asked, mostly to himself as he continued to look at the crossbow.
A three-person collab between myself, Oraculum, and Lauder is hopefully coming out Soon™.
@Jeddaven

Right -- as of the end of his latest post, Faustus is on the road with Razzak and they are currently about to be engaged by Bloodhammer. After that's done with, Faustus is supposed to be moving up to Necron, and with Comirion next door it's likely that Faustus will then be able to get the gemstone from Ghural in short order. So on this current trajectory that's probably at least two posts, maybe even three, before Faustus would be in possession of the gemstone and in a position to do something with it, just so you know where we stand with that.

Afterward Faustus could indeed encounter Arane and perhaps she could come into possession of it, but you may want to consider seeing Rixis first because I imagine you could get that ball rolling a little bit faster.
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