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@Darth Shadow Accepted.

@Harlequ Of course.
@Renny Right now I'm still stumped about what to do with Momo. He's honestly become kind of a chore to write for. I almost wish I could scrap him and go back to the drawing board but I know I can't.
@Double May I ask what is the time of the Rp centered around? Like Peter Pan was firstly introduced during 1900s, but the Snow White was firstly known by the Grimm tales in 1812.


When the Fairy Tales were written in real life is completely irrelevant. This is an original setting where all those tales and characters are real, it's that simple.
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You could just have him speak normal.

I've already established him using Buu speak. It would be weird to suddenly change that for no reason.

@Double have Momo absorb an English professor and gain the ability of good grammar.

Momo doesn't know about the absorption ability. At the time I figured it would keep him from just absorbing all our enemies away and becoming stupidly OP in the process.

@Double Have him run off with Wain after the Raditz arc, and they can both come back as villains.

If Wain presents a good reason for him to do so... that might actually be tempting. I take it you're not planning to use Wain for much longer either?
I realize I need to post, but... ugh writing Momo's dialogue gives me migraines.
Yup, fight is a clusterfuck alright, and the fact that everything at the dojo isn't even happening at the same time anymore is only making things worse. Where's the cohesion, here? Instead we may as well have all the matches going on in their own self-contained universes! What if Momo got knocked to the ground, putting him right outside the Dojo? All the "DBZ time" crap would just go completely FUBAR, wouldn't it? This is what happens when you don't make sure everything that happens is happening during the same period of time. Your continuity becomes a house of cards just waiting to topple.

*sigh*

I'm sorry, I'm sorry. Feel like crap today and that's souring my mood. Also kinda lamenting my character choices quite a bit. I thought Momo would be fun to write, with the childish Buu personality and the cartoonish fighting physics. Turns out it's actually the exact opposite. You know how hard it is to write dialogue using the Buu Speech? Or how surprisingly hard it is to think of and describe the physics of a Majin's body? None of this is helped by the fact that Momo's main character arc can't actually go anywhere until Buu eventually decides to show up way down the line. Until then he's stuck in character development limbo where he won't have any real relevance until long after we all stop caring about it.
@King Cosmos This was one of the reasons why I suggested bringing in Saibamen.
@Rune_Alchemist Oh Rolfe's going to absolutely love this one. Might want to expect a heaping helping of humble pie at some point. Accepted.
@OGSG So... is Deathryuger (or at least the suit) available? Because that was my absolute favorite suit from the Sentai and I'm still bitter that Dino Charge just completely ignored it.
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